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Vapor Trail and Sky Stinger have been dating for a while, and the natural next step for them is for Sky Stinger to meet his girlfriend's parents. Despite Vapor Trail's warnings, their introductory dinner starts out on the wrong hoof and eventually leads to a question Sky Stinger must struggle with — does he deserve to be by Vapor Trail's side?

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Awesome stuff mate.
A realistic way a relationship will improve, a matter of trust.
Also liked how you just completely ignored the parents at the end, relationships are not destroyed by the outside. But by cracks inside it.
10/10 will read again

This was really cute! I loved it!

So sweet! We need more Sky/Vapor stories!

Seriously, people need to make more Sky/Vapor stories. I loved their personalities on the show AND here :twilightsmile:

That was sweet; nice job. :twilightsmile:

This was good.

Hello!

I have reviewed this story as a part of the Reviewer Café, Meme Lord. As always, thank you for the time, effort, and hard work you have put into the creation of this piece, and I hope that you find this review to be at least somewhat helpful. :twilightsmile:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/354947/reviews#comment/6368243

Those two really are an adorable couple. That's a big reason why they're my favorite map mission guests.

Ugh, I hate parents like Vapor Trail's- the smothering kind. Like, let your kid have some breathing room and respect their decisions. Vapor is clearly happy with dating her childhood crush/best friend, and so what if they don't make a whole lot of cash. They'll get there someday at their own speed.

Really hope her parents get the message that they were inexcusably rude once they realize Vapor wasn't coming back to continue dinner with them.

Great work for a great couple!

No doubt the map is eventually going to send out a call to the both of them to mend that relationship with her parents

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