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one more chapter
and then maybe a continuation sequel i dunno
Okay. Okay, this is good... I like this.
that was great, I couldn't stop laughing after the interruption.
The beginning confused me a bit, since it jumped for no reason, but it worked out well.
I honestly wanna see where it goes after this... This was one hell of a ride.
This was a nice way of ending it. Now for the denouement.
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plz plz plz plz plz plz pleeeeeeeeease?
Even just, like, one-shot sex chapters. or maybe the sequel could be him getting a "sex therapist" job. with each chapter as a session or a specific client.
That dream sequence completely threw me off. The whole time I was reading that first half. I was like 'what the hell, pascal?!!' but it was not to be.
You clever son of a bitch. Bad end with nightmare twist. Nicely played. I'm curious how much is going to change now. I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter and possible second story.
Heh, I have to admit, you had me going. I was wondering what exactly made Pascal choose corruption - Though I will grant it was designed far better morally than most corruption settings I've seen. - over the right thing. And then BOOM, Normal shatters the dream and I'm kicking myself for thinking it would end like that when you were building up to what amounted into a very awesome third option.
I do, however, have one question. It wasn't made exactly clear, but is the Concept of Normal still part of Pascal? or did it return to the Astral Plane when he ascended into the embodiment of Acceptance?
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basically the second. the normal stallion was a thing pascal inadvertently created by antagonizing the concept of normality. now that they've reached an accord, it no longer needs a face because pascal is the face. so the normal stallion no longer exists; it was a thing in potentia only
I 'lunno
Kinda felt like a cop out.
Just me?
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I don't know if it's just you, but I personally thought it turned out rather well.
>tfw this story has huge chapters but they feel super short because I'm always at the edge of my seat
This was a truly masterful tale, Naturale. I really never expected the original premise (a subset of MC that I absolutely adore) to be capable of something so full of feels. Your quality and speed of writing is amazing.
Definitely in my top three favorite clopfics on this site.
So now that he's a Magical Being does that mean he's linked to that Verse and everything in it?
Is he now Biologically compatible with ponies that he can have a few Children with them?
Can he ascend to a higher state of the Human Form (like that of ponies to Alicorns)?
I'm glad it went this way total take over always bugged me good job.
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Well.
I was close, I guess. Saying that might be too much to push into at once. Maybe it would work after several sessions of slow "suggestions"
Also, awesome ending to the best "Clop with a [Philosophical] Plot" fic!
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To be fair, with the right words, and what amounts to 3 days of non-stop practice, Pascal can word things pretty well to shift things in his favor.
*Stands and claps*
Now to the after credits if am not mistaken!
7643514 to be honest this is why i typically don't comment, cause i feel one way and express that i get lectured about how i say things or how i express my opinion
Even with his power suppressing... fear. Everyone moved towards show-canon personality a little too fast. I got whiplash.
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yay. The chapter of fixing everything.
We can run, or we can hide. What shall we do?
We shall fight.
Pascal fought for the way not offered, and got it. No Baldricks options for Pascal.
If Pascal is now fully integrated with Equestrian magic, and can easily transform, accomodate, even manipulate, does that mean he will finally evolve to his ultimate Equestrian form, Dragon?
Start off with Acceptance in Ponyville, with Spike, and Zecora?
Sorry, I get stuck on a single idea and keep pounding away at it until something fits.
Long may the story offspring continue, as this particular beginning finally comes to an end.
Such a strong emotional moment, and all I can think is, "Do what you want cause a Princess is free. You arrrr a Princess."
D'awww....
"OG"? What does that mean?
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VICTORY SCEECH!!!
I'm so glad things are alright, after the last ending I was really worried. Derpy is back! That's awesome, I love that he can be with her again. I hope and he and Derpy can also bring in Trixie, as there was a real connection there as well.
7644688 I believe original generation.
Man, I really didn't expect this story to take a turn like this. I like it and it was done well, I just didn't see it coming.
7644688 It's a gaming term. It might mean more but in my experience it's short for original.
...
That was the craziest rollercoaster I've ever been on.
I've half a mind to drag this story kicking and screaming into the house of every reviewer under the sun, it's so good. A brilliant parody, deconstruction and reverent reconstruction of the mind control harem story, full of hilarious jokes, genuine moments of horror and heartbreak and some of the most emotional sex ever written.
As for sequels or continuation... There's a lot of fun opportunities to be had in sexual therapy, or just the day-by-day Accepticizing of the population. Stuff like Harshwhinny's evaluation scheme, or the love life of Blueblood, or the fashion show, or all these things...
I'd tune in weekly to the Pascal the Sex Therapist Show.
For some reason it took me 3 rereads to realize that "Acceptance" has finally been title dropped.
This has to be one of the fics I've looked forward to the most on this site. Bravo.
My only critique is that maybe the character tags should be tweaked accordingly? Characters like Moon Dancer and Fleur aren't even posted.
7647154 Strangely good points. Sometimes, it's small details that are often missed, eh?o_O Then again... He may have meant the masters did the moving of the stars together or something. Or at least, that could have been his intent there.
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it was vaguely implied but never really explored in depth that ponies' pheromone reaction was of the arousing kind, but since ponies in ponyville are more prudish than not - and on top of all the other behavior pascal was exhibiting - it just set them on edge and they didn't quite understand why
it's not that the wizards couldn't move the sun; the argument was more about the time it would take since they now had ecosystems in place and whether the hassle to change orbits and rotations super-carefully was worth the reward of fiddling with the length of days. these are the kinds of design arguments i imagine gods having
and when celestia got her super-affinity for the sun, that made them go, 'holy shit, she just gained a superpower out of nowhere that we can't control or remove.' that didn't put her on par with the wizards in terms of power, but it did make them afraid that one of their slaves could even come close - and maybe others would follow. being so powerful and in-control tends to make you paranoid of anything that could possibly challenge you. and you can do a lot of damage with a sun
It's just so jarring for a guy to conquer and enslave the world as his sex toys is the semi-happy resolution... only for it to turn out to be a dream. There is just no way of telling where this story is going. That was some pretty heavy philosophizing the concept of Acceptance. Can't wait to see what the good end is, hoping there will be a sequel to follow even more escapades.
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I suggest maybe not a sequel, per se, but a series of vignettes. After all, most of us came into this expecting maybe 30% plot, 70% plot. Not saying it's bad that it ended up the other way around, but maybe instead of a direct sequel we could have a series of clopfic vignettes that fully explore the shenanigans Pascal can get into (at least within the confines of whatever rules he would have to abide by).
However much we may want a straight sequel, you'd basically have to undo what was done in this story to make any significant conflict for the sequel to work with. That would just make everything in this story - all the emotion and sacrifices - meaningless. And while you can use that meaninglessness in a story, it would make it turn quite a bit darker, and I personally don't think that would fit.
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i figure a sequel to this would end up being like the show post-pilot - slice of life with occasional adventure. slice of life isn't necessarily conflictless, but the stakes are much lower
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Is Discord's history going to factor in? Kinda want to know how a fairly bland chimera fits into this world.
oh please let them all join the herd
Gotta say, the story was good. The clip was good, the only thing I didn't entirely like was the extreme hypering. I never got that fetish, but I didn't read this story because hyper is my thing, I read it because the idea of the story had my interest. So yeah, again sometimes I subbed the portions you described for my own.
If you'll remember, this was the original "human check" he established since chapter 1. Looks like that habbit finally paid off~
Yknow, to be honest, that world - or at least parts of it - would have been idealistic in my opinion.
Now, don't shoot! I'm not saying...
Okay I'm saying make Equestria a sex slave capital.
The end. ✓ m8
Oh, and as an Avatar, now, I wonder what newfound transformative powers he has? Like, can he do all the crazy shit Discord does with reality? Or is simply saying "hey sky, you should be red today because it's autumn" be enough to convince reality that the sky should, in fact, be red instead of blue?
Have to admit as much as there are sexy parts of this enjoy overall it just seems far to depressing for me to really like. Cadance apparently just casually cheating on her husband without a second thought when she'd kinda made clear in her very first appearance she was absolutely devoted to him and only him is just depressing.
Oh definitely. It's not a no-consequences game. The fuck-up was unfucked, but it didn't restore the previous status quo. For one, Pascal is changed; Celestia is definitely different now, as well. And, most notably, the reason he unfucked it was because he learned his lesson, to an extent. So, in essence, we didn't switch states from A to B and then back to A - the new world order is a fairly stable state C.
Pascal is considering his actions as taking a step back, but in reality - every step so far has been taken forward.
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I think I also did the same. I racionalised and normalised the perseved sizes. I fell like the story just makes you normalise everything to the point you are comfortable with.
Which is why I think this is an amazing fic to read
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I think that was sort of the point. The entire part where Pascal "won" was every bit the sexual fantasy you'd want, except the consequences and losses were also made extremely plain. I think first and foremost, it was supposed to show exactly how such a result would ultimately be a bad end for everyone, including Pascal.
In fact, while it plays out as a dream - a magical 'simulation', of sorts - it doesn't matter if you consider it having actually happened or not. It ultimately doesn't matter if it was just a projection, or if it really did happen and the Normal just reverted it by the sheer power of the cosmic concept. It was simply there for Pascal to reject it, and to provide a simple backdrop for his own little moment of truth.
So, in a sense, that little moment should ultimately increase your enjoyment of the story, because that's not what ended up happening. That's the future Pascal rejected, thereby giving Celestia a chance to find a future where they could both find - if not a resolution, then at the very least a continuation.
Man, I was not expecting to be hit by the feels train reading this.
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Taking your idea and analyzing it, the "bad" ending for the human would not be that he reverted the entire society into a sexual Utopia, nor the extreme guilt that that would give him (although it would greatly help the idea I am going for) at the end of the Instead, Pascal would suffer extreme loneliness, yes, he would still have Derpy and Trixi, but they would be his anchors so as not to throw everything overboard, his word is law, what he says will be carried out and the consequences will not affect him directly, but still They would be there, he would be a god on that earth only equaled by a chaotic god who pities him, he could not hate him because the hatred that humans have for themselves is enough for him... that future... has no future