A lot has happened, and I mean A LOT. But... I'm slowly coming back. May need help with that.
Hearth's Warming Break in Ponyville is over, so it's time for class again. Cheerilee doesn't mind though. She loves to hear her students' holiday stories. But when one story involves her maybe-coltfriend being with another mare, she decides to go to Sweet Apple Acres and ask Big Macintosh what happened.
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You made Cheerilee out to be a little bit psycho girlfriendish. It seems they never talked about there relationship and she overreacted at almost every turn.
Mac did not bring up any of the Pies but takes his omission of marble to be proof. She just kept interrogating him until he snapped, says somthing out of anger and then she just runs off.
6933196 Sorry you didn't enjoy. I'll try better next time.
What if the Mane 6 got trapped in the Apple Family Cellar with Big Mac and Cheerilee?
Are you going to make a sequel to this I absolutely adore where this story is headed
I want to side with Big Macintosh because it didn't seem like they were actually in an official relationship. It seemed like Cheerilee liked the idea that they were more than anything. But I want to side with Cheerilee, because friends or actually a couple, having hope of a future being lost to a mare that didn't even say a single word is a bit of a knife in the chest. Hmmmm...
6933926 Well, I guess it would be pretty cramped.
6937450 I haven't planned on it. This story started and ended the way I intended. But with enough interest, I could make a sequel.
6938561 Mixed feelings?
6938668 I understand if you feel like it is good where the story is at, but I must add I absolutely adore the whole argument about whether big mac had any interest marble it was simply divine how they had such a reasonable and realistic argument props to ya ( try to think about making a series about this please
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6938664 We're talking about the Apple Family here.
6939006 That does sound like fun. But first I want to finish my current story (keep your eye out for that one. I'm adoring it). I'll definitely consider continuing this one. Thank you.
i kind of have mixed feelings on this. on one hand, i like the dialogue and interactions between the characters since they seemed as naturally fluid as possible. on the other hand, that one scene in that episode doesn't mean anything happened between mac and marble and people making it brand new ship-worthy irks me. mixed bag.
7129908 That's the average reaction to this fic in a nutshell. I admit, this story is a tad over-dramatic, but that was kind of the idea.
I would actually like a sequel to this story. I really enjoyed it and I would like to know what happens next.
7285019 I'm so sorry. There are no plans for a sequel. This story just isn't popular enough to warrant one.
7285052 Oh okay, don't worry about it.
7285058 I do like this story, but even I felt a little off when writing it.
7285067 I really liked it too, I think is something that could actually happen, not in the show, but in real life.
I did enjoyed reading it. Since I like drama.
7285079 I appreciate that. The problem is, not many others did.
7285082 Oh well, I don't see a problem with the story. Maybe some of them think that Cheerilee over reacted a bit, but other than that I see no problems with this story.
7285097 For that, I thank you. I'm always glad when people like my stories
, especially my lesser liked ones 
7285117 Well I'm glad I can make someone happy, keep writing and I'll just go check your other stories.
7285126 Sounds good to me
7285139 Okay then, why do I feel like I've made a friend?
7285143 Who knows? I feel the same way.
7285150 Yep, you are officially my third friend on this site.
I think Twilight would be proud.
7285154 Indeed she would. Friendship spreads easy through MLP
7285171 Yep that's true. Okay I'll stop bothering you, you are probably busy.
7285200 Ha a little. It's my dad's birthday.
7285200 I meant a little busy. You're not bothering me.
7285271 Oh okay then, I'm happy I'm not bothering you.
So do you want to talk on another day?
7285322 Sure thing. Just send a message.
7285341 Okay then, I'll talk to you sometime in the future.
7285354 Sounds good.
7285367 Okay then. I'm tired so I'm going to sleep, talk to your later.
7285387 Night.
I won't curse. But dang...
7299912 Hmm?
7300401 Cheating is always so depressing. But here I was hoping for a happy ending. At least it's realistic because stuff doesn't always work out how you want it to or it may never work out at all.
7301175 Well, I'm glad you appreciate it for what it is. This is my least successful story
7301193 Ah. Well, I did like reading it. It was an emotional ride.
7301217 Ha thanks. Hope you decide to give my other stories a read.
Interesting, there is no real proof that the two families are cousins, the show itself asked that question, well at least now we know by head canon how Big Mac and Sugar Belle got together...in a sense.
Yeah, cheaters suck. I speak from indirect experience.
I think Big Mac believed that Cheerilee had convinced herself that he was cheating on her and wasn't willing to say he disliked Marble over an argument that was lost before it had began. I don't think he wasn't willing to say he didn't like her because there are few people that are like him. If he tried to explain that he liked her platonically, in her current mindset, Cheerilee would try to call him out on his 'cover.' If he said he didn't like her, he would be insulting someone he not only found kinship with, but might also be related to. Not to mention that Cheerilee wasn't likely to believe that given that they spent the whole holiday with each other. From how this was written, I think Big Macintosh believed himself to be in a lose/lose situation. I liked how vague the language used in this story was, because it can be seen as either a cautionary tale on jumping to conclusions or on how much harm cheating does. Was there meant to be room for interpretation in this story? I apologize if you meant it to be cut-and-dry, but that's how I view it.
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. All I really remember is that it's loosely based on some experiences I've witnessed and/or been part of.
It's been so long since I've written this particular story that I've forgotten what I was trying to say behind it
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Well, I'd be a hypocrite if I didn't recognize my own faults in former relationships. For what's it's worth, I've lived and learned.
*Sip*