Mist, now a feisty teenager, find herself falling for not one, but two colts. Which will she choose?
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First of all...
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OH MY GOD! SO MANY EXTRA CHARACTERS! Seriously, I was wondering what other ideas you could populate your universe with and I am once again blown away by your creativity, as usual all characters are enjoyable and don't need a lot of backstory to explain themselves.
All the new foals have cute names and I LOOOVE how Hurricane got her dad's 4th wall powers. You're awesome.
Say, what about Dusk, Twilight's son? Shouldn't he have married his girlfriend by now?
"Mist only shook her head. She only wished she knew how these two had met. It was probably a tale for another time…"
FI-FA-FO-FUM, I SMELL THE NEXT HISTORY
Nice story so far. I can't wait for the Soarin's kid to have a date with her. This is going to get funny. Especially with meddling Uncles and Brothers.
I can't wait to see how chaotic things are going to get, just thinking about it gives me a...
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Oops, I discorded.
I know the reference is obvious but I have to do this anyway.
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Ooh this is going to be awkward to explain
Put me down for 10 t shirts of team luxury. I feel sorry for Blues though. I hope things will get better for his family.
I understand the situation between Blue and Spitfire. My dad and me can argue pretty bad because we are so much alike.
I knew that would happen. The whole house fell apart. I do Like that you are going to write an Ol'Maley story. That will be fun to read. Great job adding an antagonist. This is getting good.
REBEL CHANGELINGS?
Let the dramatic rescue of the princess commence.
I hope that changeling will not rape her....
4157749 This stories rated everyone, i'm fairly certain it won't. Even if its implied that it'll happen somepony will probably annihalate it with a magical laser first.
YOUUUUUUUU!!!!! That was not how I wanted it, but I guess you have the right to this story. You better though make it up with the story of what happend to Ol'Maley. Great chapter and concepts by the way.
Nice story. Best of luck with the next two.
Also as shown in today's episode he could join the Wonderbolt Reserve. Great job.
Is it really the end? Because the story says incomplete?
And now the history of Chrysalis and sleight
Constell will be Luxury's partner?
I'm sorry for harping you for this so much, but it really does irritate me, you're using pegasi as the singular and pegasus as the plural, pegasi is the plural form of pegasus. Once again I highly recommend you get an editor, also go through every chapter of your stories to see if you can spot some errors. Just reminder if you're going to use the singular you say things like "she was a pegasus" and if you're going to use the plural you say things like "the two pegasi landed next to him". I really do like some of the stories you have up, but the massive number of errors you have in this one chapter are pulling me out of the story. It's still going to be on my Read Later list, but you're going to have to fix the problems before I can come back for another go at enjoying it, which I fully intend to do. I'm mainly pointing out these errors because I honestly want to see you improve in the right direction, I really do want to finish this story since I've read through or am reading some of your other works that are calling back to this story.
I can't help singing that Spin Doctors song in my head. "And if you want to call me maybe, just go ahead now..."