"When I get old, I am going to be: Rice. Frisco style." - Ed 2004
Chrysalis hatches an evil plan to fillynap the new born princess, replace it with a changeling, and harness its power to rule Equestria!
...
Her children aren't as eager.
Author's (un)originality: I'm pretty sure there's ton of others who think this will happen in season six...but I wrote it anyway...ya know, just in case it doesn't.
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I like this. Shawn is actually pretty funny. Keep it up!
Yeah, I'd imagine getting hurled across Equestria might make someone a bit prone to freaking out at the prospect of it happening again.
Some grammatical errors I spotted:
pony's
"The" should be all lowercase, because dialogue grammar.
"The" should be all lowercase.
Period/full-stop after "chance" should be a comma, since it comes before the ending quotation mark and is followed by a conversation attribution.
Fun fact: In folkloar, Changelings are creatures that fairies replace with stolen babies.
I guess that's kinda why I'm hoping this will happen in season six
Oh my gosh, I forgot about that particular tidbit in their origins
Now you got me hoping for a kidnapping more.
Looking at the Tragedy tag fills me with worry...
And what exactly are you doing now?
A promising start.
I'm curious where it goes.
May had found an error:
Should be uppercase, since it's a name.
... This will somehow lead to the royal pair extending an offer of peace to Chryssie since the attempts have just gotten pathetic, won't it?
Mixed feelings about the execution, but...the premise is interesting enough I'll keep watching, at least.
Well, now he's here he can get a good meal before being shot away, right?
Keep going! ;)
I had a similar idea, you know, the kidnapping part, but hopefully it can still be interesting if you write it well.
Dear lord...
7011289 Maybe the foal in the show is Chrysalis...
Dear Shawn,
I'm gaining weight here with the ponies, heck even that little dragon is getting some action.
I bet if Twig was here he'd be a branch, Do Phil and Carson still cheat at cards?
Tell everyling I'm doing fine and come by sometime, only Sam came by at Cranky whoevers wedding
Boy did we wreck the buffet table ,,,well Pinkie's calling (the pink funny one with the portable cannon)
Well I got to go looks like another picknic don't want to miss out.
Doomie
P.S. Rumor has it that mom hatched some white lings with blue hair is that true?
Haha I love it. "this plan is stupid, but we are stumped for anything else!"
So Chrissy's vocal chords are damaged.
Keep going! ;)
Poor Chryssie, she just wants to make her children happy, but she's horrible at planning. Hopefully, so this can be resolved peacefully.
By the power invested in me, myself, and I (since this story hasn't updated for six months), I declare this story to be dead.
May it forever rest in peace.
(P.S. Welcome to the Graveyard.)
7064472 She's gonna have to deal with an Even Bigger Bad and attempt a not too different offer with that Bad than Starlight Glimmer offered her.