Pancakes are like cake, except with slightly less cake and a bit more Pan. To Celestia, the almighty goddess of cake, pancakes are the very best kind of cake.
Unfortunately for Luna, she isn’t exactly that good at making cake, especially not pancakes. Now she will have to face the judging eyes of the cake goddess herself.
Will Luna survive Celestia’s onslaught? Will she be banished for making horrible, tasteless pancakes? Will I ever stop writing these random, retarded comedy stories?
We shall see.
I honestly have no clue anymore. Somebody shoot me.
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This was certainly funny. And it had just the right amount of meta humour sprinkled in. Quite enjoyable indeed.
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Glad you enjoyed!
Gave me a nice laugh. Nice job.
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Glad you did! Cheers!
eeyyyyyyyyyy maybe don't call things retarded, fren. it's not cool
just a little wholesome critique from your number one fan. cheers!
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Wot?
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The word 'retard', is ableist and hurtful to neurodivergent smol beans.
Thought you might appreciate being given a quick debriefing on the situation. Well, see ya around. Happy writing.
The fourth wall is dead.
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Oh, I was actually wondering where I used the word ‘retard’ in the story but just saw I used it in the description. Heh.
Ey, a story about pancakes! Say... That's pretty good.
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“Where else would I be?”
Funny story and wow Celestia goes crazy.
And also if you don’t mind can it be tagged drama because it has some drama in it.
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It could be tagged Drama.
Could be.
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shhhh~
But... What does one use to poison snakes?
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you're asking yourself the wrong questions, amigo.
Is it a snake's poison or poison against snakes we're talking about?
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That's the joke.
The stuff a snake uses to kill its prey isn't called poison, even though it is a poison. It's called venom.
I love playing with words.