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This story is a sequel to The Cave of Forbidden Love
Spike, after the events of "Spike's Little Dragon", finally ventures to the Crystal Empire to have a man-to-man talk with Shining Armor.
Knowing of how he has "The Amulet of Love's True Form", Spike listens to Shining Armor tell his tale of how he earned the love of Princess Cadence.
What will the result of having a "Guy's Day" with Shining Armor be on Spike? Love is such a difficult and subjective thing.
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Now that's the kind of brotherly bond we all want to see.
Cute little story. I like it.
I almost thought you shipped Spike and Shining Armor together but I love the story man.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm trying to focus more on my true expertise in writing while seeing what some Brony advice I recently got could do to my execution.
Many thanks for your time and comment.
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The time you took to read and comment means a lot to me.
Thank you!
It is also nice to know I wasn't making a mistake in posting here again. Thanks for the encouragement.
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Thank you so kindly for reading and remarking on this story. It is deeply appreciated.
I've learned my lesson in trying to write shipping-style works like "The Cutest, Little, Chubby Cheeks" and "The Most Delightful Shade of Red". I got a LOT of comments, favorites, and views, but at the price of sacrificing quality.
Thanks so much for giving me a reason to want to post here again. Once I finish my finale for this series, "Love's True Form", I'll be posting it here.
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You're very welcome. As an author myself, I am well aware that comments -- any comments -- mean the world to an author and keep the encouragement up for them to write more. Sorry I didn't have more constructive comments other than what was said; truthfully, I stink at giving commentary unless I'm really trying to tear a story apart (and even then I'm not great at it), but also, when I read this I was on my phone and trying to make a comment of any length from said phone is nigh on impossible
Keep up the good work!
Would you consider using the new sequel-marking feature to put this series of stories in order?
"Twilight"
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I'll have to try and figure it out.
I'll do what I can to fix this up to the new standards ASAP.
Thanks for the advice.
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*Blush* That's what happens when you type to fast and get so into the story during editing you just fail to see little things like that.
Thanks for the comment and reminder to pay more attention to my work.
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I think I succeeded in using the "Sequel Maker" feature.
If you have a moment, please let me know if I succeeded.
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Looks like you did, though it looks like this story in particular is effectively the continuation of two of your other stories, and you can only mark it as the sequel of one of them. Oh well.
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One of these days, I'll get this all figured out.
Thank you lots for your advice and input. I really appreciate it.