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Man, Twilight is getting addicted. And thank goodness the operation didn't fail, eh?
Does Celestia hate humans because she was addicted to their jizz?
Zecora was sexy, and you kept her rhyming.
That's really all it takes for me. I love it. :D
Another amazing chapter, and surprisingly smart in many ways. But, what I'm most excited for is what's coming up next.
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Me gusta...
*Lets out Girlish Sqeel of delight at the sight of new chapter!*
The surgical reconstruction was an interesting read and it's nice to see Zecora appear. Nice chapter.
Time for the best welcome party, with blackjack and strippers.
They said it would be easier for Pascal to get a larger dick so the question is, how much easier. Easier that they won't need another surgery and he can just drink a potion, or easier because they won't need to do it for long?
Hope to see Zecora again, mighty fine chapter! I was starting to suffer withdrawal symptoms from lack of a new chapter!
I know Pascal has a fetish for hyper dicks but I'm personally glad his didn't go that far, it just looks and sounds ridiculous when your dick is so large it can be used as a stripper pole.
Otherwise everything else in the chapter was pretty good, Zecora rhyming with such slutty wording was both impressive and erotic. Twilight's slow addiction to cum is hot as always and her disappointment at not being the one to get him off made me chuckle, Pascal might have to suggest she change her title to the Princess of Cum-Guzzling at some point .
And oh boy Pinkie's party will probably be a blast, I'm sad Pascal had to be late by even 10 minutes or so but this is one of those times where it will definitely be worth it! We know Pinkie, Derpy, and Twilight will be there, so that's already my top three favorite ponies so god damn I'm looking forward to this. I'll also put a guess that Lyra and BonBon will be at the party, Carrot Top too if she's got any cravings for human cum, and possibly even some of the Mane Six we haven't seen yet, alternatively Pinkie could make this a chance to introduce Pascal to new ponies which seems like a very Pinkie thing to do.
Definitely looking forward to it!
I'm quite addicted to this story lol Good job good sir!
I will gladly wait the few days for the next one to arrive, this character was just awesome! I've been waiting for this day to arrive honestly! It mite not be as big as an avrage stallian... But I sure am Jelly of his new found.... EVERYTHING!!! *Sniff* Now I really want to go to Equestria....
Definitely loved this chapter.^^
Ok, if you feel like branching into bi-material with this fic, I for one certainly wouldn't mind at all. Pretty mares are great, yeah, but gotta have some balance with some nice stallions too! Though, as to mares, I'm hoping we see more of zecora in the future, after that little tidbit.
When you brought up Granny Smith and that great aunt, the 'dragon layer', two things went through my mind, the first was "I wouldn't mind reading a side story based around that tale". the second was "I wonder what older ponies look like in this world". I bet Granny smith herself's a total Gmilf.
Mission accomplished!
Okay. Pascal is now more than raring to go. I wonder what this condition that Twilight put on Pinkie? Plus, have we seen Pascal interact with any of the other members of the Mane 6 other than Twilight and Pinkie? I don't think so?
And with what he learned this chapter, he's learned that he'll still be able to fit it in no matter how big he gets. Well damn.
From what we've seen, it looks like Pinkie's party has planned sexual shenanigans. But he made the observation earlier in the story that ponies were actually pretty chaste. Pinkie Pie hasn't interacted with him yet so wouldn't have exposure to the Normal effect, and even if she got influenced by ripples of what he's already done that wouldn't be enough to cause her to spontaneously arrange a sex party.
I can get why Twilight might be reluctant to attend a party, but why does she specifically need permission for this one when she know?
6375145 It's probably because he's got more magic in his body, or because they now have experience with working on him. Alternatively, because most of the matter around his dick was appropriated from elsewhere on his body, that material is more susceptible to being molded by magic.
6376505 Pinkie did have exposure to him. Guess you forgot. No offense for forgetting though. Just thought I'd remind ya that he did indeed meet with Pinkie. But, other than his enjoying her boobs bouncing, Normal I doubt has effected her any yet.
6376588 Ah, yes. I forgot about that.
*Rereads*
Oooh. I think I see what Normal did. He mentioned that he wasn't used to all the sensual bodies here, he obviously has a huge interest in boobs, and she said she was going to tailor the party to him. Ergo...
6376784 ... yeah, this is gonna be 'fun'.:D
Every time I read this story, I end up making dying whale noises the whole time... why can't I upvote more than once?
6377738 That, in itself, I think would vary. Some would, some wouldn't. I'm among those that wouldn't hate those that like Borderlands, personally. After all, their call on what they like.
I just have to say again, so far I've loved every chapter of this. With or without clop this is easily one of the best stories I've read this summer.
I can't wait for the party, I think I know what the party is about/ going to be like
Level Up!
Good to see that the procedure was a success, and Pascal has a body more capable of sexy shenanigans. Nice to see a bit of Zecora, too!
Hey, I don't know if this has been clarified, but do the ponies in this universe have skin, or fur?
guess what game is coming out tonight
guess what fapfic might get slower updates for a while
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i'm going with skin; fur complicates things and changes texture completely
6379457 Thanks, that definitely clears some stuff up. Can we expect another chapter tonight or tomorrow? The party is so hype :D
6379457 What game? I'm not really caught up in the news of new games. Can't afford any new games, unfortunately.:\
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Metal Gear Solid V, I believe.
You know, human with horsedick kinda doesn't look so... nice, eh. Was Pascal's body also modified to, you know, make his new assests look fit?
6380422 Ahhhh... been so long since I got to play a Metal Gear game.
6380817 Obviously not. Twilight even said he was fully human.
6379457 first off, it's a hide, not fur. The hair on a horse is to fine to be called fur. Secondly, I did not know that horses pulled the shaved look so well.
That's a lot of writing in a short time, and it's all good stuff. Well done on the volume and quality of your output.
/snerk
Truly, I am impressed at the length of time, with which you kept up Zecora's Rhyme.
The fact you could churn out repeatedly, rhyme after rhyme pleases me.
Okay, enough of that. I'm loving this story so far, and I look forward to seeing where it goes in the future, and definately looking forward to the party.
Maybe even more than Pascal is ...
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I for one actually didn't mind the gay scene. Yes, I am heterosexual, but I found the way in which you approached it intriguing. You can tell that neither party is particuarlly comfortable with the idea of doing that with another male, which in my opinion makes it for a very interesting and well played out piece of writing.
You captured the uncertainty of the moment in words, and relaying that kind of emotion isn't easy. So, I guess.. if for nothing else, I liked the scene for how it was written.
Though, quite honestly, if I was in this world and had these powers, I probably would have done the same thing sooner or later.
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He wasn't given a horsecock. Just his own natural penis was surgically enhanced. The only thing drastically different would be the appearence of his testicals, having grown that much in size... He might have to go to Rarity in the near future to get those "pouches" installed in all his pants
I thought Pascal was going to ask Aloe and Big Mac if they wouldnt mind giving him a demonstration when they mentioned the Dragon Layer, or now he can mention that around Pinkie and everyone at the Party, when Spikes there, and start Normal Paradigm trickling through their past world lines to ajust them towards that reality better.
Nice idea, to reduce th difficulties of trying to follow procedure and have all the dangly bits falling all over the place, to fade out over the operation. Are we going to only folow Pascals viewpoint, or will the effect o Normal start to cause interacted with characters to be followed for any while when not interacting directly? Like Zecora with her hut o potions and dreams of more human, and even more human, or save those again for time compressed flashbacks?
A couple of things for Pinkies Pascal party, are from Derpy, blindfold Pascal, then he gets to work out which mare it is from her milk taste, her blow job ability, and maybe even her tightness or aceptance? Especially after Twilight or such talks Pinkie down from having Pascal as the guest of honor as the bronking breeding bull?
Mrs Cake gets introduced to extra milk andcream, and a whole new range of bread products, and BonBon works on her milk chocolate and milk bons?
Man, this story has so much re-readability! Not just for the clop, but because since the normal power is used even when the user, Pascal, isn't meaning to. Something that could foreshadow a big plot (or more likely, a "plot") point could be hidden in a vague sentence five chapters apart! You really did a superb job in this, Au!
6382767 Doubt that that's what Pinkie has in mind. Pinkie was only directly effected by the fact that he likes to watch bouncing boobs. It'll likely START OUT with that in mind. ...but as to where it all degrades to, we'll have to see.;)
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Well it's definitely been improved by that magical surgery, eh? Eh?
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I'm anticipating a topless party, but with Pinkie's unique brand of logic who knows what her plans are.
6383051 Too true. Who can predict Pinkie? XD
6383051 Bottomless party?
Can we expect the new chapter tomorrow, or maybe this weekend? I can't take the hype!
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gonna make a big push tonight, so if not tomorrow then the day after
e: so yeah the weekend, one because of the 'exciting' subject matter and two because on reflection i realize i haven't had more than four speaking characters in one french scene in this story so far and i am slightly out of my writing comfort zone
6390830 Unfortunate, but understandable. Better it be made with quality than rushed, eh?^_^
6390830 Yeah I kinda figured that having a party worth of characters would be quite a challenge, so hopefully it won't kill your motivation because I'm very hopeful for it .
well its very important and its great that it stretches and exercises your writing skills into places you havent gone to that often. its worth it to invest more time in it, you have been pumping out these stories really fast and things have been building up to this party for a while, so important to maintain that quality and make it worth it, for both you and us.
Wow. The med talk added an impressive level of sophistication to this.