Discord's long lost little brother returns, Celestia finds him amusing, Luna thinks he's hilarious... but Discord, let's just say he's less than stoked to see his brother again, at first.
Will shenanigan's happen between the two lords of chaos, only time will tell.
(Who am I kidding, we're talking about the lord of chaos and the younger brother that once upon a time idolized him, of course shenanigan's are gonna happen)
In the end, CHAOS WILL REIN SUPREME!
(Potentially a multi-story 'series' if reader's would like that)
That was bucking funny. You get an upvote.
Agreed
I NEED MOAR
7993883 on it's waaaaay!
Could use a little more meat on it's bones, try fleshing out your scenes a bit.
Puns!
Otherwise, very well done, I enjoy this type of story and yours certainly has potential.
Looking forward to more ~Dollars.
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7994059 yayyyyyy!
A bit too heavy on fourth-wall breaking and i lost interest about halfway through, but it's not horrible or anything
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7994794 The fourth wall must be shattered
The fourth wall was broken so much that my phone screen cracked
8697993
that's so meta....
Anton: Now, how do you put her back together?
Discord: Face palms.