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Ah, the dreaded conflict of morals vs. perversion.
Discord's probably laughing his mismatched butt off.
This is going to be good.
Okay, I get that they've been giving him a pretty hard time, no pun intended. And for some things that he really can't change, such as his pheromones. To expect him to stop smelling like a human is insane and blatantly unfair. That the flower trio wanted him beaten up or worse just to see him leave is not okay in the least.
But! He's also kind of a creep. I mean, going behind somepony's garden to masturbate? It's not exactly out in public, but the chance of getting caught is still high. And that's precisely what happened. Now it's true that he doesn't have a place for himself, so perhaps to expect him to keep it in his pants also doesn't work out.
Pascal isn't a bad guy. He's not trying to hurt anyone. They would do well to cut him some slack, especially when Discord pulls much worse on a daily basis without any shame whatsoever, but he needs to work on his self-control as well. Or... he needed. With the spell in place, life is going to become much more accommodating.
Ultimately, the story doesn't yet have a true villain. And I like a setup like that.
Loving this. And also loving how you're taking it slowly, with us knowing that there'll be lots of perversion, but that there's considerable build up to it.^_^ Basically, perversion with good story. No wonder this got featured.:D
I must say, you've inspired my imagination. In regards to that, I have a number of ideas to mention. Up to you if you use any of them.^^
For one idea, his magic doesn't only make others think things are normal, but it also determines what IS normal. Towards that end, I had this idea:
After Pascal had some... odd encounters with females, like what just happened, Thunderlane flies down and lands by him, stating: "Hey, Pascal!" Putting his arm around the smaller Pascal, Thunderlane says: "You know, me and the boys felt bad for how we treated ya and wanted to make it up for ya. Maybe ya can spend some time with us or somethin'?" Pascal: "Umm... thanks, Thunderlane. Heh. You know, if you were to fit this morning, you'd be a girl right now." Suddenly, Pascal without looking feels something off. Thunderlane's arm feels smaller somehow. And was it coming from a lower angle now? Suddenly, he hears a giggle, and he turns his head, jaw dropping wide open. "Who's Thunderlane, Pascal? That's a boy's name. My name's Sparkleaisle, you know that." Standing where Thunderlane was is now a girl pony slightly shorter than him. Her mane, though the same length, is now curved down onto her head, similar to Faye Valentine's but with one side longer than the other, and man, is she stacked. And not only did her gender change, even her clothes changed into a more... sexy number, sort to speak. Pascal, after having a moment for his brain to get started up: "U-uh... right.... Sp-Sparkle.... Umm... do you notice anything different about yourself?" She giggles. Sparkle: "No. Same as I always've been. Why? I don't have a zit, do I?" Pascal: "Uh... no. No, you don't." Sparkle: "Oh, thank goodness. So, you up to spending some time with me and the guys?" Pascal: "...Uh... don't you mean the girls?" Sparkle blinks a moment and shakes her head: "Of course. That's what I meant. Want to spend time with me and the girls?" Pascal: "...Maybe later... I need to go sit down a moment." *walking off in a daze, wondering what the hell just happened.*
For another idea... well, it was said that getting one's cutie mark causes a massive growth spurt, and he essentially gained such. So, wouldn't he slowly improve? I'm guessing he'd still have some pudge after the change, but likely become more fit that he was before thanks to it.
Next... this bit I'll just copy and paste from some PM's I sent. Basically, ideas for the girls' figures compared to each other. Up to you if you accept them or not:
To explain my concepts in terms of figures better, I'll use this as an example. I like to consider part of the aspects as being what I call a breast/butt-to-waist ratio. As examples of this, take Rangiku from Bleach and Nami from One Piece. Rangiku's breasts are HUGE, yet when looking at the two, it doesn't seem that she's much bigger than Nami at first glance, even though her breasts are noticably larger than Nami's. The reason the first glance gives the illusion of them being similar is because, though they're both skinny from front-to-back, they're noticably different in terms of skinniness in terms of side-to-side width. Rangiku has a noticably wider waist than Nami, and that makes her breasts seem smaller than they really are, and vice versa with Nami having a much smaller waist.
Now, for the mane six. Take note, for what I'll be explaining, their outfits could very well hide their figures well.
For what I have in mind for them, they're all very... 'developed' for their ages, in part due to the magic floating through the land as they grew up in it. The fact that they've been empowered by the elements of harmony further effects this fact. But, that's compared to average girls, not to each other.
For compared to each other, I'll list these first. From smallest to largest:
Breasts:
1. Rarity
2. Rainbow Dash
3. Applejack
4. Twilight(pre-ascension)
5. Fluttershy
6. Pinkie Pie
7. Twilight(post ascension, though on par with Pinkie)
Waists:
1. Rarity
2. Fluttershy
3. Applejack
4. Twilight(post ascension)
5. Rainbow Dash
6. Twilight(pre-ascension)
7. Pinkie Pie
Now, for explanations:
For waist sizes first, Rarity and Fluttershy would be smaller than AJ and Rainbow Dash due to the fact that their jobs keep the two ladies fit, without overly exercising their muscles in that area. AJ and Rainbow's muscles making them a bit thicker there. And on top of that, Rarity and Fluttershy also keep watch of what they eat, Rarity especially due to watching her figure, and this in turn makes them all the skinnier.
As for AJ and Rainbow... well, when she works, Rainbow may work harder than AJ, but this is complicated by the fact that she naps all the dang time, thus reducing her overall workload compared to AJ, and thus, AJ is smaller in waist there.
As for Twilight, well, ascension slowly caused change to her, as even confirmed in the show when Rainbow, when being taught by her, drew pics of her being super tall and skinny. But, before ascension... well, she didn't exercise as much, but she also didn't eat as much due to being so tunnel visioned on studying. This caused her waist to be wider than the others, but not greatly so due to the compensating fact that she doesn't eat much, at least in terms of number of times she eats a day. Though as shown(with Hayburgers), she tends to binge to make up for the lack of meal times she has. XD
And then, Pinkie... with her, I think she'd have a bit a pudge, but only enough that you'd only notice it if she was in her underwear. Thing is, she has an insane metabolism. Case in point with her eating that entire cake in the mysterious express ep and recovering from it in no time. If she didn't eat so dang much, she'd likely be much smaller in her waist in comparison.
As for breasts... well, I sorta based it both on their ribcage size and their lifestyles to a degree. And though Rarity is considered the smallest among them, take note that she actively tries to flaunt what she's got with both her clothes and her grace to compensate, so that combined with her extremely skinny waist makes her seem a lot more developed than she really is.
As for Fluttershy being so developed... well, it'd explain why she lacks the stanima to fly for long, yet somehow has the strength to, on rare occasion, outfly even Rainbow Dash in terms of speed. Walking around with those all the time adds to her more weight to get her muscles worked out, after all. Though, since she's shy, it's likely she wears more baggy clothes to hide just how dang attractive her figure is. All of this would also explain why Photo Finish chose Fluttershy over Rarity as well, if she was noticably more developed than her and whatnot.
Applejack and Rainbow Dash, in terms of chest size, are about on par with each other. But, due to AJ having a smaller waist than both her and Twilight, it gives the illusion that she's larger breasted than the two of them, when Twilight's actually larger than she is and Rainbow isn't that far off from her size.
And of course, the princesses that have been alicorns for longer have had more time to develop compared to Twilight, so Twilight's still the smallest of the group, despite still being quite developed for her age, since these comparisons are two one another. When compared to most girls her age, she's quite developed.
What do you think of this headcanon?
And that's the end of that copied and pasted PM. Up to you if you accept that or not.^^
Either way, loving this fic so far. Slow but gradual perversion that will clearly get really sexy later on, and yet, is going slowly and having great character and plot build up. Hard to find such in fics that'll have as much sex as this will have. Really loving it so far.:D
6324606 True, but it's forewarned in the story that it'd be overpowered and sex and whatnot, so if you're not wanting any villainous aspects, you're likely out of luck. But, the fact that things are very progressive is much appreciated, I'll admit. Making sure there's character development and whatnot. Really making you get invested in his point of view. So, even if he goes the villain route, you really feel like you can empathize with his point of view.
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I did say that it doesn't have a true villain yet^_^ I completely agree with you on having things develop. I like it when that happens!
6324843 Glad to hear that.^^ Speaking of develop, since you replied, could ya check my other recent comments on this? I think you'll like it. XD They're mostly ideas. Up to the author what's used though.
Self-inserts aren't supposed to be this self-aware, you know.
I need more of this. 100 chapters of 4000+ words each, every day until the end of time. Then a sequel.
6324535 And what a Mismatched butt he has.....fuck.
This was pretty good; I sincerely hope you write more.
6324811 i shouldn't have to tl;dr a comment, but i did
what pm? i didn't get any pm from you
i've got my own headcanons about relative sizes (or at least enough to get started), thank
also wow you're set on r63'ing the whole universe huh? not gonna say something like that's off the table, but if you're waiting in the wings for that to show up you're going to be waiting for a loooooong time
it's called a slow burn
can't become god in chapter 2, that's the rules
6325659 lol I said that part of what I said was copied and pasted from an old PM of mine. Not that I sent one to ya. Not sure what you mean by tl;dr a comment though.
And understandable about their sizes. I just tried offering my ideas. I fully understand that it's your call in the end on them.^^
And yeah, would love to see the 63 rule involved in such a fic, immensely.
Despite that 63 desire though, I do agree with you. Can't rush this. Gotta take the fic slowly, eh? If I have to wait for the hopes of his powers causing 63, then I'll just have to wait. And with how well you've been writing so far, I'm more than fine with that being the case.
I mean, it's rare to find someone take such an obviously pervy idea, and take it slow and in a meaningful way, while still keeping the personalities, dreams, and identities of others in mind. You have gotten great respect from me for you managing to pull that off and do so well with this so far.
Although.... well, even though I'm willing to wait, that doesn't stop me from being eager for your next chapter, eh?^_^ On average, how long does it take you to write these amazing chapters?:D
6325686 your previous comment was way too wordy, so i just skimmed it - too long; didn't read (also i used tl;dr as a verb because why not)
this is a passion project, as in i had the passion so i started the project. every chapter is hot off the presses; it's done when it's done. it'll probably be slowing down over time, i'm a writer after all, but after the instant feature i was like, 'well, shit, gotta start off strong at least' so i'll probably be writing every night for a while
6325701 Glad to hear. And it's good to see you're putting so much passion into it.:D It shows with how well you've written it.^^
And darn to you skimming the comment. Buuuut, understandable. I know full well how... long-winded, I can be. XD
What's that on the horizon? Why, it's my fetish.
6325709 fimfic comment in general is not a good place for super long-winded discussion that takes multiple mousewheel scrolls to cross. there are forums and pms for that
this goes for me too actually, making a long exclusive discussion out of this in multiple parts
Oh, and I wonder if the mention of humans is 'humans of the past', as in they're extinct on Equestria till he arrived.
6325722 Understandable. As said, my fault for being long winded, eh? And regardless, as said, I'm sure you'll continue to write it well, considering how well you've written it so far. Heck, I wouldn't mind being a proofreader if you needed such.
6325722 When is the next chapter coming out?
6325722 What he said in that long comment (at least, a first part) is "change genders of ponies cos' Pascal said so".
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see here
6325701
6325865 Thanks!
... A well made smut... alright then, I can get behind this.
Just like Pascal can get behind anything else for that matter.
I'm intrigued... this setup is rather interesting with how much control, yet, no control at all the protagonist has in the situation, he has flipped everyone's perceptions, effectively this IS kind of a mind control tag, but instead of hating it... it is actually kind of alright.
It's not from a bad guy, he isn't really giving any outright evil demands, he's simply a pathetic guy who needed a break in a weird and crazy world. And yes, he's pathetic, just as the world around his is simply unreasonable.
I mean sure, if a guy was doing that in public you'd report them to the police, NOT literally take out torches and pitchforks like he's the second fucking coming of Frankenstein.
He's fat, a hair trigger virgin, and can't help but make the BAD choices, but also, the ponies are Xenophobic, lack understanding, and believe in brainwashing is the best thing for the individual to undertake... OH the irony indeed, if he can't meet your standards, then you have to go down to his. I mean, it could have been worse right? You could have had your ENTIRE FUCKING LIFE TIPPED OUT LIKE IT WAS PENNIES IN A PIGGY BACK.
... Well, your keeping to canon with that one at least.
So, he has morals? That will be interesting, here's to Pascal making the most out of his new life, does he deserve it? Fuck no, but for now... I can go easy on him.
You know, a fucking lynch mob and all.
Also, GREAT Discord personality right then, LOVED how you portrayed him.
Now after reading the first 2 chapters I am left to wonder how far is the main character going to take this....I mean is he just going slowly push for more and more or is he going to go all in once he finds out this works.
Also I am left to wonder if he will feel bad for praticaly brainwashing people to have sex with him, only to justify it by his urges or will he cave and make this universe his paradise....I will say author these questions want me to read further....that and the sex.
As I am sure a Slaneshi Cultist has said...
"Porn for the porn gods, Smut for the smut throne, Rape for the rape train"
PPPFFFTTTTHAHAHAHAHAHAH! That was great!
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The size chart sounds interesting. I'm not sure I'd put Rarity so low on it, since she's apparently a total sex bomb according to Equestrian standards.
Perhaps I'd probably put Fluttershy lower, against most descriptions of her, as she's easily overlooked by other ponies. Her model career was based on her shy and graceful appearance. You could, of course, be right and she's hiding a big pair of sweater puppies. However, I think that rather than big-breasted, Fluttershy is very leggy, with a wide, beautiful hip. What we've seen of her when she was a filly suggests she developed some long legs very early, and they probably carried over.
I'd also put Applejack as having wider hips than Rainbow because AJ works her legs (and her hips, and her butt) a lot; and since she's a farm mare, she's also used to some good eatin'. Rainbow Dash is all about going fast and increasing speed. She doesn't work her legs as much but burns calories like crazy. Rainbow might actually have a fairly impressive bust because they're close to her wing and shoulder muscles and working those enhances the breasts as well. And even if they're not huge, they'll be firm and perky.
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As for the idea of turning Equestria completely 63... I'd rather he didn't. It gets lonely with no other guys around.
I'd rather he find some stallions to be buddies with and decides that the whole idea of guys not staring at girls' assets is wrong to begin with. Maybe they'll finally understand what he's been going through! And really, not giving his buddies the opportunity to stare/touch/fondle/grope what the mares have to offer would be a crying shame, wouldn't it? They should get to have some fun with some sla—I mean girlfriends of their own. As long as Pascal gets to join in whenever he wants to. I'm sure they won't mind...
Wow, I sure didn't expect another chapter of this to come out the day after it was published! Quite a pleasant surprise indeed.
I'm loving the build-up so far. Pascal's jack-off sessions do a surprisingly good job of establishing his fantasies and the general lack of tact which got him into this mess in the first place, while also (no doubt) foreshadowing the sort of depravity he'll bring upon the hapless townsfolk down the line. A nice little preview, as it were.
The reactions of Ponyville's citizens are spot-on so far, and it's very fun to watch Pascal begin to catch on. The flower trio were hilarious, I'm eager to see what Pascal's next move will be when his brain reboots.
6327312 Do you guys even know what kind of plottwist is "universal acceptance"?
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If you have to ask like that, apparently not. I thought it meant his words turn out to be correct to a certain degree, from making people believe what he says to the world suddenly changing according to his whims.
6327631 It doesn't include "change the world as he wants". It is merely "those are not the droids you are looking for". Kind of mind control.
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Depends. There was an episode of Fairly Oddparents that explored the concept of everything the protagonist said instantly becoming true and accepted.
6327658 the key word here is "rationalization"
the difference between something being 'true' and something being 'acceptable.' if someone else thinks what you say is acceptable, they might naturally assume the reason why is because you're telling the truth, but
it's a very specific distinction
This reminds me of a character from a book(the fact that I can't remember the books not the characters names will eat at me all day) the character had the ability to say anything he wanted and anyone who heard him say it believed it without a doubt. He became king by telling the royal guard that they were ordered to take him to the king, told the king that he was the Kings son, then told both the king and queen that the kingdom would die unless they killed themselves.
6327872 basically I feel like this is a Greek tragedy ready to happen...for sure he gets whatever he wants once he discovers the full potential on what he is able to do, but how boring would it be to always get what you want to never have any risk seems to dull the feeling overtime.
Now besides that I wonder about how powerful this ability truly is? Does it effect luna or celestia? How about other races, does it have a range of effectiveness on them? Also what about discords angle, I know he is doing it for fun and not really causing to much harm, but still is their a ultimate end goal or is this just one of his games I wonder?
Really interesting concept, the whole dream-come-true-except-you-can't-have-any-of-it. Even with Discord's help it's still a moral dilemma. It's just changed from can't to shouldn't. That actually makes it worse in a way: if all the mares will now let Pascal do anything he wants with them, and even their husbands will just nod in approval, then the only thing holding him back is his own conflicted conscience. Even if it doesn't backfire later (that's a very big if) and he's free to indulge in all his sexual fantasies, he'd still have to live with the fact that he's effectively raping them. They could be crying and screaming inside their minds for all he knows, struggling against the mind control.
I can sympathize with this guy. Don't think I'd do much better in his situation. I haven't been that heart-pounding, almost-fapping-in-public level of horny since my teens, but I know how it feels. If everyone really is that hot, if even the least attractive mare in Ponyville is a supermodel by human standards... and then you add the fetish factors, pony, anthro, hyper, etc... oh dear. And living with Lyra and Bon Bon he has almost no privacy to relieve his lust, either. Can't blame him for being unable to contain himself. The fact they hate his guts only adds insult to injury.
At least Pascal only has to worry about one gender, though. Me, well... despite the fact I'm straight for humans, somehow when it comes to ponies I'm bi. I've given up trying to figure out how that works. (And I've tried jerking off to real gay porn, it doesn't work for me at all. Instant boner death.) Anyway, I'm sure I'd be ogling and fantasizing about the stallions and their equipment just as much as the mares, if not more. So in that regard I'd have it even worse than him.
Unless this story takes a turn somewhere in the next chapters, I really think this needs a Comedy tag. I just... I think I fell over laughing at least three times this chapter (figuratively speaking).
Giggety.
6333027 Dick joke, dick joke, dick joke, dick joke... Penis.
wow. for the good of non mental warping he should let the normal take over.
Betrayed in the end,
By the one you call a friend~
Ahhh, morality against lust. Good thing I found this story.
6364036 ram rod.
6364036 you forgot to say
Giggety...
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Ok it's getting better I like it more but I hope he gets a body upgrade soon.
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These are not the social norms you are looking for...
Move along
That kind of goes beyond acceptance, this is encouragement. I kind of preferred if it was only acceptance which means it's only passive. He still has to take the initiative.
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I prefer the terminology, "susceptible to suggestion."
In my mind - and I have indeed imagined such a scenario - it works like this:
A.) "Boy, I sure could use an icrecream."
B.) Thinks that, 'hey, yeah, he could use an icream because [insert reason + justification] and gives the last an ice cream.
If they own the cart, they MIGHT still think to ask for payment, but they are more likely to accept their own route of reationalization to the path of though of least resistance.
Basically, A says or implies "this should be this way" and those that hear it rationalize things and agree unless they come up with absolutely NO solutions whatsoever...in which case they probably shrug and ho along with I because "why nof?"
Now, what does NOT apply in this context is objective demands, commands, or direct attempts to implant a thought in somebody's head.
If he up and said, "hey, girl, suck me dry right now" without giving a reason or implying any reason she should...she's likely to clock dat mofo.
But if he implied, "god, I sure am lonely. If only I had a nice, perky girl to come help me out," that's an implication that he clearly needs company from her, and she should totally be the pony to fill in the blanks.
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Yeah, I like your explanation. It's actually a literary device that's employed quite often, and not just in sexfics.
I suppose it tends to happen in sects and such, though in that case it's rationalization more often than not... The difference there being that in the case of rationalization, you clearly understand why the thing you're about to do is not okay, so instead of "filling in the blanks" you tether the idea to "good" impulses, causes, and behaviors, to 'transfer' some of that 'goodness' onto this clearly not good act.
Like, "I know stealing is wrong, but this food I will then give to that starving orphan, so it's a good thing I'm doing by stealing it."
Or maybe... "I know killing people is bad, but these people are transgressing against my god, so by strapping this bomb to my chest and exploding it somewhere public, I'm doing them all a favor really..."
Takes quite a bit of indoctrination, but ultimately very worth it if you plan on using these people for something sinister... ;]
And yes, you can do this without magic. If you happen to find people who're already aligned with your cause, that'll make it that much easier... but young, impressionable minds work just as well. All you have to do is find a common point with them, give them just enough truth to be unable to deny it, and then proceed to carefully weave your tale of words and motives. The first stages are extremely important - you don't want those younglings going out into the world and having their world-view confronted with actual reality... No, you need to have them hardened in your way before you allow that - at that point, everything the world throws at them will just be "deception", "lies", "cover-ups" and "tyrany". ;)
Also, in both cases it is possible to craft orders - you just have to present them as something to rationalize/justify away via indirect means. For example, "Go kill this person. I mean, I could really use them dead, and you're a good friend, right...? You'd do that for me, yeah?"
But in all actuality, no. As I understand the point, in this particular case the power of "normal" is used to bring everyone in-line with whatever this guy says... because he's perfectly normal, so anything he says is also perfectly normal and ordinary. This wasn't done to the
poniespeople - this was done to him... and, through the whole "harmony" thing, everyone in the whole world already 'got the memo'. ;DSo... with great power come great tittyfucks, I suppose. He could probably start - and end - wars, on the spot.
We'll see how well he uses this gift. ;]
Now... if only they weren't all H and bigger... I honestly prefer tits that fit into my hands, or overflow just slightly. Am I weird?