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You know, it almost bothers me that you can spell "concupiscent" but fail to spell "cues" properly. You didn't even use the wrong version, "queues" which sounds the same but has a different meaning. You were looking for "cues." I'm not trying to be rude, just... How?
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Gall wrote it.
I DID NOT! Well, maybe I did...
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I did not expect a response that quick.
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We've been writing this for a solid week with barely any sleep. Obsession is a word that only faintly describes how we feel toward criticism (though, by all means, unload the negatives on us - it's a time to learn!)
It is my first, true clopfic, after all...
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I'm no critic by any stretch of the imagination. I just have an annoying tendency to point out spelling errors when I see them.
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Nice
I expect more on my front desk next month...or whenever you feel like
Keep up the good work my good man
i hope u continue this i would love to see everyones reaction
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Uh, queues is the wrong word, if you're looking for cues. Besides sounding the same, they are rather different words.Misread the comment, nevermind.
Awesome, waiting for more
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I'm curious, how did you read it in such a way as to misunderstand me? I... thought I was pretty clear.
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I kinda read it as you saying that Chogall used "queues", but that you weren't aware it was actually a word (just not the correct one in this context). It's a less common word in America than in Britain and the Commonwealth, so it doesn't surprise me when I see people on the internet not recognise the word.
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Ahhhh. I see. Well, be assured that I do, in fact, know what a queue is. I've played enough video games to see it from time to time.
Sex scene could have been better. But other than that this was a good read
Princess of Friendship...with benefits
Really enjoyed this. Very descriptive and well done. Nice!
Hahahahahaha! Ooh... that is gold. You are the King of the New Changelings, I would expect you to have bed many a made because, how else is your hive going to reproduce?
https://vocaroo.com/i/s046NJoHZqxy
I have to say, the prose of the smut narrative felt quite... Shakespearean.
Must be Twilight's old novel.
*facedesk*
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Was going for neutron star levels of Male Anime Protagonist density there, yessir.