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GrayOnBlue


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The last hours of Earth.
Natural cataclysms, warfare, pollution and many other woes finally broke the back of the world.

Even the magically advanced alien race of sapient ponies could not do a thing.

It was too late to change anything, when they breached the border between realities for the first time of its history.
They hoped to find a new world, full of exciting discoveries, but instead, they were forced to helpessly observe the demise of the planet that was a home for billions life forms over the course of a vast ocean of time.

But when the last group of scouts was evacuated, they brought with them someone, who, strictly speaking, couldn't have possible exist by now. An alive human infant girl.

Now, with the last surviving member of an extinct specie, it's up to them to do all they can to provide her life that her parents didn't have a chance to provide.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

will there be potential romance in this story

There were five of them, returnings from the dying world. Tired, gasping for fresh air, with singed manes and tails - scouts looked like they are straight from the Tartarus. Which wasn’t too far from the truth.

This paragraph is broken. There are five errors in the first paragraph alone. Put some effort into your work before you post it. The premise, the idea behind the story, was good enough to catch my attention and convince me to read a new story (which is extremely rare for any fiction, because I generally only read things which are more than 100,000 words long.). That being said, the execution of this story is terrible. Your grammar is way off, enough so that I was unable to get past the first paragraph.

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No romance tag so I doubt it.

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Maybe. Either here, or a separated story.

Comment posted by StormLuna deleted Jan 19th, 2018

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Just trying myself in a new genre. It's not the same Honey Bun as one from other stories.

Comment posted by StormLuna deleted Jan 19th, 2018

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To an extend. She's the same Honey Bun. The only difference is that she doesn't feel anything towards humans and treats the baby as she'd treat a pony baby.

Comment posted by StormLuna deleted Jan 19th, 2018

oh boy i wonder how honey bun will react to her first period

Comment posted by StormLuna deleted Jan 19th, 2018

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Mental problems plus unstable mood swings.

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this news makes me sad i was really looking forward to seeing where this story went

8536035
So confusing to see you here when I've come to expect you shitposting on American Bronies.

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