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Little Rainbow Dash is loyal to one pony and one pony only: herself. It's a simple system, and it gets her through the days. But that all changes one stormy summer afternoon at flight camp, when another pegasus blunders into her life--a pegasus with whom she shares nothing in common.
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Why are there still no comments? This story is amazing.
D'AWWW
I was thinking the same thing, Anon ^. . . .
Maybe there's so many chapters people just posted their comments later on?. . .
D'aaaaawwwwwwww
Fluttershy imitating Rainbow Dash is so adorable!
Ahahahaha! It almost got sexual with the oil on wings thing, and I was all like
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and then sorta like "Darn. . ." 
And then it wasn't and I was sorta like "Close one"
Damn. . . . Does this really only have 40 views?
Is that legal for a story of this magnitude of awesomeness?
56067 I can't agree any more.
. I legitimately don't know how this didn't get more views or a feature on the slideshowy thingy up top. . . . 
CouchCrusader, feel proud of this story. I can tell you put tons of effort into it and it turned out awesome
But even if that's dissapointing, views aren't everything.
This was amazing, and know that you made my life that much better. Don't let the stupid views discourage you, you write really well. I'll be following you, even if you don't have legions of fans like some other people! ~YAY~
Nice Avatar reference! I almost didn't notice it, seriously... "MY CABBAGES!!!!'
Aw shucks, guys. The views aren't what's important to me or anything. If you feel like this story needs attention, feel free to tell your friends about it. Other than that, though, I basically wrote this piece for myself and a couple of friends, and they're all the people I was aiming to satisfy. Everyone else's approval is just icing on the cake.
That said, I'm really honored by the positive response this story's been getting so far. It's also published on EqD if you want to check it out there, too: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/12/story-wingmares.html
Hopefully I'll get around to writing another story once finals stop massaging my face into a pile of broken glass.
Thank you for reading.
Awesome fic! I really liked how you elaborated on how Flutteryshy and Rainbow Dash became friends.
I enjoyed every Word! Very well written.
Dammit, now I want a Fluttershy massage.
Nice. Its not as romantic as most other romance fics but its very good anyway...
Wow. Your plot and characterization: A+
Your view count: why so underrated?
Your execution? Approaching perfect. Are you willing to revise any more?
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I'm always interested in improving my writing. If you have suggestions, I'd love to hear them! And like I said above, views don't matter to me, but feel free to tell your friends about this story if you'd like.
when i read the avatar refrince i couldn't stop laughing for about a minute
>>Mondoblasto
i think everypony wants a Fluttershy massage
you, yes you, you should write more characterization stories.... this one was awesome
keep up the great writing
I thoroughly enjoyed the read and I thought it was extremely well written! I hope that you write another story sometime!
There were a few places where it wasn't clear what was happening, but maybe that's just me. All in all, this was an amazing story and I loved every minute of it!
Poor cabbage man.
Oh man, that's beautiful. You must write more. I can't believe this isn't more popular. I really love this story, considering Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are my favorite characters, I'm surprised I didn't find this earlier. Good job.
First pony fan fiction I ever read, and I made a great choice in choosing this one! I'm currently re-reading it via Kindle.
Seriously amazing story. I love it so much.
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Oh wow. Of all the amazing stories out there to read first, you picked mine? I can't even express how happy and humbled I am by your comment there. Thank you so much for reading! I know you'll find tons of other stories out there you'll love better than mine, anyway XD
This is a damn good story.
That is all have to say.
25 comments? Hmmm.......... LOL nope! 26 naow. Seee ya>>338692
Of all the fanfiction I have read, this story is my absolute favourite. The scene with Fluttershy colouring her hair is the sweetest, most adorably awesome scene I've ever read. I love it, and just wanted to let everyone (especially the author) know,
Wow. That's all I can really say to describe this fic. It was absolutely amazing.
Read this story in one go. Loved every second of it
Zero comments?! Hopefully being in the feature box will fix that. This is a great piece of headcanon! Liked, Fav'd, Watched
So many stories in my "read later list" ...Why did you have to add another?!
Oh well... I'll get through it all.... Someday.
....
I can't find any words to describe exactly how awesome this story is... So I'll just go ahead and say you deserve an award or something for this story.
56083 Maybe.. most likely on the last chapter
This and Via Equestria are among my absolute favourite ponyfics. I find it a little disheartening that they seem so underappreciated.
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It's left everypony speechless.
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Haha
Yes.
Loved it all! Very cute!!
558548Thank you so much! That scene was a lot of fun to write -- and I'm floored that you like this story enough to consider it your favorite
560804Don't worry 'bout saying anything more. It's more than enough that you read through it all XD
627625Considering how precious folks' time seems lately, hearing you finish it in one sitting's really amazing. Thanks for your time!
628029It's a small dream of mine to invade other folks' headcanons with my own. Won't lie.
628214Take your time.
628288Aw, shucks! I appreciate it.
628376As I told edifyingedicts up there, I'm on the moon that you like my stories that much. Via Equestria 3's on its way soon, hopefully!
629246Thank you!
Hi! Hey, let's have a "This story is in the Featured box party!
WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON MY COMPUTER?
I'm typing a comment! I've invited him to a party!
This is the tenth party that you've sent invitations via comment at, and you've only been on my computer for two DAYS!
So?
Or is it a she? *looks at computer* Hey look! 100 likes! Let's have a "100 likes for 'Wingmares' Party"
That makes it eleven parties.
I've not read any other beginning stories, but this could easily have been fully canon. Very great job, loved every minute of it.
630248Holy cow, I have 100--
... I'll be back. Let me find air, first.
630293Hey, I'll take that. Thank you for reading!
I remember reading this fanfic when it was posted on EqD, it was the first ponyfic I ever read and I loved it and it still remains one of my all time
favorite fics.
630382 you are welcome, just keep writing more, and you'll have a permanent fan.
This was a very nice, very cute story. Well played
First of all I would like to say that I have read this story before on EQD. That being said this story is well worth a second read and that's saying something coming from somebody who can't stand rereading something they've read previously. This story is 100% awesome and I do love it so. I'm glad to see it here on FiMFiction.
634274 Thanks a bunch! :D
638345 I'm thrilled to hear that! Yeah, I'm always surprised by how many people come back to re-read this story. Thanks so much for coming back!
639376 Wow, thanks! I definitely indulged myself while writing that scene.
If you want to see a massage done RIGHT, though, head on over to Pain in the Tail. Nightbreak's pacing and description within that story are fantastic.
My favorite part of this story was the bullies. Not because they were at all likable, but because they were written perfectly. They act exactly how real bullies act, and receive the same amount of punishment for their actions (none).
Just read this one for the first time. Love it.
This is gonna be
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I wish I could describe things as well as the author. When I write a description it always comes out very clinical
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My caba..oh never mind!