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Ellie here! I'm a fillyfooling and coltcuddling junky who ships everything predictable, sweet & sexy. Feel free to enjoy all of my stories or message me! ❤

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Sundays are always special for her; but, through the thick and thin, this was most certainly Rarity's best Sunday ever.


Disclaimer; Cover art by GlancoJusticar

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I believe this is the art source you are looking for http://glancojusticar.deviantart.com/art/Thanks-379706065

A delightful story. I admit I was slightly disappointed to see that it wasn't the SunDagio sequel, but I'll certainly never complain about more well-written Rarijack.

Y'know, I'd like to think that Equestria is one big lesbian land and that's why there's so few stallions...

The best kind of headcanon

Awesome job, really excellent. I had a large smile on my face the whole time I read it. It had a nice pace, and I absolutely adore how you wrote Rarity. It feels like her, but different enough that you know she is still a growing child that will one day become Rarity.
There are a few pieces of dialogue that don't feel like a kid would say them

"Manehattan?! My, my, Applejack, we are going to be the best of friends!"

that line for example.
All in all an excellent job.

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I'll certainly never complain about more well-written Rarijack

Couldn't agree more.

This is so awesome! Like, my 2 OTP's in one story! Thank ya madam! Thank you so much! :yay:

nice story I was a bit surprise by the fact it was a back story though but nice over all

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Thank you very much, kind sir :moustache:

I apologize for the lack of sequel, but I'm glad you still like RariJack! :pinkiehappy: And yes, yes it most certainly is the best headcanon :rainbowlaugh:

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Aww, you're too kind! :raritystarry:

That was exactly my goal, so I'm glad it sounded like "Little Rarity" most of the time! I'm happy you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy::heart:

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Noo~ Thank you for having some awesome OTPs :raritywink::heart:

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Yay I surprised someone! Haha I always like that element :rainbowlaugh:
Glad you liked it!

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Thank you very much! Glad it was a strange, but helpful coincidence :rainbowderp::heart:

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Noooo..... Thank you more for writing this story!

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Thanks!
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Awesome! Heehee I agree 100%~ Thanks for reading :heart:
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Thank you, oh great and powerful one :raritywink::heart:
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Thanksss. :rainbowkiss:

I can truly say that I enjoyed this, gives you a strong feeling when you know that these characters will grow to become who they are now. Character growth, I love it! :heart:

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Ah great! Glad you enjoyed it :raritywink:
I definitely wanted to perceive the characters as closely as I could so I'm glad that it worked out! :heart:

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Great! Glad you did :twilightsmile::heart:

It was a good story, and I really liked it.

But how did AJ's family live in Manehatten, and Granny Smith had lived in Ponyville for a very long time before AJ?

:duck:

(I'm really joking, but seriously dough)

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Glad you liked it!
And well...I suppose I just kind of added in that bit from 'The Cutie Mark Chronicles' where Applejack briefly lives with her Aunt and Uncle Orange in Manehattan :twilightsmile: Sorry for the confusion!
But thank you for reading and enjoying :heart:

I liked it. Also I will upvote anything with Scootabelle because I am a chump.

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Heehee ScootaBelle is the best filly ship! :heart:
And thanks for reading :raritystarry:

Come buy our orchard fruits,
Come buy, come buy:
All ripe together
In summer weather,
Morns that pass by,
Fair eves that fly;
Come buy, come buy

Wow! Im impressed! I don't usually don't find a 1st person point of view mlp story.... Awesome! And I must agree with something... There aren't so many stallions in ponyville so I'm guessing half of the population is Lesbian.... :rainbowlaugh:

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Oh my gosh - 'The Goblin Market' right?? i hope so, I will look like a fool if it's not
But I take it you enjoyed? Haha hopefully! :raritywink:
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Yes~ realistic headcanon is realistic :rainbowlaugh:
And I'm glad you enjoyed it! I mostly write 1st POV so...yup! :heart:

Wow! This story was really really good!

I'm not really a fan of shipping Rarity and Applejack, but you may have changed my mind! :twilightsmile:

I don't read a lot of first person stories but this one was amazing!

Hopefully we can see a sequel of this in Sweetie Belle's POV

I'm off to read your other stories!:pinkiehappy:

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It's a cute little thing. :pinkiesmile: Good job.

Goblin Market probably isn't that appropriate, thematically, but your story happened to make me think of it.

Wow, um... this has only been on this site for a couple hours (at most), and it's already hit the feature box. Congrats! have a Ditzy:derpytongue2:

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Ah, yes. Goblin Market is a gem, but it's a bit more...grim than this :rainbowlaugh:

And thank you! Glad to hear you enjoyed it :raritystarry:
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Yes I'm as surprised as you!! But thank you, nonetheless :twilightsmile::heart:

This was a rather cute little story, though I confess some surprise that it hit the feature box as fast as it did, especially with a low follower and story count. Very good job.

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Trust me, I'm even more surprised! Haha honestly :derpytongue2:
But I'm glad you enjoyed it so thank you for reading!

Well, I hope you like getting your notifications blown to smithereens.

Anyway, great work on this piece. Strong composition and well, definitely a simple piece to read before I read a paper about ecosystems.

Have a like and a favorite.

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I most certainly do :raritywink:

And thank you very much! Glad I could entertain you before, well...that :twilightsheepish: haha!

5530730 Eh, all in the life of an English major. I'm used to it. :rainbowwild:

Can never have too much Rarijack, I tell you hwat.

Taking this story into my headcanon along with the bit from Crystal Empire, and now I've got this mental image of Applejack dropping these slightly-cheesy romantic lines on Rarity over the years, and Rarity just eating them up.

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Agreed and agreed! That's an adorable mental image!! :rainbowkiss:

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed :pinkiehappy::heart:

A nicely written little story... it's nice seeing these in the featured box. Well done :twilightsmile:

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Aww, thank you very much :heart:

I must say, normally I'd just leave a like for these types of stories and be done with it. But this...this was different in an incredibly good way. This was beautifully done and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm not sure if it was the characterization, the overall presentation, simply RarityxApplejack, humanized ponies, or just a mix of all those, but I cannot leave this story without faving it. Excellent job Ellie.

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Well my most sincerest of thank you's then! :raritystarry: Whether it was one, more or all of those things, I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless! :twilightsmile:
Thank you! :heart:

A cute little story about one of the best ships is the best way to start the day :ajsmug::raritystarry:

Good job :raritywink:

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Thank you so much ohmygosh I'm such a big fan of yours!
Truly, it means a lot~ :raritystarry::heart:

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"Pretty hat for a pretty girl."
"Good things are better when they're a rarity."

Just... years of lines like this. Never running out. Rarity melting.

I never really thought about what would a Young RariJack story look like. (Despite GlancoJusticar and WhiteDiamonds fanarts)
Now I know : it triples the cuteness of the ship ! :rainbowkiss:
I didn't knew RariJack could get this cute, we need more stories like these !

Well, this was certainly interesting. But I like it, I suppose.

That was lovely.

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Aww, thank you :twilightsmile: They certainly are the cutest :heart:

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Well I'm glad you gave it a chance and even more happy you liked it! Points accepted happily~ :pinkiehappy:

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Glad you think so - thank you for reading :raritystarry:

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Thank you~! :rainbowkiss:

I actually took time to read this. I don't often read other stories on this site but I must say I found this one to be enjoyable. Very nice.

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Well thank you very much :twilightsmile: Even better that it was a fruitful endeavor! :heart:

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Speaking of, does this mean Rarity and Applejack were together before Sweetie and Scootaloo even met ?
Is this early season one ? Is this an alternate universe ?
Did the RariJack happened before the ScootaBelle ? :rainbowderp:

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Well...yes, I suppose it would mean that RariJack happened before ScootaBelle happened! There's no real "canon" for how Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle met, they were just together at the party underneath the table when they met Applebloom so I just kind of created my own canon and ran with it :rainbowlaugh:
It's not really an AU, but I suppose maybe it could be interpreted that way!

The D'awwws I agree ponyville is full of mare/mare couples which is why there is so few stallions in the show.

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