Twilight and friends meet an alien. Humanity ensues.
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Wish the person wasn't dead. They open the door to leave and there the human is, covered in dirt and looming pissed off. Would have been funny.
In the mean time, where our human burial site lies, there is his ship. Still booted up, sparkling with electricity. A tiny little light beeping on the control panels. Keeping the machine alive, and sending out its last attempt to be rescued. The beacon was on, and it called for friends...
Dun Dun Duuuuun.
poor zordon
7864302 Sounds like a story you could write.
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Eh, I lost the spark already. I never wrote a legit fanfic/fimfic in this case, or actually any kind of story really. It would be a half done, failed attempt that would be a disgrace of a fan made sequel of your story, so I rather leave it alone lol
kind of reminds me of a segment in "cultural artifacts" where celestia and luna turn into humans in a dream and later explain that while they were humans a lot of machinery and mechanics that they didn't get when they were ponies simply made sense when they were humans and that they were basically thinking more thoughts faster. not smarter per se but like a computer that can go through 1000 calculations a minute compared to a computer that only crunches 400 thoughts a minute.
i always thought that was a really good way to clearly define just how different humans and ponies are without giving humans some mystical ability out of the left field. the humans would just be viewed as basically a mad scientist while the humans would view ponies as slow to change and unimaginative.
would probably be FUCKING hard to write though since the core of the story relies on your human imagination trying to emphathise with a imagined and alien way of thinking.
I should probably say how this story was the good old "Human ends up in Equestria and ponies are fascinated by the fact that we are superior even dough we lack nearly every survival skill possible"...
but I'm not going to, cause this story was interesting, nice to read and it has SPAAAAACESHIPS!
Up you go.
Great start! Please continue, I love stories that break down what it means to be Human. :)
Maybe have Humanized Rainbow Dash chase after Pony Applejack to see how long Dash can last, and have Humanized Rarity study some of Ponykinds longest hardest unsolved science equations?
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What would that be?
Here's an idea if you want to take the story past one chapter:
If Twilight is curious enough about human beings, she could try and reach planet Earth itself, to both investigate and potentially make First Contact if she finds human beings to be civilized creatures.
Those bracelets could easily help them blend in while they explore the planet.
7865813 Sounds great. You want to write it?
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Maybe. I'm about to start school, so I don't know if I'll have time. But let me brainstorm some ideas, and then I'll message you about them. And we'll see where we go from there, okay?
7865827 Works for me. Let me know if you need editing.
7864465 Well, the ponies live in peace, humans live in almost constant warfare.
Also, you need to take into accounts that most humans will NEVER understand how a silicon chip functions. Geniuses are the exception, not the rule.
Given some people I've had to explain such things as atmospheric pressure any number of other basic science concepts to in painstakingly simple terms or they become utterly lost, I have to wonder if 2 thoughts PER DAY might be an overestimate of general human mental capacity.
'Cause that's what you want to hear when you're standing naked in front of your sister and her cute friends. Thanks, Twilight. Thanks a lot.
7865870 Oh you know how it goes. The only time complete strangers ever really notice one another is when they say or do something really dumb.
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"Aww, the mammoth got away."
"Like fucking hell it did. We are going to follow it and kill it."
"What if it goes really far?"
"We are going to follow it, and kill it!"
Humans won Earth by beating stubborn assholes.
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Gasp! it's the pictionary Muhammed foretold of in Southpark. You've put a jihad out on the entire FIMfiction community you monster. Now I have to be on the lookout for potentially self hating muslim extremists.
Fortunately companion animals like dogs and sapient animals are off the menu for most humans. I can't speak for all humans, but a species that developed teddy bears as the international symbol of peace and which literally represents 'a line that will not be crossed' cannot be all bad.
In this story, did the human accidentally park his spaceship on top of Nightmare Moon?
Two things:
1. The idea that a human penis is smaller than average based on the size of the body is false. In truth we have some of the largest genitalia of all mammals. A horse that was human sized would be 3 inches long, for example.
2. Is this a complete story? it doesn't quite feel like one. There's no overarching conflict that gets resolved.
And what happened to the idea of a "human" spike? This needs a second chapter, at least. It's that good.
7866483 "Can we stop now?"
"no."
"but its been two hours."
"and i don't care!"
Why would the human give them tech to transform?
Now I'm wondering.
Good story.
Hey!! We got hands!🖐