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I can't believe it. I just guessed and I was right.
kek
Erections. Erections everywhere.
How does this story have so much character development and plot? How does the most sex-filled thing ever written also manage to make me genuinely engaged in the characters? HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME?
Pascals just getting charged up, and poor Normal is going to be abused the hay out of by Derpy?
Then the biggest tit of them all crashes in?
Lets see, Derpy, as punishment, hereby claims Dash to be Normally inversed prior to what she was previously, or at the least, aint going to lose to taking Pascal, Big Mac, or any other presented male, or even passing?
It's nice to see Pas al making peace with Fluttershy and befriending Octavia.
Get out Dash! Busty mares only! You're probably only an F cup! Desperately looking forward to that Mrs. Cake scene.
This aught to be really good. XD Nice cliffhanger, I see.^^
Oh, and I hope he starts using Normal purposefully a lot soon. After all, Twilight told him that he needed to in order to help ensure there isn't a relapse like he fears.
Oh, and one thing I'd like to see, since I like to see Rainbow's more weaker feminine unsure side, is for Pascal to accidentally use his Normal in a rage and cause unexpected results due to letting his stress out in the form of a brief bout of anger, with Rainbow being a perfect target for such. Sure, things would work out in the end, but I think she'd be a perfect stress relief, and it could help Rainbow a good deal to stop having to hide her feminine side so much and stop her from actually being afraid of showing it. I mean, heck, she fled from a dang mud bath due to fear of girliness for crying out loud.
Oh boy, Pascal's already beginning to use the ponywords in his first-person descriptions... if that's a side effect of the normalization, then that was sneaky as hell.
Also... you own me a new pair of pants, the ones I had earlier exploded so hard it just desintegrated.
Rainbow Dash, ruining stuff like always.
Intresting to see Mrs Cake and Octavia there. How long before Mrs Cake is Normally serving in the shop itself, and getting more customers for it as well? Octavia says Vinyl would be so jelous about the party, but isnt that what after party take home and invited in is for?
With Octavia saying she grew a lot more after she got her cutie mark, next would be a good place for the setup in age, maturity etc, given that high capacity breeding should correspond to advanced, and so extremely large foals at birth, given equines have to mature quickly to keep up with the migrating herds and rates of predation.
Pity Zecora couldnt stay around to help, but Im wondering if she is going back to her hut to help out in her own way, that and her dragon dildo of +3 relief with potion slot.
Derpy knowing of Normal, and Pinkie happy to help out in any way? Theres going to be a lot of broken and crying paradoxical worldlines for quite a while as Pascal tries to sort out whats happening and happened because of what he wants to occur.
Still, PARTY. Welcome Cream Of Dash.
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When you're in a group of people, you automatically try to fit in. That's just how your brain works. Switching to "anypony" might have happened even if he never got the normal magic.
I've been waiting for this... And then that cliffhanger!!! Ohmygosh, Ohmygosh, Ohmygosh!!! This party is so awesome! I have to admit a dream come true for sure! I did not know entirely what was going to happen but wow, I would have been just like Pascal, just Mind blown!!!
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I totally agree!
The Young and the Topless
Guiding Tits
As the Loin Burns
I'm not sorry.
6395798 Glad you agree.^^
Oh, and here's a thought. What if Derpy wanted to see something hot from Normal so much that this happens, or something like it: "Hey, Pascal... I had an idea. You said Twilight wanted you to use up your magic to make sure it doesn't transform you into a normal stallion. Well, if the power had the ability to transform you... why can't it transform others as well? That'd certainly put it to work beyond just effecting their minds, and give it quite the workout too."
I was wondering where Rainbow Dash was, this will be goooooood!!! Cant wait for the next installment!!!
Well now, that doesn't sound like any trouble at all.
On the other hand, the quota for weird Normal things probably just shot up a considerable amount.
Also, this made me laugh. As did Pinkie's "craziest cray" comment. I gotta use that somewhere.
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6396090 lol Glad you liked that idea. XD
6396091 I dont know... It seams a little weird... I mean... Changing genetics because you said so? Errr..... Mite be a bit to far... But I do love the hole... "HEY do this... Yeah... yeah like that" aspect of the story thus far....
6396179 Well, I think it'd fit. After all, Normal effected DISCORD, and he can change reality at will. I'd love to see him also change reality like that with it. But, in the end, what matters isn't so much the what that happens, it's the how that happens. And so far, AuNaturale is handling everything in his story beautifully.:D I'm sure that IF he did have transformations, he'd handle well and quite tactfully in some delightful way.^^ He's just really proven his writing skills so far, if you know what I mean.^^
Hah, while i seriously don't see rainbow being a real problem, i mean, this is a clop story, i really hope she doesn't de-rail thngs too badly, and somepony, or pascal, smooths things over with her and she joins the festivities.
Also, fluttershy sounds AMAZING. here's hoping more happens with her.
6396210 This I also agree with!
6396216 Yeah I dont see Rainbow being much of a problem at all...
... Uhhhhhh...
Is this going to be like that situation, in that Animaniac's cartoon Chicken Boo? Where everybody accepts the situation as being normal except that one guy who see's through the facade and is right all along till the grand reveal?
Because... dude, Rainbow is either really offended at being left out of a topless party, or she see's that Clint Eastwood has too many feathers.
Either that or she needs to be told it's for Pascal.
If it's the second, PLEASE tell me how this is possible?
Okay, so is it bad that I'm waiting for the human to not hold back for one night at least? I mean either being a drinking fueled mess of sex and fun just to have the next few chapters be him run around and fix things? Also... why do I see Celestia and Luna showing up in the next chapter? I mean I can see Luna being the more fun of the two and Celestia what need a bit of a lesson from Pascal. Just as a sense of payback for scaring the hell out of him in context. Since Discord a being of Chaos is effected by this. That would mean those two would too. The more I think about this... why can I see him use Celestia to get back at a few ponies. Not going to lie but I would love to see him use her to mess with Blueblood. Maybe force him to magically change genders as a punishment. I mean he could set himself up for life with this predicament. Course this could just being a tired mind rambling after all. I just wish the next chapter shows up rather fast because I have been loving the story so far and waiting for the point that the shit hits the fan. Also Does anyone else see a Pascal/Derpy ship? Oh and please for the love of god tell me Dash was one of those ponies that would mess with Pascal way too much either scaring the crap out of him like the mob did. Because if that's the case with have the alicorn of magic here. One Busty taught a lesson Rainbow coming up.
Damn it I have too many idea's for my own good...
Derpy deserves a medal for best honorary agent of chaos. She's absolutely pushing Pascal forward and I love her for it.
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Desperate Breastwives
Boobs and the City
There is only one thing I don't like about this chapter. Up till now, I've been mentally picturing all the mares in the story (aside from Derpy) has having more Kevin Sano-esque proportions than cartoonishly hyper ones, since hyper isn't my fetish at all (in fact it's a borderline turn-off), and I can't picture that anymore with all the very clear language in this chapter that destroys that illusion. That's a shame since, as I said, I'm not into hyper, and while BBWs aren't my fetish either, I can certainly get behind some big-but-realistic proportions.
Oh well. Admittedly this is still top notch.
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It's important to note that, as Pascal himself said, context is everything. Right now, all Dash sees is a bunch of her topless friends at a party, and she isn't under the impression (at least not yet) that being topless is "normal." Of course she's gonna freak. Plus as someone pointed out in a comment on another chapter, something being acceptable doesn't automatically make it uninteresting, and it doesn't make everyone entirely comfortable with it either.
Despite what the author and main character have said so far, this story does not feature true mind control. It's close to true mind control - it definitely isn't indirect and it is at least partially predictable - but not quite the same. Emotions, prejudices, and personal opinions still play a huge part in how everyone interacts with Pascal and the Normal.
6399550 I'm normally not into hyper levels like what he has here either. But, he just has a way with words that makes it seem hot, even despite my preferences being not that big.
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Ah... fair enough, rather violent reaction however...
6396507 Only the bustyest mares where invited.... Rainbow dont have very big Bezingas!
6401185 That may be true but as Twilight has already proved that is something easily fixed.
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You think she has because addicted to Pascal 's "taste " and decided to modify her breast size to increase the probabilities of getting another" fix"?
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That could be possible. It all depends on the context used.
Uh oh. I noticed that Rainbow was missing and was going to ask how she felt about Pascal. I knew she wasn't invited because Pinkie only wanted the best and biggest breasts and Rainbow is on the smaller side.
Guess the next chapter is proving harder than normal, eh?
I, Thanatos, give this story my compliments and support. so my dear author would you please keep updating?
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that and y'know
games
work
life
i am a hobbyist writer and therefore slowdown is inevitable (i've said this multiple times now)
but let's try for tomorrow
6414427 Alright then. Better late than never, especially considering the amazing quality you put into it.^_^ Best of luck.:D
This was so far out of left field, I'm just cracking up. I can't stop fucking laughing.
With each chapter you continue to impress. The pseudo-philosophical bit about Fluttershy's boobs was cute and his talks with Derpy are very endearing. Like I said, a well balanced story where he doesn't have total control, but merely making suggestions to do things they normally wouldn't, but it turns out they are pleased and even grateful for the chance to let loose.
What a lewd world...
When pinkey says lets get this party started I thought of the spongebob movie ending .... The old one from 2004 btw
I honestly don't know how to phrase this.
On the one hand, the premise of this story put me off. It's why I haven't read it until now.
But I have to admit, you've made this work so far. The fact that the scene with Fluttershy was somehow erotic, funny, and sweet at the same time. Well, I'm honestly floored. I did not expect that quality of writing *at all* tbh. I've read plenty of clop/erotica by now, but this is one of those really rare ones that are both mentally and physically stimulating lol.
I'm really curious to see what else you have in store for us and Pascal. Good job!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Fuckin' string bean Dash. Love it.
Oh shit nigga, what are you doing?? You can't serve gelatin in Equestria! That's cannibalism!
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There are vegan ways to make gelatin.