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MY EYES IT BURNS!! BUT I CANT LOOK AWAY!?!?!?
Hah! well that happened.
Not even the avatar of Normality can resist Big Mac
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Hmm... Not horrible... But not my cup of tea... I did like the Derpy reapearance!
hmmm Not my boat. ..still hot
Okay, I only read the warning so, yeah, skipping the chapter.
Dear Mare Mayor.
Big Mac would like to file his tax return.
In Person.
Dear Spa Twins. When Big Mac books the only appointment in any given time period, both of you are available to offer and handle The Full Package.
Well at least we've gotten the obligatory "Gay" chapter out of the way.
But all-in-all, I think I'll go with the general consensus of, "Well, that happened."
please more stallion action in this *begs on knees*
I'll be honest, I've had moments like that. Not exactly like that, but the occasional moment of carnal curiosity.
Good chapter as always.
big mac's murderous man meat in 3D
Even if this chapter isn't something I like, at least you continue to keep the quality, and him realizing that even despite the experimentation he's only into mares.
6364241 I'd recommend reading it up till when a certain stallion shows up. Cause it does have a very nice bit with Derpy in it. I can understand you wanting to skip what was warned though.
For some reason there was a black bar over the warning so I went in unprepared. So if there's going to be more gay scenes I'll drop this story right now. Nothing against gays but from a heterosexual point of view two men having sex is one of the most disgusting things ever. If there are going to be more gay scenes after this chapter, please tell me so I can drop this story.
Why would you fucking censor a warning?
Just saying, I would've appreciated the warning being uncensored.
Am I going to drop this story because it has teh gey in it? Nope. Too hot. But I'd like to know whether or not it's present so I know whether to look for a spot to say "okay, time to skip a few paragraphs." Spoilered warning doesn't do that.
6364614 It literally said by the character that he was just satisfying curiosity about the difference, and he had no enjoyment from it beyond wanting to have a dick that size for himself for pleasing the ladies.
But, I'm with you. Hoping that's the only scene of this.
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I couldn't see what the warning was because the iPad won't let me tap the censor box, but after reading this, I know now.
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I don't remember that. Probably because when I start reading gay stuff my mind just shuts down and I'm skipping it as fast as I can. There are better ways to satisfy your curiosity then going as far as giving a guy a handjob then getting a blowjob from that guy.
6364753 Which is why it shouldn't be censored in the first place.
6364787 Agreed. Honestly, I'm glad it seems that this is the end of the gay in it. I was open minded enough to read it, but really...*shiver* just isn't my thing.
Man this was a gay clop- centric chapter. I mean I read the warning but damn.
6364828 At least it had that good scene with Derpy in it at least.
Wait... so, if his dick "were it to be pressed flush against his chest, it would probably still poke an inch or two above his mane,", wouldn't he... ehrm...
Just imagine him fully inserting that erect giant dick into a mare, I think you'll get my problem...
Derpy is amazing. It's like she's representing everything I love about this story. apparently these ponies just can't wait to let loose. I'm almost starting to think these "powers" might not really even be changing all that much. They just need the idea as an excuse. Just plant the idea that it's ok, and they do the rest.
This did indeed seem like way more than dick envy but I'm wondering if the male ponies have some sort of pheromone/magic or something that drove Pascal to go further than he normally would, and of course there's some more confirmation that the pony bodies are basically like hentai characters with ridiculous proportions and impossible stamina.
I suppose its good to have some sort of investigation into the matter even if it went further than I was expecting after all of Pascal's mentions of not being into that sort of stuff. He better perform some damage control before Big Mac, Aloe, or Lotus possibly mentions it to anyone unless he doesn't mind the reputation (I know ponies will just think its normal but Pascal preferably wouldn't I'd think).
Otherwise the Derpy scene was fun with public breast play and giving her permission to let ponies walk around naked, Pascal just seems to be getting a lot more reckless, so much for not trying to mess up pony civilization and such . I fully expect the results of his actions to not really bite him so much as maybe sideswipe him when 80% of Ponyville's mare population stop wearing clothing, after all it's Derpy and her only criteria is that the mare would be happier without having to bother with clothes.
Looking to the next part where I guess we'll see the rest of his spa appointment and then probably onto Twilight's castle for surgery, though I have no idea how long it's actually been and will take.
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i must have been very very very sleep deprived to think spoilering was the right thing to do. 'hey, it's technically a spoiler for what happens, hide it.' fucking tired-ass brain. *yoink*
do i regret writing this chapter now? hell nah. but now i've also learned something about my audience that i didn't know before. i can safely say that now that pascal's gotten the curiosity out of his system, this isn't likely to happen ever again
at the very least, the warning will be clear for all if it does. lesson learned
there's a part of me that finds the dichotomy of responses very interesting though
6365329 Though I'm with them on not wanting him to have such a scene again, I still read it and still thought it was well written, considering the circumstances.
Now, adding in possible TG later and interacting with a changed Big Mac, that'd be another matter.^_^ But, that's up to you as to whether to include TG later or not.
I love seeing Derpy come back and the lactating, OUTSTANDING!!! Now on to the meat: I am not gay and do not read gay stories but you wrote that so well and blended it so perfectly with the character that it was actually worth reading and somewhat appealing as it added to Pascal's character and state of mind. VERY well done indeed!!!
6365329 I personally didn't have a problem with the chapter, it's just censoring warnings make no fucking sense to me. It's called a warning for a reason.
Dayum, son, where'd you find this?
I like that aloe and lotus called Derpy his marefriend.
6364036 HAH!!
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A big problem with the current reaction is that you started off selling this as 'human man gets all the mares' which likely drew in a bunch of homophobes and strictly-straights to settle in. You'll find that the people who comment negatively are usually the vocal minority, and the people who are pleased rarely need to say anything. So don't take their reactions as some sort of failure on your part, they're not indicative of the majority, just giving their own personal opinions.
That aside, it's good that this happened. If Pascal thinks of himself as a dom, then one of the most dominant things you can do is bring down some other dominant-looking specimen to the realm of 'sex toy' for you. Which is a very thrilling experience, I'll point out. In essence, Pascal's pushed himself up the totem pole now that he's proven to himself even straight males are not immune to his whims. Rather than squicking themselves out, people should realize that this is actually good character development.
Another well done chapter. We've established that ponies are aware of their "burdensome endowments" but live with it or ignore them and are quite inhibited.
Judging from derpy and other mares reactions , some could benefit from a release and awakening from the restrictions and their inhibitions. Many secretly desiring this freedom but held back by social norms running contrary.
Given how Pascal realized big mac has been holding himself back before now ( a helluva lot), as well as big macs relief and emotional expressiveness later, Pascal may have triggered an awakening in big mac . Made him a bit more free and more emotionally open. Probably sexually too, which I hope leads to interesting incidents later on with mares.
Also pascals suspicions. Ponies being built like this is probably very much tied in with whatever issue celestia has with humans. Maybe humans aee even responsible for it. As a leader she may even have contributed to theircurrent cultural values to subvert some mater to do with the ponies and humans past interactions
Whatever it is, Pascal seems to be helping these ponies and pony society more than anything. Rather than controlling them like most mind control, the normal seems to be freeing them from the shackles and controls of the social norms that have been shackling and burdening them.
I think it's really fun that Pascal has managed to pass his self-awareness onto Derpy, and she's sort of become a partner in crime for him. Always good to have at least one friend to share the truth with. It's healthy for Pascal and enjoyable to watch.
And thus it begins. The nudist train has left the station and is rapidly picking up speed. Within the next few days I have no doubt that most of Ponyville's mares will be walking around topless, all thanks to Derpy spreading the good news!
Now that I think about it, having Ponyville's Mailmare as Pascal's personal conspirator will work great in his favor. If he ever needed to spread a piece of Normal far and wide, she could do it in a heartbeat.
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It would definitely be interesting if Pascal's tryst with Big Mac had something to do with Stallion scent/pheromones. Would be rather fitting that he fell at least once for the natural Mind-Control of another character, even if it was totally unintentional.
In any case, definitely good to get this last bit of sexual discovery done with, especially since he hopes to have a similar endowment soon. Gotta preview the goods!
There's certainly something fishy going on with this world's biology. I have no doubt that Celestia (and likely Discord) will be involved somehow with the mystery's answer. My best bet is ancient humans (possibly even a former wielder of the Normal power using magic to enforce a 'biological normal'), but it could be an old joke from the Chaos God himself. What better way to cause disharmony than to give a species of chaste, innocent creatures, the bodies of fantastical sex-fiends?
Pascal should ask Twilight about it. She might have actually studied it in some way.
Good stuff!
A shame there won't be another chapter like this, but understandable that that's the way the story is going.
Ah, finally. After chapter after chapter of literally impossible curves and body shapes, having a wall of muscle like Mac on the page is an entirely welcome change, not least in the sense of actually being able to picture what he looks like. I suppose that's a sign that I'm not really the audience for this, though.
I'll be interested to see if anyone shows up who's genuinely uncomfortable with the way public acceptance is progressing, but feels pressured to conform anyway because it's "normal". After all, there's a difference between it being normal to be topless and it being abnormal not to be topless, and if Derpy can feel insecure about not being able to bare herself in public, it's reasonable to assume there's someone else who would feel insecure about having to. So far our protagonist has been trying not to force anything, but accidents happen. That would be the tipping point, one way or another, and I can see Derpy being the one who ultimately pushes things too far.
6366980 I doubt Twilight would have researched that without incentive. Buuuut, him commenting on it could very well grant her that incentive, eh?;)
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I'm just wondering where the homophobes are that you mentioned. Don't take this the wrong way, I'm not upset, just pointing out that the worst anyone seems to have posted unless I missed something was that they personally can't stand gay stuff. Like, in the same way someone can't stand Borderlands and doesn't want to play it. That's hardly homophobic.
6368111 Could be the fact that someone said they'd stop watching the fic if it happened again.
6369166 Pascal has a big fetish for mind control but being mind controlled is his greatest fear, you might think this is weird but that's how fetishes work sometimes i.e a person who likes to hurt others wouldn't necessarily want to have others hurt them, any moral dilemmas tend to be drowned out by their fetishism. Pascal might be aware of what he's doing to these other ponies but the rewards are simply too great even ignoring all the sex, he can now have actual conversations with ponies and make friends if he so wished, so I don't think he's going to give up this power.
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There's a saying somewhere, and I'm probably mangling it horribly, that goes something like "If you want to test a man, give him power."
What the protagonist has here is more than just power, it is absolute power. He is the living avatar of the concept of "normalcy" in much the same way Discord is the avatar of chaos, which is part of the reason it's trying to change him into a more suitable host. But that, in of itself, is the problem. His powers need an outlet, otherwise they will turn inward, and we've all seen what lies down that particular road. Him abusing his power may very well become a survival tactic soon, which certainly complicates things, not that they were very straightforward to begin with.
Pascal is not, in my book at least, a bad person. He wants what most of us want: three square meals a day, a comfortable place to rest his head, companionship, and an outlet through which he can creatively channel his frustrations. His main problem, beyond the imminent threat of being swallowed whole by a cosmic concept, is that there are no clear-cut rules of morality here, and few people to guide him. In this, Derpy has actually done the most by far to help alleviate his fears and worries.
Pascal is slowly but surely picking up that exercising his power isn't necessarily a bad thing, or, at least, it doesn't have to be. And that, in of itself, is the other side of the equation. Just because you can do something, doesn't necessarily mean you should do something, a lesson that all people with even a modicum of power must learn at some point. Just because something lacks consequences doesn't make it right, and today's thrills could quickly become tomorrow's regrets.
Honestly, if Celestia weren't such a raging cunt-wagon in this, I'd think she'd be perfect for showing him the ropes. Luna might also work, but as much as it pains me to say this, she works better as an abject lesson in what not to do, than as an actual teacher. Though there is something to be said about learning from the mistakes of the past.
Sadly, in the end, Pascal has only his own moral compass to guide him. And for most people that works about as well as using an actual compass, which is to say that it is vague, uninformative, and prone to malfunction.
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Just for the récord, Twilight ' s procedure on Pascal is not going to include any body horror, right?
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i hate to undercut what little tension i have to work with but
nah man this ain't a gorefic
also, because someone's gonna come here and ask, next chapter's likely not today but tomorrow
I just realized something.... Could he input commands and make ponies think it was normal? Say... He walked up to Dash and said "Hey Dash, you're really ticklish" would that make her ticklish, because he said it in a way that made it normal?
6371125 lol That'd be awsome if that happened. Better yet, what if he could input commands, and reality would change to fit them, in much a similar way? Better yet still, have him learn this by accident. XD