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Prince Dusk Glow, the son of Twilight Sparkle and Flash Sentry, experiences the trials and tribulations of growing up in Ponyville.

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nice start to the chapter cant wait to see what happens next. :twilightsmile::eeyup:

Little angel my butt nd Evil little one say it spike plaese

son of Twilight Sparkle

trials and tribulations

Dusk Glow is an Alicorn

Jesus. It's a giant, steaming pile of cliché.

if only he aged to where he and Applebloom were the same age they would be so cute!:twilightsheepish:

Aw... Uncle Spike is awesome! I am glad that Twilight allowed Spike to stay with her and Flash. :twilightblush: And not abandon him.

"I don't think that's such a great idea." Spike said nervously, remembering what he had once heard about baby unicorns and their magic surges. It stood to reason a baby alicorn's surges could be even worse.
Boy do I know it

Well. Looks like somebody mixed Blueblood and Silver Spoon together.

Still a really enjoyable chapter though. Good visualization of the next generation, in my opinion.

I sense a bit of a parental conflict on the way. O.o
Also: I wonder who the fathers are of Dusk's friends are?

Great chapter cant wait for the next one. :yay::eeyup:

3051871 I might reveal them in a later chapter. I haven't decided yet.

One minor complaint: Dusk referred to Dazzle as "Hon." Even if it's a sort of schoolboy crush, they're all five years old. If we're assuming that ponies in the FiM universe age at the same rate as humans in the real world, no five-year-old would EVER call a friend "Hon."

3061418 Actually, that was Honeysuckle he was addressing, right after Dazzle. "Hon" would be the short version of her name.

Hmm. That reminded me waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much of a Simpsons episode. Was it based on that or something?
But

Starlight Twinkle.

Seriously? :facehoof: Yeah, I know coming up with names is kinda really hard but... :facehoof:

Well, you can't please everybody.

Still an absolutely amazing story though and I'm still asking:
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Cant. contain. all. of. these. HNNNNNNNNG! :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::raritystarry:

All I can say is: D'AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWW

Ya know, this chapter kinda reminded me of the old Simpson episode where Marge was telling the kids about Lisa's first word. It's been years since I've seen that episode so I don't really remember too much about it.

You know, at some point, I expected Flash and Twilight to apologize. They were ignoring Dusk in favor of his little sister. Sure, the first word thing was cute, but it doesn't excuse the fact that they brushed him off multiple times. It makes this chapter feel incomplete to me...

great chapter cant wait for the next one. :eeyup::twilightsmile::yay:

D'aaaaaaaawwwwww

:raritystarry::twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss: so bucking adorable! :3

All right, that's another couple down... Now we just need to know who Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy married...

In Rainbow Dash's case, my money's on Soarin. That's who people usually ship her with when it's a heterosexual ship, anyway...

Anyway, I'm trying to figure out who would voice the young Dusk... Probably Tara Strong, since she has experience doing young boys' voices... That idea certainly has nothing to do with the fact that she voices Dusk's mother... Nope, not at all. :liarjack:

This chapter kind of prominently displays one of my only problems with this story: The lack of the original generation, the "old guard," if you will.

Specifically, despite Shining Armor being prince of the Crystal Empire, you'd think he'd play a prominent role in Dusk's life. But we haven't seen him in this story at all yet. This chapter in particular would've been a perfect time to have him in the story: he could've been there to tell Dusk what it's like to be a big brother.

Regardless, this is surprisingly well-written, considering the subject matter.

3084744 Shining does visit from time to time, but being co-ruler of an Empire doesn't really leave much free time.

Another great chapter can't wait for the next one. :eeyup::twilightsmile::yay:

You didn't answer a vital question: Who did Rarity marry?

3094561 Then again she might not be married yet... Spike is still chasing her it seems. He would most likely have givven up if she was taken .

3096022 She is married, and you'll see her husband somewhere down the line. Spike doesn't let it stop him from crushing on her, though.

3085418 Huh, that's weird... I didn't get an email notification for this reply... That's happened before, though...

Comment posted by brony323 deleted Aug 26th, 2013

IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
finally, someone actually made a function fun!!!! I hate those so much: facehoof:

"Funny." Tawny smirked, picking up a jam tart. "Let's how funny [i[this is!"

...typo? It's an error with the italicization isn't it?

[i[this is!

....
Still an excellent read though :twilightsheepish:

3113523Thanks for pointing that out. Fixed.

Another great chapter cant wait for the next one. :eeyup::twilightsmile::yay:

Leadership huh? This is an interesting twist

"Maybe just a little more patient then that." Dusk shrugged playfully.

Wait a sec...
Isn't that supposed to be a 'than' rather than a 'then?'

But still, it's really great to have a fanfic about the future, and it's pretty damn good.

D'aaaawwwwww

great chapter cant wait for the next one.

And of course Gold Chain and Silver Plate get away scot-free... seriously, at least Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon usually suffer some form of karma... these two have yet to have any...

3140906 Wasn't their Poison Joke affliction in chapter four karma enough for you?

I've only read a few of your other stories (mostly the ones that involved Shining Armor and Cadance), so I have no clue who Forrest and Thunder Clap are.

Are Cherry Fizzy and Orion background ponies from the show, or are they also OCs?

3161047 Fizzy's a background pony, Orion's an OC. As for Forrest and Thunder Clap, check out my stories Flutterheart and Rainbeau if you want to learn more.

"Why her, exactly?" Silver snorted. "Why bother with a commoner, when you could date a more refined, influential mare, like me?"
I can already see a conflict of interests about to come up.

Also: good chap :) I can't believe our little Dusk is already dating!!! (Insert pony squeal here(yup, I'm a guy and I squeal, oh well))

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