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After barely surviving a tornado, a small-time Unicorn magician finds himself in Changeling territory, where he is hailed as a savior marked in a prophecy, destined to face a great evil. Can the cowardly, selfish trickster fulfill the said prophecy, and become the stallion everypony needs? (Inspired by 'Oz, The Great And Powerful'.)
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OH BOY I'M ALREADY HYPED
I look forward to more of this story.
I can'i wait to see sleight meeting Chrysalis
Great work bluecat. Never stop
Intresting
Is this boss red ecilpse, mentioned in growing pains?
4468230 You'll see...:
So that's what Carapace meant by the word "Twitch." He was talking about this guy that Sleight encounters. Which means the Napoleons will be involved in this story as well.
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But srsly I couldn't hope for better plot its, quite promising
That was fast, I thought it would take longer to discover the truth
Wait for it... Derp
. Seriously thought, good job!!! Keep writing!!!
Things will start to get intense
Chrysalis didn't fight back uh what? That was strange like hell, she got punched and did nothing.
Let's wait for round 2
OH WELL...
I SEE " A LEGO MOVIE" REFERENCE HERE
MAYBE NOT I STILL DON'T WATCH OZ
EVERYTIME TWITCH TALKS I REMEMBER THE VOICE OF JIMMY FROM SOUTH PARK
Sequel ? :D
4565921
EXACTLY WAHAT I'M FEELING TO
GREAT HISTORY LIKE ALLWAYS BLUE
Calling it ahead of time: Twitch is the one who killed Sandy.
4572769 Nope. Sandy died of an heart attack, totally natural causes. But Twitch did kill someone very close to the family.
4572918 father, has to be father, remember, Grim said "HIM"
anyways, good story bluecat, wrapped it all up and still anticipating the next one. I wish you the best of luck. Stay derpy forever, peace out!
4573322 Getting there...hints as to whom 'him' is can be found in 'From Ponyville With Love', but you have to look for it. It's clever foreshadowing.
4573336 You know, I wonder how far bluecat looks when writing?
4573344 Actually, it was both him and me. We've been working together since 'Her Shining Paladin'. And trust me, if you haven't solved the mystery, all will be revealed eventually.
4573347 Cool, what ideas did you come up with?
I see the wizard of oz/ oz the great and powerful references
Pff, hahaha. This plot is making me lol a lot.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Poor Chryssie and the changelings, I hour they'll be alright.
Cya
Raziel-chan
4506789 I'm quite sure ask the changelings are really low on energy, keeping only enough to avoid shortening their lives and giving the rest to the larvae.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Wow, sad back story there.
On to the next chapter.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Ring racist soulless gingers. :P
Hmm, ona thinking that Sleigh could be a powerful magician if he ever allowed himself to believe in himself.
Cya
Raziel-chan
That was quite awesome. Sleigh is really selling himself short, those card spells actually seem really powerful.
Cya
Raziel-chan
That was fun. And also surprisingly deep and warm at times. A sequel would be nice, yeah.
Cya
Raziel-chan
6556066 I do have something in mind. Something like a Changeling anthology story, with plenty of focus on Sleight and his new subjects.
6556174 Oooooh, awesome, I can't wait!
cya
Raziel-chan
I love the card tricks
You know what they say red: don't kill the messenger
And red is now makoto shishio
why in the world of mlp illusionists must be unicorns? It seems to me that magic tricks from a character who does not have any magic at all would collect a lot of spectators.
Which one of your stories is the first one in this series?