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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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Moondancer has always thought highly of Twilight and was devastated when she left without saying good-bye. When Twilight throws a party for Moondancer and rekindles their friendship, Moondancer is happy to be connected with who was her best friend. It won't be long though until Moondancer wants more.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 16 )

that a girl twi you didn't break her heart you gave her a chance but explained that it might not lead to anything

suggestion mr author I belive you missed a chance for some rarity shenanigans this chapter, I belive by this point rarity has her boutique in canterlot you could have had rarity talk to twinkle shine and get her to take moondance to her boutique where rarity would be waiting to make her a custom dress, and you know rarity would be all for it with the whole generosity thing

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I didn't even notice this until you brought it up and yes, by then she did have her boutique in Canterlot....had I been thinking I could have made that part of the story.

I feel that Moondancer might be a yandere type.

Did Twilight make amends with ALL of her old friends in Canterlot?

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With the exception of Lyra, yes. Watch the "Amending Fences" episode and you'll see. The reason she didn't with Lyra is because Minuette states that she lives in Ponyville while she, Lemon Hearts, Twinkleshine and Twilight are in the donut shop....so unfortunately she wasn't there to make amends with.

Question: Do you know about Scootaloo's aunts?

Great story my friend. Any chance of a sequel?

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I haven't even thought about a sequel for it but maybe, once I get other projects taken care of.

Very sweet and romantic story. The build up wasn't too awfully rushed and I could really feel the connection between the characters. Great work!

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Thanks, I appreciate that. I have done other romance stories but with this one, I wanted it to seem truly genuine. I know I'm likely wrong here but one part of me wonders if the reason why Moondancer went down the path she did when Twilight left was because she saw her as more than a friend.

This moves way too fast.

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