• Published 12th Mar 2018
  • 6,716 Views, 23 Comments

On the Study and Application of Advanced Carnal Magic - Journeyman



Twilight brings Trixie and Starlight to the Everfree castle and chances upon an old book. Many secrets lay across its pages, none of them appropriate for Spike to see. One mare is more than willing to test the spells out. For science, of course.

Comments ( 18 )

I am a simple man.

I see StarTrixSparkle, I instafave.

This was excellent. Perfect blend of cute and smutty.

Why limit yourself to shipping a single pair of ponies? The more, the merrier I say. :twilightsmile: They are a herd species, after all.

nice work on all 3 chapters.

Is there any chance of you writing any more stories in this universe??
Great work!

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When writing them together, I tried to keep in mind, as stereotypical as it may be, catholic school girls in a dorm together. They're all just a bunch of nerds and like to... experiment a little. I know the common archetype is o have opposites attract and compliment each other, but I thought the three of them together did the same thing. Trixie's bitchiness and laid back attitude, Starlight's ambition and eagerness, and Twilight's knowledge and authoritarian nature, all together making a happily pregnant mare family.

I have no idea how gender pronouns would work when their kids are born.

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This particular story was a commission. As for myself, I don't know what else to do beyond what I've written here. I am very fond of showing children when pregnancy is involved rather than using them as a plot device, so perhaps one day I might publish a chapter showing the foals wrapped in soft linens and their fat little cheeks showing, or them running around the castle while the mommies and their mother/daddy and aunts and jesus I don't know how to use gender pronouns and titles when girldicks are involved guide them. Maybe a cutesy slice of life chapter with them adjusting to motherhood.

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Thanks! This story took far longer than I would have liked to get out and I thank the commissioner for being very patient with me. I have a certain fondness for these kinks, so i was all too happy to do them.

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As the commissioner I have some ideas for a sequel. But at the moment Journeyman says that he has some things he needs to deal with in his personal life first before he can write anything else.

So we'll see.

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Oooh, did you mean to say beer? Okay, that makes sense...:rainbowhuh: Wait, beer can be buttered?

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:trixieshiftright:...If you had told me this morning that the one educational thing I learned today would come from a clopfic, I would have had to question this reality. And yet here I am.

I always enjoy any story with any Starlight X Twilight shipping in it because from what I have seen from the show, it's a very believable way the show could go if it wasn't focused towards kids. :trixieshiftright:

Twilight changed Starlights for the better. Who couldn't see some attraction from Starlight towards her savior Twilight.


Curse you, kids rating. :flutterrage:

Menage a trois? Between three mares? Resulting in each of them simultaneously impregnating each other so they're all carrying each others illegitimate offspringlove-children?
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You're a dirty, romantic man, and I love you for it, ya bastard!

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Mom, Mom, and Mom. She, she, she. No different from a pair of lesbians who adopt. 'Cept there's one more lesbian and no adoption.

I don't think i've ever had false-twins explained to me, much less mentioned. Interesting.

...Oh, and i like the smut, Cheeky Trixie is Best Trixie.

Damn, this story was long.

Will there be a continuation

Whoever downvoted those perfectly valid comments, go fuck yourself

Anyway will there be a sequel

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