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Bendy


I like big ponies and I cannot lie.

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Alright; this is my pre-reading comment. Already your description has made me laugh. I'm reading this right now. I only expect the best from Bendy.

POST READING COMMENT; IM CRYING

Big Mac, you’ve got a super-massive dick

I will lick and massage your cock until it cums every day

BRO

Alright, I'm still smiling from this. God damn, that was great. I gotta go read more of your stuff.

Your Fortune: Absolute fucking madman.

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Glad you enjoyed it. Maybe I'll add a bonus chapter with some big dick licking clop.

Was this story somewhat tender, despite the fact he had an erection while hugging her?

Hope you enjoy my other works.

7945754 Tender, indeed. I liked the sweet aspects to it, and the sweetness almost made things funnier.

Well this is a change of pace! :yay: Poor Macky. Hahahaha, nice job man.

Lucky bastard he is, hoho

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He'll never be made to sex with her. XD

But at least, her massaging hands and licking mouth would still be nice. Plus, he can hot dog his dick between her cheeks and cum on her back.

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Poor guy, hahah XD But I'm sure there's a spell or something, there's just gotta be :pinkiegasp:

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Some verses have humans immune to magic, unfortunately.

7945754 my thought processes.

"M rated story called Big problem with Mac as the cover art? This is gonna be clop isn't it."

"That sort of description, this is a Bendy Story isn't it. Hell, it is."

Bravo, man.

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What did you enjoy about this story? Was Big Macintosh portrayed well as a gentle giant here? By hugging Amy, not doing anything sexual to her, despite having a massive erection?

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The fact nothing sexual was in the story surprised me, given your, well, your legend, mate.

I loved that even without clop, it had your trademark twisted humor. I went into this expecting "magical non-anus having ponies suddenly needing to take a shit."

7945781 Or between her breasts


7945866 A big sh*t too

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There too.

Did you enjoy this story?

trying to decide on how to feel about it but.....i think i might like this? :unsuresweetie:

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his massive black stallionhood standing tall and proud between his legs. His thick veins pulsed with power along his long and thick shaft, at the base dangled a pair of huge, basketball sized balls.

Thats how.

Ah wouldn't be surprised we’re friends anymore.”

shouldnt there be an 'aint' or 'we arnt' in there somewhere?

And there is not enough stories of female humans in equestria.
I think I like the idea of a human female getting pounding from a stallions thick cock more then the human male getting that sweet, sweet poni pussy. Course that has been done to death so its old hat.

This was sweet and nicely lewd.

I do love the bendiness of it all. And also got surprisingly Macintosh our red stallion was.
My only critique is Amy's lack of determination in taking humongous horsecock. C'mon, even if humans are immune to magic - which I call bullshit, since her boobs and ass are magically growing - she could still practice and try. Kinkyjo wasn't born being able to take what she can nowadays, and with equestria's bootylicious will she'd most certainly be able to take the stallion to the hilt. Just my two cents :yay:

Is this a reverse-Bendy story or nega-Bendy story?

I swear, I read this years ago, but Big Mac got friendzoned in it.

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I provably should change that, yeah.

Do feel sorry for Big Mac, with him not being able to have sex with her?


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Maybe, I'll add a bonus chapter where that happens.

As I've said before (in other stories), this story has what I usually associate with a Bendy story. Thought very different from the others, it's a nice pace of change. Keep it up dude

Also an error I spotted in your short description

but he got possibly one of the largest

- he has/he's

“I will lick and massage your cock until it cums every day. Need to get rid of that erection. I want a normal conversation with you my friend, without your massive cock in my face.”

Best. Part.

Good stuff, keep it up dude

A nice little bonus chapter, good show Bendy :yay:

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Thanks for pointing that out. Now fixed.


Big Macintosh was nice guy in this story wasn't he? Gentle and nice, and not being domineering over his smaller human friend, despite how much bigger and stronger he is compared to her?

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What part did you like best about this bonus chapter?

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I suppose the bit of fluff near the end of the chapter, its hard to choose XD

7947271 Not at all. Sex is not just penetrative. She's got hands, mouth, massive tits and her thighs. He has a massive cock and a large tongue. So there fairly well set. If he really needs to pound so pussy there are always the other mares around town. And if they cant take him theres always the princess's. The dude has a lot of options.

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Yeah, I bet she would allow it too.

Did you like the bonus chapter?

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(This is before reading the bonus chap)

Big Mac, no matter what the universe would see, like the kind to be like that.

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Did you like the bonus chapter?

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(After)

Okay, nothing seems too out of place (of course me! It's a Bendy story for god's sake!). Anyway just like what Papa Dragon said, sex isn't just the dick going in the vagina, it can be done in several other ways. Like the premise of this story, I wouldn't mind a change in the stories when it comes to sex.

Also: public sex. Much approve. Also cum explosion

P.s. - happy Valentine's Day

leaned forward to slowly run her tongue down to lick the very thick tip

would she not be going up to reach the tip, before heading back down?

she, like the other before gently lifted his heavy, right

this sounds weird. comma's are a weak point for me but, I would remove the one after heavy and place one after before. Or reword the sentence a little.

Otherwise this was a nice little bonus.

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Thanks. I'll make the changes when I can.

Cute as fuck. My personal fetishs still scream for massive penetrations, but a sexy fluffy chapter of feels and dawns is enough for me :twilightsmile:

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She stood up to reach his shaft. So, i'm not sure I'll change it.

I will change the next thing though.

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What did you find cute about it?

7948533 Sure she stood to reach, but how does one slowly run down their tongue to reach the tip?

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Hmm, you have a point there.

Edit: Changed now.

7948534 It was a rather personal for them to demonstrate their affection differently from their otherwise impaired way. And they did it with love. U find that cute :twilightsmile:

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