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ellie_


Ellie here! I'm a fillyfooling and coltcuddling junky who ships everything predictable, sweet & sexy. Feel free to enjoy all of my stories or message me! ❤

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This story is a sequel to An Apple for Ya Trouble


Following where An Apple for Ya Trouble left off, a collision and an awkward meeting can prove to be a lot to handle for little Scootaloo!

She just can't seem to get that pretty girl out of her head! What's going on with her?


Just a little side note: All of the "foals" are a tiny bit aged up. More like 8th grade/freshman in high school versus elementary kids. :twilightsmile:


The best team in the world;
My "big picture" guy: Sirius_Face
My smooth criminal/editor: scuba12
My main idea man: TheMusicalBoy93
My favorite cheerleader: rainbowwolfblitz

Disclaimer; Cover art is not mine

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Comments ( 156 )

hmm can't wait to give this a nice read later after im done some chores :derpytongue2:

This was just fucking sweet.

I'll just going to go ahead and say that this turned out really well, and I'm not just saying that because I helped :derpytongue2: Really great job, ellie!!!


If anyone were to take advice from me, this is what I would wish it to be.
That it matters not what others may say. What matters most is your passion, day by day.
-Scuba12

well this seems like it going to be good

I don't usually like CMC romance - I think it's kind of funny.

But I must say I do love this! Between your amazing way of portraying Scootaloo (it seems like her, but older and in love!) and even kicking it to Diamond in the end, I would say you very much earned a like and a favorite!

I'm starting to really dig these humanized one-shot shipfics. :rainbowkiss:
Hope we'll have more of these from you, and I also hope that they'll be as great as these previous ones you already made.
And yay for ScootaBelle itself. It's such a great ship, and I'm happy that it's starting to grow back on me.
:scootangel::heart::unsuresweetie:
(So in this story, Twilight is a princess before the CMC even met for the first time ? Is this some kind of alternate universe ? Or did Biff took the Delorean and changed the timeline again?)

Nice little story.

Dammit, ellie, I keep trying to trim down my Read Later list and you keep releasing stories I want to read! :raritycry: You heartless wench! :raritydespair:

Can't wait to get to this one. We need more ScootaBelle! Also, congrats on the Feature. :ajsmug:

A good sequel to a good story. Ellie, you just never cease to impress me. :pinkiehappy:

gaysaders...SNRRKT AHEM
Everything else was wonderfully done. That part just...I was like...dafuq?

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Hope you guys enjoy reading it when you do! :rainbowkiss::heart:

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Yes they most certainly are! Thank you, dear :heart:

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Thanks for reading!!

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Aww, I'm glad you liked it so much! It really means a lot :raritystarry::heart:

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You're more awesome! :raritywink:

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Hahaha I probably will end up writing more :rainbowlaugh: Glad you liked it!

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Thank you :rainbowkiss:

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Glad you think so! :twilightsmile::heart:

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Aww, thank you!! You're too kind :scootangel:

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Bahahaha! I just couldn't resist :raritywink: Glad you liked the rest of it :rainbowlaugh:

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Ahh, yes; you're not seeing the last of me by far! :raritywink: I might even write more of this amazing ship...:scootangel:

Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! And to answer your question, I kind of meshed it. It's not quite an AU, but I sort of just...put Princess Twilight in with the whole CMC meeting like...haha, it's complicated but it's not an AU but it kind of is :rainbowlaugh::heart:

You're paying for my treatment.

For diabetes.

Which i got from this story.

Which is so sweet it gave me diabetes.

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I'll be praying and paying! Ahaha thank you for reading! :heart:

Awwwww, that was sweet.

"Y-yeah, Diamond..." a quite, nasally voice cuts through all the chatter and everyone stares in disbelief as Silver Spoon frowns at her best friend. "That's pretty rude of you to say considering that most of the population are lesbians."

*snrk* Okay, that part was kinda silly. But most of it was sweet.

Actually, the part with Diamond Tiara made me a bit sad since in my primary headcanon, she's one of the few characters I've assigned to be gay by default. (In fact, she actually ends up with Scootaloo eventually.)

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.... Diamond doesnt like lesbians in a country where the mares to stallions are 3:1

A great story for the best ship!

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Any chance you might make a sequel to this sequel where they kill DT?
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:rainbowlaugh: I Just had to say it :trollestia:

I suppose it runs in the family since you showed up with the biggest dike of them all!"

It's *dyke, actually. That is the one that's a slur, and *dike is the one that refers to a part of a dam. :twilightsheepish:

Gah, this was too cute. I was grinning the whole way through! Embarrassed, uncertain, lovestruck Scootaloo is best Scootaloo! :heart: Though I'm wondering who you would match AB up with, since they're the "gaysaders" apparently. :ajsmug:

Take my fave yet again! You're starting to make me like humanized romance... Damn you. :heart:

Typos
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Mom will be mad if come home empty-handed.
if I come

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My heart nearly stops when I realize who's sitting on the edge of the water.
water fountain. (or: at the edge of the water)

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The statement completely shocks us into a complete halt when we look upon the scene before us.
Remove: completely (too repetitive)


Aside from the typos I just didn't like this story, sorry but it broke my suspension of disbelief somewhere around Twilight being a princess and just kept hacking away at it from there on...

ways to get stains out of clothes, best ways to clean for cheap...
Page one of one: Viniger. 'Well that was a short book...' (Excuse my snarkiness but it's too obvious.)

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Alrightio then. Thanks for the tips!

This was just to damn sweet :heart: now if we can get a side ending of DT finding her dad kissing a guy, then I would die of laughing

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Oh my gosh that's embarrassing - I'll fix it soon haha! Thanks!

And to be honest, I think when Babs hits the scene, that'll be the ship :ajsmug: Incest is wincest! :rainbowlaugh:

Thank you so much!! Gah I can't get over that you like my work :raritystarry::heart:

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OH MY GOD. Everybody, that is the unofficial ending!!!

Anyways, glad you liked it! :heart:

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You're welcome! :twilightsmile: And yes... Incest is most definitely wincest. :ajsmug: If you write AppleSeed, I think I might have to marry you. :raritywink:

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*quietly adds AppleSeed to my list of things to write while buying an engagement ring*

:rainbowlaugh::heart:

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*quietly shops for dresses while waiting for a certain story to appear in my Feed*

:rainbowlaugh: :heart:

Great job with the story ellie_ i simply loved it! and i also really loved the ending :twilightsheepish: keep up the great work :heart: oh and congrats on get this story featured :pinkiehappy:

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Aww thank you! :heart: I always look forward to your comments - you're becoming a quick favorite reader of mine :raritywink:

1. Excellent job on keeping continuity between the stories.
2. Interesting take on the show's continuity mixing one of the first episodes with the end of season 4. Like holy crap perfectly blended.
3. IT'S SO CUUUUUUUTE!!!! Seriously, this is just how I like fluff to be written. I have butterflies in my tummy from this. It made me feel good. If only I'd met my girlfriend like that.

10/10 will probably read again and again.

PS: You hit all of my favorite ships between this and the last story. :yay:

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About the ships thing - yassss. I approve of your ships :raritywink:

And thank you for the comment! I'm glad you actually enjoyed the combination of CMC meeting and Princess Twilight. I thought it flowed well so thank you for appreciating it :twilightsmile:

I'm glad you enjoyed all the way around! :heart:

Alright, finally finished reading this through the cat noises. I must say, you are possibly the best romance writer I've ever seen.

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Oh my goodness...Glad you liked it, but stop making me blush! :twilightblush:
Haha thank you for reading!!

5582162 Well it's true, not many I've seen can make me so entranced in a romance. As you can see, I didn't need to read the whole thing before I knew it would be a favorite, you really are excellent.

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Aww...Well, it's embarrassing that I'm such a good writer apparently and all I can say is thank you, but truly your words mean a lot :heart:

Woo-hoo!
Flutterdash!
*followed beforehand anyways*

This is probably better than its predecessor, probably since you know the style better. I especially liked how everything didn't feel quite as forced as the prequel, and how relatable the characters are. Job well done, sir/madam, you have my utmost respect!

~Wywint

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Madam, thank you very much! :heart:

And thanks for reading and following! Hope I don't disappoint :raritystarry:

The story really did come out pretty great. It's a sweet love story, touching and a little unpredictable. Stories like this are the sweetest things to read for good moment feels. :ajsmug:

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Thank you!! It was awesome working with you - you really gave it that deeper feeling and rounded it out well. Glad you like how it turned out :rainbowkiss::heart:

I'm getting a Sakura Trick vibe from this story.

YES! Its finnaly here.

Quite a nice story. The only thing I feel is a bit off is the pacing of Scootaloo's emotional development feels a bit rushed. There is also the issue that the whole story feels like a fait accompli - Scoots never seems to worry that Sweetie won't feel the same towards her, or even if she'll even see Sweetie again after crashing into her and running off. A bit more dramatic tension would have been nice. Still, this one earns an upvote.

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Nah; Filthy Rich X Granny Smith to really rustle DT's jimmies. :ajsmug:

This story is just adorable, making me feel all fluffy on the inside! :rainbowkiss: Let´s just say that you, and all the people helping you, did not disappoint. Keep Big Lesbian Land Equestria going! :yay:

Hope this gets featured :pinkiehappy:

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