Celestia captures Twilight.
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interesting! more?
It's marked as complete, but it's certainly not. It just sort of ends on the fact that it's night.
Great but not finished
I always wondered what a story would be like if it started and ended in the middle, now I know I guess.
This is a really interesting story. But it feels like there should be so much more. It's like you've given us a small taste of something wonderful, and then snatched it away and left us hungry and wanting more.
I really hope you will expand on what you've started. I think it has a lot of potential to be a great story.
Great start, but I really don't think it should be marked as 'complete'
For the love of everything that's holy, write more on this!!!
Really, this has too much potential to stay as a teaser like this.
Very interesting premise. Really wish it could be expanded to a larger story.