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Flurry Heart may be an alicorn, but she is just like any other pony, even going as far as angering or even disappointing her parents and especially her Aunt Twilight Sparkle. Now, after being scolded by Twilight, Flurry Heart realizes that she must never anger her Aunt Twilight ever again.
Author's Note: This is my first attempt at writing a Flurry Heart story. Thank you for your understanding.
*Written at Trotcon 2017 in Columbus, OH
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Sequel!!!!!!!!
Kinda thought it would have this.
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Aw. No matter how the episode was handled, you can't help but admit that Flurry's just a baby who really didn't know any better.
She wasn't doing anything any child wouldn't do except with far greater consequences.
Consequences she didn't choose any more than she chose the horn on her head or the wings on her back. And consequences she's no more aware of than any baby.
It'll be difficult, raising her in the same way as a non-demi-goddess but if she's to grow up in touch with the ponies she may one day rule over, there's few better ways.
Can't really believe that a baby is having an adult level monologue. Didn't feel like Flurry Heart.
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I thought it'd have this:
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Big scary bear if I've ever seen one.
Man, this was awesome to read! Flurry Heart is one my favorite characters even though she hasn't appeared much this does feel like what's she is thinking
It was pretty good. The emotion was well captured, but I highly doubt that a baby's internal monologue would have vocabulary, syntax, and diction that advanced. Not bad for a first try.
A little too sophisticated for an infant/toddler even if Flurry is a prodigy, but nice first attempt.
Am I the only one who has a prediction that Flurry Heart could soon be a straight-A student sometime in the future like her Auntie Twilight?
8550949 She's got a lot of brains when you think about it.
written at trotcon eh?
will you be going to trotcon 2020?, cuz i'll be there :D
9883938. Yep!
9885063
cool beans, looks like its gonna be lit next year with all the peeps that are attending, plus MA larson and sweetie belles VA being there :)
9885831. I'm also hoping Elley Ray comes back. Likely she will.
9885838
who is she a VA of?
9885930. Mistmane
9885931
who?
9885936
One of the pillars of old Equestria
9885946
Ooooh i see =)
This was a sweet story.
I don't agree with the criticism that the vocabulary is too complex for a baby. Remember how Pear Butter and Bright Mac were able to talk as babies?
Poor poor Flurry Heart. Also; for somepony who’s an infant, she’s quite mature for her age. Nice
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I agree
Oh god. Now I just want flurry and twilight to talk this out.