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Good introduction, nice mechanics, the lore and world building check out in my books. Good job, keep up the superb job!
Oke Good start.
nice powers btw.
what is your favourite power?
Mine is Absolute thievery.
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My favorite power? Hmm, probably either art or nature embodiment. Absolute thievery is quite a great power thought
Quick question, will the protagonist change/evolve as he increases his power?
Traditionally, imps are at the bottom of the infernal hierarchy, but are capable of evolving/metamorphosing into more powerful demons/fiends if they increase their power.
Will our luckless fiend end up becoming an Archdemon if he lives long enough?
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Will he grow and change? In power and skills yes. Will he physically evolve into a different form? He does have a shape-shifting power that may grow with time. But for permanently changing forms, perhaps slight alterations but it is an "Impish" tale and there is a lot to say about not judging a book by its cover, albeit a pint sized fuzzy one that is dwarfed by almost all those around them.
As for becoming arch-demon, only time will tell.
Awesome start thus far.
In reality, unicorns once existed (there's fossils), though not the fairy tale kind of creature. Written descriptions from thousands of years ago described something resembling a blending of ox, goat, and rino.
Keep it going mate I'ma keep my eye on ya
Great so far!
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If you ever does become an archdemon it probably be near the end of this story and the beginning of a sequel or something like that at least that's how I would do it
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Same with absolute thievery you’re almost unstoppable
Two hundredth story that I’m tracking
wouldnt motion magic be able to do all the stuff gyro magic could?
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While both would cover some of the same basic areas, they have their own facets that the other cannot replicate
For example with gyro-telekinesis you are manipulating objects with gravity, making it so you could make an object weightless and float in place with no further influence, inverse its gravity making it float off into space, or amplifying an objects gravity field to either crush it or pull other object towards it. Basically gyro-telekinesis cannot generate gravity itself, but manipulate objects gravity field, as well as how it is effected by gravity in general.
With motion magic you can create kinetic blasts, charge objects with kinetic energy to either fire it at high speeds, exert force on impact, or maintain a constant velocity, create fields that accelerate or decelerate anything that passes through it, or pre program sets of motion into an object or person (such as forcing them to dance or mimic your motions)
Wait.
. . .
It's over, he wins, no contest, flawless victory.
Good story.
Oh, this is gunna be good.
So the purple text is the Tulpa?
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In a sense. I intend it as the other side of the character's personality, with one side being smart and caring but also overthinking and anxious, while the purple text being carefree fun-loving but somewhat impulsive, childish and odd.
Its just that due to their conflicting nature I expressed them as separate being, where one developed internally due to both human society generally not excepting those that are different as well as the characters anxiety which is amplified due to the first reason.
If you ever come across someone with strong anxiety in real life you will find that deep down there are aspects deep down that they don't express outward unless they grow to trust you. This is also present internally, they have an internal conflict with what they want to do or be, and their doubts, fears and perceptions of who they are supposed to be or how they are to act .
In the end it sort of developed into somewhat its own being, not a split personality, but more of two halves of a whole, two sides of a coin, a yin and yang if you will. through the story both sides will grow and develop and touch on this aspect more thoroughly down the road.
In the aspects that it is a being with its own feeling and opinions within the main characters head, yes it could be considered a Tulpa. But its memories and bonds are shared with the MC and while they may have conflicting opinions and different reactions ultimately it isn't a mental creation or being formed by the main character but instead they are one in the same.
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o-okay o.o
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Working on it
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Very good story i will be following it!
Simply. Amazing! It's so creative and written so well. Only one minuscule mistake I could barely tell and the character so far is intriguing. Keep writing can't wait for more!
I can't wait for the next Chapter so please continue I can be pass-int
Not bad, I await for the next update.
Begs for new chapter with eyes.
dead story.
Guess ah killed him then lol dead fic