The Starlit Promise

A young star learns her father must aid in Nightmare Moon's escape...

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Southpaw

Southpaw #1 · Nov 18th, 2018 · 3 · ·

Beautifully done, and very sweet. I love this not alternate but adjacent reality of the stars.

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #2 · Nov 18th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Very nice.

I love life

I love life #3 · Nov 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

beautiful a fabulous work of art

Meridian Prime

Meridian Prime #4 · Nov 23rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Oh wow. Got to this late, but this is an incredibly original take on the stars, and a beautiful story.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #5 · Dec 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

A fascinating concept and a surprisingly small-scale story of father and daughter amid the thoughts of apocalypse. I love how you fill the night sky with both wonders and horrors. I'd love to see Vega meet Luna after the latter gets harmonized. Indeed, Luna's reunion with the stars seems like a fantastic story in general.

Thank you for a most intriguing idea.

Bad Horse

Bad Horse #6 · Mar 13th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Interesting offworldbuilding!

I think these are my favorite lines:

Together, father and daughter shone in the night. They glowed so brightly that every waking pony in Equestria saw them, and everypony who was already fast asleep dreamed of them.

The Cloptimist

The Cloptimist #7 · Jul 10th, 2019 · 1 · ·

In case you didn't already see, this story got a (very well earned) five star review over on Louder Yay!

Loganberry

Loganberry #8 · Jul 15th, 2019 · 3 · ·

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I was just coming over here to point to it, so thank you!

Yes indeed. I absolutely loved this story, especially its world-building. Here's the full review, if you're interested.

Lucky Dreams

Lucky Dreams #9 · Aug 19th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Gosh, I'm useless sometimes. I read this review weeks ago, and it totally turned around what until that point had been a thoroughly awful day... but then I forgot to thank you for it

Anyway, here's a very belated thank you. I feel this is one of my stronger stories on fimfic, so it makes me really happy when people say they enjoyed it

Loganberry

Loganberry #10 · Aug 19th, 2019 · 4 · ·

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You're very welcome. The story is wonderful, both in the sense of its being excellent and in the sense of its being full of wonder. I'm delighted to hear that I played a small part in brightening an unhappy day.

Loganberry