The Second Story Underwear Thief

TThe Monkey Business
Equestria Girls
Adventure
Fluttershy is captured by animal smugglers.
Fluttershy (EqG)
mayorlight · 4k words · 32 1 · 2.1k views

When a thief starts breaking into Crystal Prep's girls' dormitory to steal underwear, Sugarcoat may be the only one who can unravel the mystery.

A quick, silly read in the vein of classic animated shorts.

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OmniFox

OmniFox #1 · Feb 13th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Ever heard of a talking dog doing a podcast?

The Abyss

The Abyss #2 · Feb 13th, 2017 · · ·

"A monkey that steals underwear?" asked Sunny incredulously.

My thoughts exactly.

Eyeswirl the Weirded

Eyeswirl the Weirded #3 · Feb 13th, 2017 · 1 · ·

And thus was born Sugarcoat: Monkey Wrangler!

Even then, she would still not be at ease until she got a clean bill of health from her physician the following week.

Heh. Big drama queen.

Also; I'm currently following you and fimfic didn't give me any kind of update for this story, I just saw it in the New Stories column.
Fimfic. Update me on things. Get it together, man.

Shadowsnake89

Shadowsnake89 #4 · Feb 13th, 2017 · 1 · ·

That was fun. The things people can train a primate to do.

mayorlight

mayorlight #5 · Feb 14th, 2017 · · ·

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Spike?

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Because Everything's Better with Monkeys!

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With all the time Sugarcoat spends with Fluttershy at the animal shelter, I wouldn't be surprised if she developed her own version of The Stare! It's tough not to use a character like Sunny as a - no pun intended - butt monkey.

OmniFox

OmniFox #6 · Feb 15th, 2017 · · ·

7947124 Since EQ Spike can talk now a podcast would be awesome.

pabrony

pabrony #7 · Feb 14th, 2018 · · ·

Honestly I was expecting one of the girls to emerge from their room screaming about missing some underwear after the monkey was taken away.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #8 · Feb 20th, 2018 · · ·

Wait, I thought Cinch is Sunny Flare’s mom?

mayorlight

mayorlight #9 · Feb 20th, 2018 · · ·

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In my head canon, Cinch is Sunny’s aunt. Cinch just doesn’t strike me as mother material.

Brony4Ever1992

Brony4Ever1992 #10 · Mar 14th, 2018 · · ·

7944215 Apparently it's previous owner was a perv

cybermurph04

cybermurph04 #11 · Jun 15th, 2018 · · ·

The part with the monkey climbing on Sunny cracker me up! XD

mayorlight

mayorlight #12 · Jul 3rd, 2018 · · ·

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That was my favorite part to write!

Sorry for my delayed response - I must've somehow marked your comment as 'Read'/'Replied.'

Scholarly-Cimmerian

Scholarly-Cimmerian #13 · Sep 16th, 2019 · 1 · ·

I've always had a soft spot for this fic. Stories with the Shadowbolts are always something I'm happy to see, and this almost feels a lot like it could be a hypothetical episode for some kind of Equestria Girls show! (Well... except for the fact that the monkey steals underwear. Kinda think that wouldn't fly with the rating of the actual EG! Oh well...)

mayorlight

mayorlight #14 · Sep 16th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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The Shadowbolts definitely deserve more love. Such a scenario in official EqG media would probably replace the undergarments with something innocuous like jewelry or accessories, but then it would lose much of its comedic punch.

Arthurian_Legend