Following the defeat of the Storm King, both his victims and his followers alike continue on with their lives. For some of them, the adventure is only just beginning...
(Needless to say, there will be spoilers for the movie).
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Nice story and an equally nice wrap up of the movie ending.
But not sure about the part where Capper return to Klugetown. He still own a big sum of money to the mob. The reason he was still in this town was because he couldn't escape. Why would he returns there?
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You'll get an answer to that question in the next chapter.
I have a feeling this is going to be fun. Let’s see what awaits everyone.
Nice story! I've been a fan of your works for a while now!
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Thank you. Always nice to know my work is appreciated.
This is a really nice follow up to the movie. I'm going to follow it and see where this goes.
>Murdock
You probably mean Mullet.
Murdock was actually Squabble’s original name, lol.
Mayor Capper...
I like that
I’m happy that the main villain was killed.
YAAAAHHH!!! WHOOOOO! PAYBACK TIME, FORCES OF EVIL!!!
Hope things work out for Tempest
Honestly, Tempest's backstory was a low point in the movie for me. It seemed way too rushed and they glossed over a few details that would have helped to expand upon it better. For example, why not have her come out of a hospital or something in the flashback instead of just seeing her walk down the street looking mopey. This chapter was really good, but it would have been better had you included that detail that I just mentioned.
I liked Discord in this chapter.
Now that I think about it, where was he in all this. I get from a writing perspective why he didn't show up but I wonder what he was doing when the Storm King's forces invaded.
I liked too see the other hippogriffs specially Skyranger, even if he acted like an a-hole
Nice to see Novo and Twilight get along after such a terrible event between them in the film. Novo is able to forgive Twilight and see her accomplishments instead of just her mistake.
Nice friendship between Tempest and Starlight. Of course even Tempest is freaked by Starlight’s actions as a villain.
Nice continuation. Hope to see more!
All friends argue now and then. What’s important is you forgive each other.
Awww I like this story Tempest and Grubber are such good friends reminds of Twilight and Spike
Just fyi, the Storm King's remains were vaporized when Tempest restored Canterlot with the staff, coz we saw the spot where he fell during this scene and the pieces weren't there anymore.
Otherwise, good story
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That was probably just an error on the artists' parts, as the Storm King's poorly assembled pertified body was shown in the credit sequences.
Mayor Capper is gonna do a great job