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tfw Au posts the newest chapter and it's the longest one yet
Yay! It has come back!
Ha! Imagining Derpy and Fluttershy trying to go at it made me chuckle a bit, just the idea of two girls with what amount to deployed safety bags on their chests trying to somehow reach each other xD (don't get me wrong though I still enjoyed it).
Derpy's bit was really heartwarming which is honestly something you aren't really expecting in the midst of so much awful terrible sin, sex is nice but sex with plot is heads and shoulders above it.
Nice to see Twilight acting a bit normally again, with everything we're learning about pony sexual characteristics she could start a book, simply put "Endorsed by Pascal the human" on the front and bam everypony in Equestria will want to own that shiz and Pascal and crew would be millionaires.
Also yeah sex is nice and the fact that you were able to write such a long complex sex scene with so many characters is top-tier A+ writing but it'll be nice to get back to the basics. As it stands Pascal's gonna need to pass out and sleep for sixteen hours and when he wakes up he'll probably be the sorest ponyfucker on the planet, so maybe some lewd stuff but definitely no sex for at least a chapter or two I'm guessing. Here's to hoping his extensive use of the normalcy power and Luna's assistance continues to keep him from falling over the edge!
Future hopes if the story allows for it: a scene with Moondancer and Twilight's other friends in Canterlot, Starlight Glimmer, and The Great and Powerful Trixie. I'm watching this with much interest .
Pascals picking something up quickly, in that if he only does something, he can only do a given number of females, but if the females do each oher as well, then even in a given collection, far mroe girls can enjoy themselves, so next, given big Mac and the Spa, Pascal can work on the males following on more often and easily?
Now that would be intresting, if Episode 100. Stephen Magnet in the Spa, with Aloe, Lotus, Zecora, Pascal, Derpy, etc or whichever situation and setup decided.
Given Pascals party is so successful, I wonder if the next chapter will be orgasm hangover in the morning with Twilight poking for response and then doing a compare and contrast with Spike?
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There's an interesting idea. With so many ponies being kind of uncomfortable with their own bodies, Starlight Glimmer's promise of equality suddenly gets a whole new meaning, doesn't it? A promise of being accepted and "average".
Ah ah ah, Simon didn't say "more casual sex around me". Pascal possibly just made everypony present think of casual sex as an okay thing, which could carry over to the rest of Ponyville.
Wow,I say that was worth the wait, specially the ending. I know you can't satisfy everyone, but I was really hoping they did forget, and rainbow dash was obsessed
Good for you Twilight. Most people would know how air-fresheners smell but how about a spell for it?
Feel like there's an and missing between 'as gently' and 'as reverently'.
And what's this about all sex and no plot? This party's provided serious closure on a lot of stuff! I can't remember what it was because of all the sex, but I know that you're the only person I know who can put a heartfelt conversation about the morality of mind control in the middle of a titfuck!
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nice
but alas, context is important
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6485854 Well, won't that be a lovely thing to wake up to after his sex coma.
Ayy Lamo
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This was amazing, in my opinion. Well done.:D And seems Pascal is 'well done' himself. XD
as am looking at this its 555 one number each from 666 and 2 from 777, you earning this and more. complex character and complex abilities (will not all that complex thus far but great!)
Besides you did put plot in, with pinkies arse and with Derpy's, and fluttershy's dialogue it expressed more and more on what nay happen the good ending if you will for pascal or so it would seem.
It took me two days to read this... This happens to be the second day... I'm still reading it... LOL! I loved this chapter~ Totally worth the extended wait! And the convos with Derpy and fluttershy was great I really enjoyed the encuragement that they give him...
Loving the clop, its awesome; Can hardly wait to see what you have for the next chapter and who mite be next on the list for Pascal.
Keep up with the awesome writing! And take your time with the next chapter; Your doing great!
*Looks down at empty chip bag* I ran out of chips.....
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Well, if this wasn't worth the wait I don't know what would be.
And it didn't feel to me like there was no plot in this chapter. Can't argue the "all sex" part, though.
Another great chapter. Derpy's bit was very sweet, and the sex is yet again top notch.
Though, I'm glad it sounds like we're moving on from the orgy at last; the private setting was starting to get a bit stale, and I'm itching to see Pascal do more antics around the town again!
It's pretty impressive what that surgery has already done for our aspiring stud (not to mention what it implies about the capabilities of full stallions). That was a LOT of sex/cum, and he's still not able to hold a candle to what ponies like Big Mac can do.
Also, is anybody else using reference images to visualize body proportions? The best artist I've found for this story's hyper bodies is Marauder6272 (suggestive but not explicit):
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Oh man, Pascal. You should be careful about what you say around these girls, they might just get the wrong idea...
On second thought, don't be too careful about what you say. It's more fun!
just wondering is anyone notice how ditzy is becoming more controlling of pascal in a use your powers for me way.
or is it just me.
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During the party Derpy and Pascal decided together that their relationship was more than casual, though Derpy also gave him permission to sleep around with other mares. As the party progressed she actually seemed to get rather into it, getting off on him pleasuring other mares, while also having some fun with those mares herself. The relationship is still pretty ill-defined, but I think it's definitely moved beyond the "friends with benefits" stage.
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More like she's trying to help him become comfortable in his own skin. That said help often includes helping her as well is just a nice fringe bonus. For example, go back to when she gently taught Pascal how to convince Rainbow Dash that she was in love with his penis.
It also helps that Pascal is naturally kind/generous and wants to spread the love around, which in turn makes Derpy feel like she has to repay him... and the cycle just goes on and on like that.
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Not "stuck," so much as Pascal has convinced Rainbow Dash that she genuinely loves his cock, as well as inadvertently opening her up to the concept of cock-worship; which she seems to have taken to like a duck to water. Initially it was "only" going to be till the end of the party, but Derpy and Pascal started experimenting, and... *shrugs* she loves his cock now. Not that he had to force the issue all that much in the end, Rainbow already seemed pretty enamored with him.
I spat up my drink at reading this.
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There is something to be said for that approach, yes. It creates a very, well, natural-feeling characterisation which is in total contrast to the nearly artificial feel the ponies' bodies around him have. That's not an easy task.
Though I will also admit I wouldn't be adverse to him influencing the mares to be a little more kinky, open, and submissive after this. I know, I know, it's not for everyone and people are free to disagree, but I personally like it so I have my fingers crossed.
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Assuming you're not morbidly obese, it's perfectly possible. He does point out that he's not super fat, just somewhat noticeably overweight.
Hurry the fuck up and make the chapter. I am getting impatient
6505444 Best for him to take it slow so as to keep up the level of quality that has gotten you so hooked to the fic in the first place. ... and trust me, I know how hard it is to be patient for such a great epic as this fic. XD
6505450 Hahah. I didn't have my coffee.. I'll be patient, Pinkie Promise.
The way you describe the limit and Rainbow's "acting" was rather brilliant. Once more, it keeps things from getting too over powered and out of control. The Normal makes the unlikely happen, but not the impossible possible.
I like the concept, something rather novel that I've never really come across ever. I just.... can't find myself engaged in the story.... I read the first chapter and I have little motivation to read more despite the interesting concept. Perhaps it's to deal with the kind of annoying and whiny nature I perceive from Pascal (Yes, I know this could be in my head, but that is how I see him), maybe it's the use and fixation on hyper-proportions, which is something I've never really found enjoyable. I really don't know, but I am just left wanting the same idea of someone, an outsider perhaps, being given the ultimate in normality, just... in a different story, preferably with more normal proportions. Am I the only one of this opinion?
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But the proportions are part of the story, and for good reason. If this were just Anthro!Equestria with nothing special about it, Pascal wouldn't have had the problems that led to him getting the power of "Normal" in the first place. He would have had no more trouble living in Equestria than he did living on Earth, unless the Equestrians were like nudists or something. The whole reason things escalated in the first place was that Equestria was a wet dream come true for him, which led to him being unable to control himself, which led to him taking desperate measures, which is why this whole thing happened in the first place.
I get that not everyone is gonna go for outrageous proportions, but is it fair to those that do that they have to wait in line behind others in order to get their content? Just because they like something a little bit different? I get what you're saying, I really do, but it's not like there isn't already a veritable ton of more normal clop out there, and some of it is pretty amazing. Meanwhile, hyper-fetishists have to make do with whatever comes out, most of which is crap, or is otherwise confined to a select few authors that seem to go for that kind of thing as well (like Megapone, though he also appears to be a macro-fetishist).
It just isn't fair to read someone's story and post "Hey, I love your concept and all, but can you completely remove an entire facet of the story for me and the handful of people who agree with me?" I know you didn't mean it that way, but it just comes off as selfish and rude.
6508802 Too true. Honestly, for me, I'm not for them being THAT hyper proportioned. Sure, I like a little bit of over proportioned, but just dang.
Thankfully, he compensates for it with how amazing he writes.
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I believe you misunderstood my comment. I was not asking for a complete rework of the story, not in the slightest. I apologize if it sounded that way. It wasn't my intention to sound like I wanted to conform the story to some different paradigm of clop, I was stating my opinion. Yes, I do get what you mean by saying that the issue Pascal runs in to might not be there if the ponies were 'normal' anthros, though that opens a whole other can of worms that I don't feel is proper to talk about here.
All in all, i never said the story was bad, just not something I related with setting-wise. The concept is, as I said, something I personally haven't came across before and if I didn't mention it before, the writing is well done and easily evokes imagery. I mean no disrespect to those that came to the story for the hyper aspect of it, I came to it for the 'normality' concept and didn't connect with the story as well as someone with different tastes might, so I stated why with all due respect. Again, I apologize for possibly coming off as rude, I didn't intend that.
6509629 Can't blame you. For me, I like 'em big breasted myself, but not to the point he has here. I'd say the max I'd like normally is a little larger than Rangiku's from Bleach. But the girls in this fic are several times larger than that. Admittedly, his incredibly good writing compensates for it, in my opinion.^_^ He just has a way of making a scene super hot somehow, yet also heartwarming as well, which is super rare.
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I wholly agree with you that his writing makes up for the
absurdvery large proportions for the most part, and it certainly is vivid, albeit not quite my style. I'll say it for a third time (because I really do mean it), the concept is really interesting! Just wishing that I knew of more that use the 'acceptance' trope if that is a proper term for it.6510221 Can't blame you. He said he's not using it on this, but I would have found it interesting if it did more than just mental change, but could also control what is normal, as in effect reality. However, even without that detail, he can't stop obtaining my interests. He's just that amazing of an author. Can't help but keep coming here for more of this amazing fic of his.^_^ He's just that good.:D
Pinkie Pie hunched over suddenly. "Haaa! Haaaah! Haaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh… Ohhhhh that's gooooood…" She slumped back and released Rainbow Dash from her thigh prison. The technicolor pegasus emerged looking like she'd dunked her face in a bucket of water.
Sixth... going to bed now. Read more later. Thumbs up.
TThat was epic &awesome read I really hope that becomes compatible with them soon or is right now.
This chapter was the best, I was hoping it would be so much hot, but I actually enjoyed it overall.
Oh my God...getting emotional during a...a "titfuck"
I don't know whether to applaud at the oddly placed character development, or just fap harder.
Edit 10/17/2021:
Although it is a very good time to get philosophical, I still think that the best place to reflect on the decisions made is the throne of the bathroom (that is, the toilet).