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I think what I love most about this story is how hard Pascal is trying not to be corrupted by his powers. He has these big personal debates, and will hold back on sex to have a meaningful conversation with Derpy about the horrid love life she's led.
It all means something to him. He doesn't want a brainless harem, he just wants to be accepted. And that makes him one of the more admirable perverts I've ever read.
I just love how he remains a nice guy after all of this thus far... I know I for one would have clamed all of them mares and had a massive orgy by this point probaley... XD... Shows how much restrant I have right? But yeah I love that about the main character.
I also like how the mind control didnt really pan out; They just went along with it. I kinda want to see the story behind why Rainbows so willing but it is her punishment after all and she is loyal. So no doubt she repays her debt...
Keep this up! I love the story and every chapter! Its a killer while waiting for its relese but once it comes out its so worth the wait!
Hrrrnh, holy fuck that was hot.
Huh, so he actually didn't control their minds, at least not so directly (although I'm curious if you planned that from the beginning, or if that's a reaction to the comments of the previous chapter...).
All this normalization stuff is really starting to hurt my mind, it's one hell of a bitch of a complicated thought experiment on far this thing can go...
Oh well, I'd gladly have all that if it means that the single hottest story on this site will continue (and I've read my fair share of clopfics and high-quality erotic literature, mind you).
Oh, also:
Pretty sure that "to keep" is followed by "going".
My favorite chapter so far!
I'm really, really going to need that Cakes threesome as a fully-written scene. For... science. Yes.
Dang. Just dang. Though confused about the forgetting about it bit.
The chapter was hot.
It seems that the normal doesn't alter minds it plays with them.
telling them to do something wrong, they won't hesitate, because the Normal implied it.
but deep inside they know that it's wrong.
Hmm.... Interesting thought. I wonder if, by using it a lot here, like Twilight said, that Normal starts to better come under his control, having more power as the power grows, but it having not effected his memories due to having not truly meant for them to outright erase their memories. Just to ignore it. XD
Yaay, Cakes are accepting, but Pascal just isnt pushing working shop, marketplace or town square at all. Save that for Big Mac, Mayor Mare, and the Nightmare Night opening ceremony?
Dont forget, Pinkie Pie is inflatable, and at least AJ is inflatable by Pinkie, canon.
Lets see just how normal handles Straigh, Bi, Gay, Curious, Other.
Talking of Other. I wonder how Zecora and Stephen Magnet are getting it on?
Nice, you got a lot done this chapter I'm impressed! That was a clever way of explaining away the more direct mind control and also makes it pretty hilarious too. Every pony so far has had their own original style which really makes me look forward to what each pony will bring to the floor.
Twilight's section was definitely my favorite, you brought Twilight all the way to the edge and then saved her which I'm happy about since it'd be a shame if she broke permanently, though I'd probably be fine even if Twilight stayed addicted and I'm secretly hoping Pascal's suggestion that she's not addicted is again just her acting like when he told Rarity and AJ to forget.
Here's to seeing if Pascal can keep going without giving himself a stroke, you've got to please all the mares Pascal I believe in you!
What's Pinkie getting find out next time on pony ball z. Also rainblow job.
When Derpy said "coltfriend", she meant Pascal or did I miss something over the previous chapters?
It would be Interesting if the Enhancement (somehow) overcharged his 'Reproductive Compatibly', to make it Slightly Possible should the right conditions be met (like when they are all in Heat)! How it Happened? What Use it could be? That's for everyone and the Writer to Decide!
Heh, the guy surely is having a round of fun today isn't he?
He's finding out new little aspects, indirect ways of saying something is 'normal' and all, and a lot of other nicknacks.
For now he's working up through the ranks, I'm predicting very interesting positions for the future.
Awesome.
Dat ass! Dat ass! Dem tits! Dat ass!
I've been thinking on it, and t he more I do, the more frustrated I get.
Why suddenly have his mind control not work? Even the characters thought it didn't make sense. If you were doing so to pander to those that didn't like the direct mind control, then this is really jarring. It goes completely against what you've already set up, AND you forget that some of your readers liked the direct mind control.
Heck, you WARNED readers that it would be a mind control fic, and now, you're suddenly going against this. That doesn't make sense.
Honestly, I hope you have a good explanation for it, cause the more I think about it, the more annoying and jarring it is.
Thankfully, you seem good with explanations, so I really hope there's a good reason, other than trying to pander to those that preferred the more subtle mind control effects. You WARNED them that there was gonna be mind control, and then they complain about it. I SINCERELY hope the reasons for that scene wasn't due to you pandering to them.-_-' Cause honestly, that section was just really jarring. In fact, it's no doubt the reason I didn't like this chapter as much as the last one. It just really was jarring in the story. Just took me a few days to realize why it wasn't as enjoyed as before.
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there's a slightly more detailed explanation of the mechanics coming in the next chapter, though if you want we could discuss in PM and not bloat this chapter's comments
suffice to say it's still mind control, in fact the same mind control it's always been, and no more. i didn't have to rewrite a word
i will say this though
if i feel like i changed tracks, it's not because i felt pressured. i didn't see any of the feedback as overly negative or even that much of a stretch. there's a big difference between 1) being pressured by negative comments and pandering to them and 2) listening to some interesting points in the comments and going, 'huh, that's actually a good observation, i'm convinced, i think that makes my story more interesting.' this is an example of the second
it's a natural consequence of authors reading feedback on a story as it's been written
6440279 Alright then.^^ And I don't mind being spoiled, so PM is fine then.:D
I like this stort very much but if the average mare is h cup then how big are luna and celestia
I like this, it's nice. The sexual content is well-done, and the story is amazing.
So the Normal Powers work by making everyone think that everything he says and does is completely normal, rationalizing it until it's not strange. But the more someone is exposed to it, the more resistance they can build up, allowing them to interpret the Normal instead of directly believing or doing what he says. This means that the more he uses it, the less he can directly control those he regularly uses it on, which is what he morally wants, if not sexually.
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that's an interesting way to look at it though i'm not sure if it's totally accurate
i wouldn't call it resistance so much as recalibration
when pascal changes a pony's expectations of what is normal to see and hear from pascal, those changes are permanent. each extreme out-there thing is accounted for with a mental change. eventually there comes a point where a pony is used to pascal and has their expectations calibrated mostly as far as they're gonna go. then they can function more normally and interpret the finer details, like a person does in normal social interaction, rather than politely adjusting for the big things all the time
at least that's how i look at it. i'm putting all this here because this is an interesting line of thought that has happened naturally with some of the characters but probably won't get expanded on too much in the main text
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Do you think you may have the last part ready for the weekend?
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maybe
could even be sooner than that. policy's always been 'it's done when it's done'
I've really been digging the last couple chapters. It's great to see Pascal really let loose with his abilities a bit (especially Rainbow Dash. Just seeing him talk her down from almost perceiving the mind control was unf).
Interesting that Rarity and Applejack didn't actually forget what he said when he commanded them to, but rather they simply thought it was a good suggestion to put it out of their minds. The Normal isn't an all-powerful memory changer, clearly.
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So Dash is stuck with her obssesion with Pascal 's member?
6460250 He said till the end of the party.
the way rainbow serves his cock is really hot for me another great chapter!
6466182 From what I read, I assume they're the size of bean bags per breast.
Hope AuNaturale gets inspired today
6461249 Well... Unless if she really enjoys it I guess... I'm sure that if she really liked doing what she is doing she would just... do it... Giggity...
6467071 XD True.
*Pulls up a seat and sits down on it with hands sitting in lap and stares at the page.... Waits...........*
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this was a terrible week for me, at work and at home
doesn't help that this chapter with nearly a dozen characters is very much out of my wheelhouse as a writer
but progress is happening. slow and steady
6467092 Better slow than not at all, eh?^_^ And I know what you mean about this week. Has been HELL.@_@
6467092 Totally Understand! Take your time the story is great and your writing is awesome! I'll just be sitting here waiting lol... *opens bag of chips and a soft drink* Take your time....
It seems Pascal and Derpy forgot what Normal does.
It makes everything you do and about you seem reasonable and normal.
You can't command people. But if you did command someone, they'd think of a reason worth following. I imagine that they figured that Pascal was embarrassed by telling Rarity she wanted to kiss him, so tried to forget for that. And Rainbow Dash had her "punishment" as a good reason to follow the orders. I wonder how much of that actually stuck, though?
They're rationalizing reasons to do what you tell them, but they're fully aware that you're ordering them to do things. Of course, most people would notice that they are for some strange reason doing what this person tells them to... but Normal makes it so that giving an order is just another old thing.
Please remind me--did Pascal previously get Twilight to think that his cum was delicious? If so, I forgot it, because this sort of came out of the left field for me?
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Please remind me--did Pascal previously get Twilight to think that his cum was delicious? If so, I forgot it, because this sort of came out of the left field for me?
Not speaking for the author, but the way I interpreted it was that would have been a normal reaction to him BEFORE he became 'always Normal'.
Earlier in the story, there were mentions that Pascal had to literally scrub himself down everyday because he emitted pheromones (that he wouldn't really smell, unless it was sweat), and that it set ponies on edge. You could either interpret it as they did not like his smell, or they really, REALLY did, but their prudish society made them uncomfortable with those thoughts, not helped when Pascal did sh*t like constantly ogle mares and the jacking off in the flower bushes that set this story in motion.
The cum thing seems similar. Golden Harvest/Carrot Top also really got into the taste of his cum when he got the blowjob from her in her carrot stall, and IIRC, all Pascal did was ask her to 'help him out' by sucking his dick. Twilight was similar, though in that case, he just said that she could probably just eat it to get rid of it after she magic-jobbed him in the fast food place.
It just seems that ponies like the taste of human jizz, which is probably one of the big reasons why they have a bad rep in Hyper Anthro-questria, especially since Celestia and/or Luna seem to be very prudish is what Zecora was correct. Or at least, that's what I think from what I've gathered so far.
how the writing coming along?
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i'm like in the home stretch man
today or bust
6484711 alright man thanks for letting me know
I'm just gonna leave this here...
8081246 You...You are a fucking god...
this is actually how I discovered I was bi
That was epic\awesome I can't wait for more Ihope he takes Twilight and Rarity's V cards soon.It gets better and better each chapter.
What is this story doing to me?? I literally had a dream about lyra showing her goods to me as she moaned in pleasure. Before I knew it she took off her v neck white shirt and her tight sweatpants, her amazing, plump, tits bounce up and down as she got on her knees before jacking my rock hard cock. Before I woke up, she said in a pleasurable fashion.
"See you soon~"
What does that mean?
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It means u could die mabye.......probably........yea u dead
I think he could also use his powers for non erotic means. Perhaps a couple of kids really annoy him and he makes them get a spanking even though that is outlawed.