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It has happened! Now he will make lots of 'new' memories :D.
Rawr
I think a few groaned at the missed opportunity of Princess Luna.
Nice to see. Lyra and Pas al bonding like that.
Very well edited and grammatically checked minus one error I caught but still, this is why I love your story: I can just READ the story without having to stop and make constant corrections or have to translate and figure out what you are trying to say due to poor grammar and spelling. A story that I can just read and enjoy! Bravo on another outstanding chapter!
I can't wait for Pinkie's party to happen!
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Damn son.
Just... woo~
Another amazing, and sexy, chapter. Well done.:D
As soon as you added hoof play I glared in what direction I assumed you lived in and cursed you for being such a glorious son of a bitch. That wasn't much of a break at all, was it?
Oh man do I ever love this story!!! I need to stop reading kinky stories for a while... I think I mite brake physically brake if I keep this up LOL!!! Keep on writing them though I'll be sure to come back soon and read all the back log of chapters that you put up because I love the story!!!!
Looks like Pascal was lucky in having far too easy a task with bending Twilight, as Luna and Celestia seem to have realised that things need normalising the way They want them to, hence the ponyfication, so I wonder if Pascal, will be told by Twilight, that an acceptable compromise would be giving him the ability to gratify others stallion wise, as in taking the best of both? Wonder if Zecora will be visiting, or Twilight will have half of whats needed and so will have to work, in depth, with Zecora to solve Pascls little problem, and in doing so, expand her research to zebras and other races, as well as females? Twilight and honysuckle flowers, she realises even plants can have sex?
I wonder what hilarity and trouble, chaos, Pascal could get into if Lyra made breakfast jokes about his protection would be easier of BonBon was a Secret Agent, and she, Lyra, was a secret martial arts grand master.
I really like the use of the belief system to alter general perceptions and behaviours, the older and stronger the magic, the longer and harder it is to alter their viewpoint? but could it be that Celestia slowly loses because she doesnt want to destroy everything trying to cauterise the effect, and so Luna is held back as well?
If Twilight has been on an all night research bender again and Pascal, Spike wake her up with her breakfast drink, would she automatically go for her favourite burger bar behaviour so she doesnt have to lift the cup itself?
What problems will arise next, how will they be solved. Is this story classed as Celestia as a Good Guy, being the Bad Guy?
Tune in next time for Good Morning Equestria.
.... Random thought, wonder if Lyra will suffer 'morning sickness' from having done that without protection with him. Not that Lyra would seem to mind if she did wind up pregnant due to the no protection.^^
So... ehrm... are STD's a thing? Er... no, not even that. If Pascal went straight to vaginal after the anal without washing... that isn't pretty.
6350843 Knowing the magic overflowing in Equestria, the natural magic of the place gets rid of most illnesses before they even become a problem, with there only being a few exceptions to the rule out there.
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that's actually a really good point. the second one i mean
even if there's lots of magical excuses to not worry about that, it's not good to promote bad practices
i've added a sentence to suggest that magic was involved in the transition. something like it should've already been there, but it got lost in restructuring. remember, kids, fantasy anal is serious business
as for the first, there's a line in chapter 2 that implies there aren't any serious concerns
It's definitely an odd mix of relaxing and stressful for Pascal, his ability really lets him just relax and do whatever he wants but that same ability also contains the possibility for his greatest nightmare if he loses control. I'd definitely have trouble sleeping in Pascal's stressful situation too but if dreams are where he is the most vulnerable then obviously he needs to talk Luna into helping him out. I'm still unsure if that Luna in his dream was the real Luna or just a fabrication of Normalcy to get him to submit, the only way she'd know about his condition to try and trip him up would be if Discord told her I'd think, or maybe Twilight sent a letter about it, but if its the real Luna then she's basically declared herself an enemy.
The whole scene with Lyra was really cute though, it's kind of nice seeing them just relax together and be friendly. The sex was interesting too, I like how you usually manage to fit in some sort of fetish for each sex scene rather than just vanilla stuff (other than MC obviously) and it's often usually initiated by the pony albeit because they're being affected by his power, much better than him just running around demanding every girl get on her knees for him that's for sure.
Looking forward to the next one since it sounds like there will be more of best purple book pony , I hope if she does manage to help him out with his stamina she'll get to help him out with the results too!
6350416 Lol what's that from?
I'm way to into this story.
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I suspect she was actually observing the dream, and will come to investigate eventually.
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I'm actually kind of hoping he doesn't bag the Princesses so much as when their struggle comes to an end they don't mind what he does in Ponyville. It'd just be too expected and corny, and I've been enjoying how un-like the rest of the HiE fics this is so far.
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It's a sexual wish-fulfillment story. Of course there's not going to be any STDs or other problems that could interfere with the flow of the story.
6351986 I didn't say anything about STD's. So, not sure why you quoted me with this statement. XD
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Not specifically, no, but you gotta admit that a pregnancy is something that would largely derail the whole no-repercussion sexual fantasy thing going on in this story.
EDIT: As any parent will tell you, sex is far more difficult to come by when a baby is taking up all of your time.
6352040 We'll see. Everyone has different fetishes. Not saying it's one of mine, but I've seen it among some fetishes. Besides, seems Lyra is willing for something like that anyways.
But, what the author does is up to him in the end.
Yeah, this, this right here? Pretty damn good clop! Moreover, the over-arching story is interesting and REALLY forces you to think! Well played, and loving the interactions with the characters. Still, seems like Luna be playing dirty right about now...me no like. That said, perhaps she too will find herself confronted with a perfectly normal situation that plays to our boy's advantage!
I'm unusually wary of that dark tag looming over this story. I like what's been done so far, despite my usual reaction to stuff like this. But that promise of "dark" hangs like a patient spider over a public toilet. This can go very wrong at any moment. In five languages.
I can't quite place what it's there for. This character has been surprisingly thoughtful and compassionate so far, and I don't know what freaky hell you might be trowing him down by the end of the week. The tag could easily be there just for the very premise of mind control alone, but could also be a disturbing hint of how far down the pit of indulgent depravity our little hero is going to sink, and how many principals he's going to loose without consequences to reign him back.
It might not even be for him. There's been a couple dandy foreshadowing red flags so far, and I'm suspicious as balls of this society and it's ruler. And now you're building up the internal struggle of loosing his own mind to the perception shaping lure of Normal McNormal Horse.
This is making me nervous man!
...Please write more.
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This. All of Pascal's moral conflicts so far will only make the inevitable breakdown into depravity all the more poignant. With the threat of total mental normalcy looming over him, I'm almost worried that his only way to stay alive will be to purposefully indulge those urges just to hold back the magic. Well, I say 'worried', but I really mean excited.
Discord said his power will likely grow with time. This might mean that Pascal will gain more Normality-related powers down the line, but it also probably means stronger surges too. Either way, all signs point towards a slippery slope of epic proportions in our protagonist's future.
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Can't wait!
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Well, they are totally different species, and aren't even from the same planet. Unless magic were involved, there's really no way for Pascal to impregnate the Equestrians. They are biologically incompatible.
He should probably check with Twilight though, just to make sure.
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I'm not entirely sure, but the phrase and reaction images are used a lot around discussions of the ecchi 'Monster Musume: Everyday Life with Monster Girls'. As you can tell from the title, It's a manga/show about a guy who lives with a bunch of half-human, half-monster women. One of them is a centaur, thus the quote.
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Really... what an amazing fic this is. Thank goodness it updates often, I don't think I would be able to handle it if I had to wait as long as I do for other fics.
The naughty bits are fun. The plot is interesting. The self reflection and notions coming together. the grammar doesn't distract and the structure moves along nicely.
I like to think of the chapters before this as "day 1" and this is the interval session.
Congratulations on Pascal completing a full round of the 3 orifices and other sexy bits, utter devirginated. Hope that upgrade works out well, if this was just a starting day for him full of hesitation and experimenting, he's going to have to get the equipment to keep up as he UPS the anty (and as the anty up's itself).
This is so good is stuck between yearning fr more updates soon and not wanting you to burn out or fuse
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I don't want to sound tiresome (well, too much), but will be updates today or tomorrow?
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probably tomorrow
6354326 Darn to that, but life takes priority, eh?^_^ Ya gotta do what ya gotta do, after all.^_^
I just had to go back and re-read this chapter.... Its so amazing! I love the love making between Lyra and Pascal..... Its just a piece of masterful artwork!
So when does he start telling ponies to off themselves? XD I know it's gonna happen just not when or why. Could be somepony annoys him and he tells them to "jump off a cliff" or maybe someponies try to mug him and he makes them cut their own throats. He has literally all the power he could ever need so it's only a matter of time before he asks/demands the princesses for knowledge on immortality and becomes derr Fuhrer of Herr Ponies. XD
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I figure it's already dark enough for the tag, though it's mostly implication so far.
So far, the only dark reveal we've seen is when he realizes that the spell is constantly threatening to magically rewrite him into a different person against his will. Even if it makes him a "better" him and leaves him happier afterwards, like how he felt in his nightmare, he fears it as a form of death.
He doesn't yet seem to have realized that the spell does exactly that to the ponies, turning them into versions of themselves that are okay with anything he does. Sometimes, they're even happier for it, like with Derpy. I wonder how he'll react when he realizes that he's subjecting everypony around him to his own worst fear, destroying their lives and replacing them with new ones.
Chilling thought.
Unless that's not what's happening.
I dunno. Not sure.
Intriguing story.
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This isn't that kind of story.
This was such a cute &sweet chapter I love it all.
I like the genuine, contextual relationshipd he's building.
He's not just going around making ilicit meaningless sex, he's making meaningful bonds and getting to know ponies.
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Yeah - as much as it's based on fucking mind control, he's making the best out of the situation.
And it's not like he had a clear picture of what was going to happen, with the spell. He was told he could retain his humanity and personality, along with the spell's intended effects... I don't know how much... whatever state of mind you have to be in... in order to actually give up everything you are like that... I don't know if I could - I would probably have done the same thing.
The fact that I'm perverted as fuck much like the protagonist doesn't help my case either, does it...
Perhaps they’d like it if he got totally sweaty and then gave him a tongue-bath clean.
Off the top of my head, casting under the feet of an assailant. If you can't stand, you can't fight.