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The Blessed One
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The Blessed One
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Hiatus already?
8455661
Thank you for pointing that out.
Oh for God's sake! That was my fault, I'm terribly sorry. I was too busy placing groups for the story that I forgot to mark it as Complete before it was published.
Nice story! I'm pretty sure she will carry another one. Sounds silly, but I would like to see a sequel showing their parenthood
This is why FimFanfic needs a tagging system.
'Reading'
Sudden surprise sex, I didn't read the tags.
I liked it enough to favorite it.
You did very well with this. I'll be linking it to my friends in the pony pregnancy Discord. Cheers.
Ehh... I might give this a look... okay, I detest clop and porn overall, but hell, I think I can cope now and again with some hunka chunka so long as there's some sort of actual story.
And my good sir, how dare you not shout our intrepid ladies personal endeavors with accolades and praise from the rooftops until the local constable told you to get off or they caught you in a net like a very obnoxious myna bird! In fact... you seem rather judgemental! HOW DARE YOU!
After all, what could be worse then being called a slut... I simply can't imagine.
And children suck
Which is why I endeavor to shove the little bastards off swings and steal their candy daily
8455692
Thank you, and I'll keep the idea on the table.
It only took two comments to get vote one for a sequel.
8455735
Really? I rather like tagging myself, I believe I'm good at it. Also, please be kind and courteous to others and place the spoiler bar over the Trigger Warning you copied.
8455753
Well, that's very good to hear. Glad to hear that I could impress even when the main part was unexpected. Thank you very much for the read.
8455890
They have their own Discord for this sort of thing? Neat, and thank you for sharing my work with them.
8455903
I'm not entirely sure how to respond to this. I laughed, I'll give you that.
8455952
I look forward to see it
Already excited for this because of this reason. Already saw the bitch person complaining about.
And even though I haven't read it yet, you already beat me to writing something and making it great. Told you that you were better than me.
8456021
Hehe, knew you'd like that part.
And don't get too cocky for me. This is far from my other stories, so you don't know if it's any good yet. Even if it is, I'd say I still have a decent ways to go, if your story list is anything to go by.
It's Cloud Kicker.
I can't believe I'm the one saying this, but... You should write a romance, no clop. As much as I love a good clop, you're too good for it.
8456151
The site's character tag keeps it as one word, so one word is probably fine.
8456192
Damnit, Knighty fucked up that one. Time to complain.
8455952
That we do. Obviously I'm biased (as one look at my stories will tell you) but honestly, it's not as uncommon a fetish as you might think.
8456033
You know very well I didn't take off till my successful story. And my stuff doesn't compare to yours sunce you've beaten me to writing things that are still on my list of things to write due to many reasons. He'll, you've written a better OC story than I ever could. My stuff will always be crap compared to yours and a few other people that you know.
8456223
While you're at it, could you tell him to change Colgate to Minuette?
It's 'in lieu of', not 'in loo of'. 'Loo' is slang for 'toilet'. Nitpicks aside, nice story.
Lol, such a wordy introvert. The length of this story is a bit daunting at first but was well worth it. It's actually funny how needy a pregnant woman can get, especially in the later stages. This story brings back some fond memories for me. GG 10/10 all the thumbs up.
8456151
There is a reason behind why I combine her usual two-word name. If combine, it doesn't add to the word count because it isn't a word. If separated, it now becomes two words everytime her name is said. I was afraid it would pad the word count a bit too much. If you can get Knighty to change it on her tag, I will go through and correct it to match.
8456153
I'm humbled by your praise. I've toyed with the idea of a Romanc-based Slice of Life story, but you have just made me seriously consider it. I will keep the idea on my table, and thank you very much for reading a the wonderful comment.
8456305
That's actually very nice to hear, and it's good to you guys have formed a community.
8456620
Whoopsie... Sorry about that, thanks for the pointer there.
8456742
Thank you for giving this the time despite its rather intimidating size. (For a One-Shot) I always love to hear I've brightened a reader's day, especially with memories.
8456341
Rubbish. I'll always see you as a mentor and role model, even if other begin to share your opinion of me surpassing the teacher. You'll always be someone I look up to, and nothing will ever change that.
Well then...I have no idea how you managed to make so many emotions work so well, but you had me with tears in my eyes by halfway and then playing those kinks perfectly without making it feel unnatural. That's a well earned fave right there!
All the underlined instances of 'who's' can be changed to 'whose'. "Who's" is short for "who is", whereas "whose" is a determiner and pronoun. The fourth instance (all in order as they appear) can be axed.
All in all, this was very well written! Super sweet, and you captured the moments perfectly. The only complaint I have is I find the overall length for the contents of the story a bit too long. There's nothing wrong with the prose, but it dragged on for a bit longer than I felt necessary.
I've read all your other stories, and I didn't think to follow you until I saw this story come out, so consider it well earned.
On another note, do you edit for others? I've got an upcoming clopfic, and I believe the story would greatly benefit from your expertise with prose. We can exchange favours for when you put out another story!
8456799
http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Cloud_Kicker
Her name is two words. It isn't padding your word-count to use her correct name. It is in fact a misspelling to combine it into one word. You don't have to fix your spelling if you don't want to, but it is going to make it less enjoyable to read for everyone who does know how to spell her name correctly and expects stories to be, y'know, spelled right.
I've already messaged Knighty. It will get fixed whenever/if-ever he gets around to it.
Boo just boo
8456799
Just now finished and this was a great read.
But yup, better than what I may or most likely never accomplish due to varying reasons besides what you know already, than I ever hope to achieve in my writing.
Yeet yeet fam this fic is great. I'm not going to say why though because I'm an asshole commenter who isn't going to help you improve. yeet.
Another yeet for good measure
8456815
Compliments from you carry heavy meaning, considering what you yourself have created. Thank you very much for the words of praise, and your welcome for the feels.
8456834
It is an honor to impress one of your stature among the FIM writer community, and thanks for the pointers, my editor got them all fixed up. Speaking of my editor, it brings me to your final request/offer. I'm more than willing to be a consultant for you, but I'm no editor. Should you want the person behind my story's grammatical correctness, Cleric is your man to speak to.
8457041
I'll be sure to fix it up once the tag is corrected. I don't exactly want the tag to not match the name used in the story. Rest assured, if or when Knighty corrects it, I'll change it.
8457214
8457507
Best comment/review ever, Yeet/10.
8457480
I have faith in you, my friend. You'll finish up what's delaying you and be back to your usual, unstoppable self in due time. Life is full of roadblocks, but they all have one thing in common: They never last.
Beautiful, just beautiful. I really liked this read and slightly want you to continue the story. Just saying.
8455735
Someone sounds triggered about triggered warnings.
8457578
And that's what I meant. You know of the roadblocks I've told you, but there are a few others I might not be able to pass because they're out of my control.
Never been once for pregnancy as a fetish, but as a story element it works well, and the sex in this was pretty damn good. The characters have a great dynamic! Other than that so don't have much to say, but as a writer I know how much a comment means.
Write more horse Mr. Blessed.
As much as I love good clop, I feel like this shouldn't be clop, like, at all. A pure romance would've been so much better with your style. I dunno why, but I just feel that way.
8457578
Oi, where is the continuation at?
This fic has it all, god story, nice characters, not forced, and the clop itself is amazing.
My Wife's Son: How I Became a Cuck-
The Fanfiction
Damn, that was cute and steamy at the same time!
It seems our would-be-adventurer will get his adventure after all: the adventure of Parenthood
Good story, the emotions were especially believable and the clop was well-written so an all-'round 7/10 due to the way it drags just a little towards the end.
It feels like she's simply using him. They only became intimate right after she was reminded that he could leave her alone at any time...
8457751
Well, call number three or four for a sequel. I promise you guys that it is on my table, I'm just unsure what or how I would do it.
8458090
Hey, Sunny! Nice to see you enjoyed it.
8458186
You are the second with that opinion. Apparently I'm good at Slice of Life/Romance? I don't exactly feel like I write it very well myself, but I will trust the opinions of my readers.
8458349
Thank you for the complimentary words, and I'll say again, a continuation is on my table.
8458396
I'm interested to know how you would have reacted placed in the situation. I'm not being sarcastic either, it is a legitimate interest.
8458507
Well, I gave it the best I had on the fluff parts.
8458735
Arguably the hardest adventure of all of them. Thank you for the review.
8458821
A prequel would have explained that it was "you" who had insisted upon a platonic relationship when you'd first moved in with her. That was only ever mentioned in one sentence, which was sort of vague. That bit was my fault.
8458980
Suggest she go incognito grocery shopping at the nearest Planned Parenthood.
8458984
I honestly don't know why I wasn't expecting that to be your answer. Considering it was, I won't bother arguing with you over the morals behind it, or rather the lack of morals behind it. And in regards to the new title you gave my story, allow me to give you a word definition.
Cuckold: The husband of an adulteress, often regarded as an object of derision. If you can't comprehend why this doesn't play any part in this story, you have my pity.
I'll not be engaging in a debate in my own comment section. Respond in a Private Message beyond this point, or don't respond at all.
Like a case of hepatitis I have returned and was never really gone in the first place.
And what hoo... a 3 to 11 ratio. Huh. I wonder if it was my personal disdain for porn, the fact I dared to mock people who reduce others as things to be used, or that I bully children. And I'm doing those little fucks a favor! We need look no further then academia to see what coddling them has done!
So... why a second person. He seemed to have a lot of character for what is supposed to be who supposed to be the one we project ourselves on.
Thats a long way of saying "No dear, of course I value you for your mind."
She would do well to heed the sage wisdom of Steel Panther
No. This Cloud, and the one I assume shes an archetype of, are just foolish. Speaking personally, hell, I enjoyed the act and all, but really, I enjoyed learning about the person I fucked and spending even more. Usually. But this mare has something Chengar's didn't: a person who gave them a dose of reality. He's her friend despite his dislike of her behavior, as opposed to winning Cloud who just had everyone around her just shrugging and laughing that was who she was.
8459081
Lrn2Meme.
8458984
Honestly, I can't believe people like you can post crap like that with a straight face. You really need to be more respectful towards women. A man's happiness isn't determined by the biological father of his wife's son, but by the familial bond they develop. And don't make being a cuk out to be a joke, it's perfectly respectable for a man to love his wife's 1st and 2nd boyfriends.
Oh the joys of not being able to use the proper tone in order to say what you meant. Just like on the internet if you try to write without emoticons and explicitly stating your intonation behind it!
... kinda like an Elcor from Mass Effect
This though... this was beautiful. Cloud sure was quite clingy, and it all made sense. We'll never know whether it was truly the hormones talking or if it was genuine affection... time will tell.
Plus she REALLY needed to get laid, she suddenly decided to not sleep around and her body still had its cravings, which probably rocketed to unfathomable heights thanks to the hormonal imbalance. But hey, at least she was able to scratch that particular itch, and also find out that it was with someone who genuinely cares for her!
I like this sort of fluff.
Also, that description of her body there at the start. Indeed a goddess in pony form. Dat fluff!
Okay, I'll be the first one to admit, I'm not a big fan of clop stories, namely because most of the time they're just focused on the sex itself and nothing else, but this was different. It had a plotline, and the lead-up worked quite well. It's also very sensual in a way, so props to you for that.
8459547
How's your wife and my kids?
8459547
He isn't worth the time of day, nor any mental capacity on your part. Simply ignore him.
8459631
I am thrilled to have impressed you again... Fluff.
Pahnazd, my good friend, good to see you again.
8460016
Comments like yours really have special meaning to us authors. To say that you aren't a large supporter of something, to then come back saying I did it well enough to bring you enjoyment brightens my day by an entire sun.
8460031
Enough. Trolling me is one thing, trolling my readers is another. Do it again and you'll be the first commenter I remove forcibly from a story of mine. Don't test me, you will not get a second warning.
8460064
Knock yourself out nugget.
As it happens, no I do not!
And hey, it's a story, isn't it? A story with decidedly adult themes, but a story nonetheless, and I think it's a rather good one.
A decent preamble makes for better happy-grownup-funtimes in any occasion, as far as I'm concerned anyway.