Pinkie Pie's childish antics and reputation for watching The Cake Twins gets the attention of a new family who are moving into town. Unfortunately they've yet to finish moving everything from their old home in Fillydelphia to Ponyville and need a foal sitter to watch their little one as they finalize everything back in the big city. However their definition of 'foal' is not quite what Pinkie was expecting.
This story makes Pinkie learn a valuable lesson about respecting the feelings of others while making her appreciate her friends and family who like her for all her unique personality traits no matter how odd they may seem from the outside by others.
This is a commission for The Lord Insanity. It is rated "Teen" for AB / DL themes. These are all clean but require the "Teen" rating to meet FiM Fiction guidelines.
I like this story cause it feels like a lot of the frustration people deal with when you struggle to be who you want to be and that conflicts so much with public opinion. though a few spots swaddle could use some more narrative to describe building frustrations. like his blow up on spoiled while it's good for the crowd in the story to gasp it could paint a better picture to see a bit of build up of frustration and anger with Swaddle Puff. all in all nice story and can't wait to read more.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
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Nurse Joy, eh? I see you.
Relax, swaddle, you're with Pinkie Pie, anypony who thinks its strange will just blame your status on the crazy party pony.
Orr...not.
I'm liking it so far, but let's see where this goes
Okay. Let me just say. This. is. amazing, I relate so well to Shining
D'aaww!!! This is so cute! I WANNA CUDDLE 'EM!!!
YAY! LYRA & BONNY!!!! LOVE THAT SHIP!!!
YAY! POKÉMON REFERENCE!!!
A secret society. It's illuminati with AFDL'S.
Well, when I thought this was just an other padded pony story I was completely mistaken. I did not see this turn of events coming but it is a pleasant surprise. While it's only touching the surface of how I'm sure most ABDLs have faced at least some judgement and shame it still really hits home. I hope things soon take a turn for the better.
The worst criticism I can give is that your chapters are a little on the short side. That's balanced out by not feeling rushed though. I think I saw one or two spelling mistakes. Way better than I could do though. :) I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Hmm. I feel the apology went a little easier that it should have. Although honestly I'm not sure what I would have done differently. lol
I absolutely loved this story. Having Pinky write to Celestia was a brilliant way to end. You literally moved me to tears with this one. <3
What's with the random fourth wall break?
That was awesome!
I'd love to see that as a sequel, where Pinkie Pie shares her love of diapers and being a foal with the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
interesting very interesting