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The Cutie Mark Crusaders have been getting closer to Diamond Tiara ever since she turned over a new leaf. However, a strain is put on their new relationship when Diamond Tiara reveals she has a crush on Sweetie Belle. Can new love blossom and old friendships survive at the same time?
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Oh boy, this is either going to either end really good or really bad.
Relationship wise I mean.
why cant ONE person write hetero ships, I don't care if you make up an oc to do it, i'm just tried of all the 2nd person/lesbian romance stories
7575866 Hey, if lifeofthe6 wants to write for this pairing they can go ahead. I'm actually interested to see where this goes.
I haven't shipped Sweetie Bloob and Dim Tim together, but after reading this first chapter...
Well...I'm...adjusting.
In all seriousness, this was a neat first chapter to the story. I am interested in seeing where this'll go next, how Sweetie Belle'll react, and the meal Rarity'll cook for the two.
7575866 Well, if you're THAT desperate for some hetero love, then you can go check out my story "Small Town Life," which is OC focused but features straight relationships.
7575915 is this a developed oc, cause i find 2nd person or anon fics a bit lazy
Considering they have the same mane and coat colour scheme, only all mixed up, I'd say this particular romantic attachment has been in the cards for quite some time now. My best wishes to the new lovebirds.
7575933 Very developed OCs, yes, and 3rd person perspective. I've never been one for the 2nd person.
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If you're looking for hetero ship fics here is a group full of them.
7575866 People tend to be more interested in the characters the show focuses on, and those are almost exclusively female. So that's why all the lesbian stories. And you get the 2nd person self-insert stuff for the same reason most romance novel heroines have extremely modern views and why boy bands sing about generic girls.
But as Anko mentioned, there's a group for hetero-ships, so you should be able to find plenty of them there. Even a few for DT (mostly with Snips, Snails, or Spike).
7576174 Snails is probably the most popular to ship with DT, but there aren't a lot of those, and one of them hasn't been updated in a few years.
7576185 Yeah. I keep telling that author to update the stupid thing. Sometimes he tells me he's made a little progress, but mostly he tells me to quit talking to myself. But I'll keep pestering him until he finally gets the story done.
And now to talk about the actual story ;)
Should be fun to see what just happened hit Sweetie Belle.
Structure-wise, I think the story could have used a little scene early on, say when DT first sighs, where one of the CMC says something like "You don't suppose it is DT/her or SS, do you?" and then the CMC dismissing it because of the recent past. Just seems a little bit strange for the CMC to not ponder that it is one of the rich girls when the gifts are expensive with fancy paper.
And that said, bring on the SweeTiara!
Money don't buy love? Uh, I beg to differ; I visit the red light district quite frequently and Krystal loves me plenty. I even get a loyal customer discount.
7576346 Sorry, there were some formatting issues when I moved the story from MSWord to FiMfic. It's fixed now. As for the scene suggestion, I appreciate the feedback but I think I'll keep it the way it is for now.
7576174 yes, well I'm a memeber of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (mormon's a derogatory term) and I don't practice homosexuality, so it's hard to connect with most romance stories, plus I personally think that Homosexual relationships don't have the same effect as a traditional relationship
I'm not trying to be homophobic, It's what I beleive
Maud: This is Boulder, my pet.
Boulder: THE boulder has conflicted feelings about his recent life choices.
7575950 So I wasn't the only one who thought of this!
No Sweetie, I don't think you made a big mistake. If your friends can't accept who you chose to date, that's their problem.
Congratulations. Your story has now been upgraded from 'tracking' to 'favourites'. WAY HAY HAY.
7608135 That isn't the mistake, lying to the other crusaders is.
I really want to read some cutesy moments of those two.
I would like to see her learning to love Diamond Tiara and not just acting like she loved her too.
Don't get me wrong I totally love what happened in this chapter, but since Sweetiebelle was never sure about it, and Diamon was the one in love with her, I don't want to read something like : " Oh I knew all the while that I was in love with Diamond, I just had to make sure I was right.
It would be more interessting if I see her actually noticing all the small things she starts to like about her, and I really hope that Rarity (well maybe at least her a bit), and especially Cadance trying to fore things to proceed much faster than they would be comfortable with it.
Good work! This chapter made my jittery with anticipation to see if sweetie belle was going to reject her.
I think as soon as they aren't there anymore, she could pretend she got it herself.
Nice to see this story again, this is ony of the few where I don't feel like there is some bad suprise, I'm talking about story topics that are maybe difficult to get used to. I had enough of...certain stuff, I better don't describe it more in this story. Because of the E rating, I'm just glad to have less complicated stuff sometimes.
Oh my gosh, I am so excited to read more! Great job so far, I love this story!
I haven't cared for that before but now I notice it is pretty stupid of her to demand something like this. She can't force her feelings to come out faster.
I haven't remembered this, but it's nice, after taking a quick peek I got an idea about what happened so far. Sometimes i feel like I have three stories with the same idea and that doesn'T help with remembering what it was if I haven'T seen all of them in a while.
So, minor mistake on your part, Sweetie said a sapphire would be more her color, but the jewelry Diamond held up was a sapphire.
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The emphasis in that sentence is on the word "my". Sweetie was saying a sapphire was more of her color than Scootaloo's, though Diamond Tiara took it to mean that Sweetie wanted the necklace.
Well that escalated from a small talk and politeness.
When Diamond Tiara said that I took in a sharp breath, that hurt ME and I have the most loving and caring parents anypony could hope for
Wow just...wow. Great job.
Oh man this story is so good I love it so much! Great job!