Gothic and Shine Paladin, recognising their own limited lifespans, set out on a quest to attain immortality, so that they can be with their wives and daughters forever. (Cover art by Ebony Stallion)
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Nice Story. Is the Brown Pony Caboose? I hope this turns out to be a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love it.
I don't trust Discord, he's up to something.
I liked the fight between O malley and Caboose, that should happen again, when they attack each other. That would be funny to read.
I really think Gothic should kill Caboose, he's such a idiot.
YES!!! Keep going.
Alright! Daring Do has joined the expedition!
Hahaha, Nice!
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Great chapter. I totally spotted the Emperors new groove in it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
4029023 me too.
I loved 'The Emperor's New Groove' reference.
Alright, a The Emperor's Groove reference!
I am about to die laughing. I love Caboose. Also, totally loved the Emporer's New Groove reference.
Oh shit. Nothing more terrifying in life than an angered wife. This is going to end well.
Oh boy. There is going to be a fight. Both against Azutoto and the Familes. This is going to be crazy. Best of luck with the next chapter.
CABOOSE I GOING TO BE A HERO OF THE DAY
Is it just me, or our bad guys don't seem to mind the presence of both princesses AND the spirit of chaos? Like, y'know, Team Rocket leaving and stuff...
4056649 Yeah that's right, but I bet they have a plan that can be thwarted with a self destruct button.
Great ending. I like how you changed there appearance slightly, but kept the princes as a unicorn and pegasus. I can't wait for your next work.
I loved this story.
I hope read more of your work.
I can't help but wonder what you will write next.
I suppose your next history will be caboose and daring relationship ongoing right?
I just realized who Caboose reminds me off. For some reason, I think of Nail from Dragon Ball Z Abridged. I couldn't tell you why.
Ghostbusters, Red vs. Blue, Nintendo references!
I enjoyed the "Emperor's New Groove " reference
do you get that from the lego movie? Cuz emit did the same thing, It even had the blah blah blah I'm so pretty I like you but I don't like you for some reason. And then at the end with the waterfall... I feel like I've heard that before...
5596515 I did base that around that from The Lego Movie, yeah. And the waterfall part was based on a scene from The Emperor's New Grove.
This reminds me of that part from "Forever Young ", anyway its a great story and I really enjoyed reading every word of it.
Celly? Lulu?
instant I see that my mind goes "PISS OFF BITCH, YA RUINED THE MOMENT!"