• Member Since 12th Dec, 2016
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IvoryMustang


Hello there, I'm a quiet bug who enjoys reading and writing. I look forward to having plenty of stories to read and write and an audicance to enjoy my work, even if it's not the greatest.

Comments ( 12 )

Nice story. A few spelling mistakes but otherwise good. Personally would have preferred if the story was slightly slower but that’s just me. Other than that it’s a good story keep it up ivory

Hawtness is happening. Moar, please.

Why just one night? Why not she only has to pay half the rent each month in exchange for her landlord and his brother get to fuck her whenever and however they want from now on.

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First time writing clop, wanted to move along with it. But I'll take into consideration of that, but you'd need chapter two for it to fall into place. This is more than a one chapter story, but it didn't make much sense for it all to be in one chapter.

Nice writing a bit short but sweet. Keep it up

ewwww... every time someone writes ass to mouth, I just cringe. outside of extreme fetishism, I just can't see that happening. I mean, unless that Scarlet had cleaned herself EXTREMELY THOROUGHLY, that's basically scat play. That said, everything else was pretty good.

Great job. I enjoyed reading this

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To be fair, that hadn’t crossed my mind in the slightest. Also, wasn’t typically ass to mouth. Rather mouth to clit, personally I didn’t exactly want to go into more detail than needed. Especially when a lot are just here to read about the sex. But that will br taken into high consideration the next time around. I’ve written clop or in this case, something sexual only once.

Your short description:

It was one thing to be in Mnaehattan, it was an entirely differnt thing to be out of luck. Scar, a unicron mare managed to lose her bit purse and is a bit stuck on paying her rent. That all changes when her landlord offers to pay for this month.

In the small blurb

Scar, a unicron mare

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