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Yay! More stallion goodness.
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Agreed.
So, is Trixie going to become Derpy 's replacement for the time being?
I admit, clop apart, I like the way you write her... neither a obnoxious caricature or a poor woobie.
Aww, And heres me thinking that the show that Trixie was going to put on, to start with, wouldve been with the 4 guards and Pascal all at once, right there, and then use chinese whispers to corrupt the message to occupants to enjoy themselves with others as much as possible accross the city.
Then again, the slower pace of this story is far better, as the fun is in the detail, the detail is in the sex, and hopefully soon the sex will be in Trixie.
I wonder what ways she will come up with to abuse her current show eqipment to put on Pascals show, and on tour?
The Great And Powerful Trixie would like the assistance of Five strapping males to prepare for her next card trick. Or, being in Minotaur lands, Three will do.
Damn. Sunbutt scene delayed.
Recap appreciated. Also, very interesting to see the guards' reactions. It should be fun to see what Celestia's reaction to all of this will be.
This story is great fun and you keep drawing events out in wonderful ways!
Now if only people in real life can admit such things, it would make such much things go so smoothly.
Pffta hahahahaha! YES!
Oh this chapter made my morning so much better.
This is gonna be fun.:D Especially breaking down the prudes of the nobles in the process.:D
I hope Fleur appears in the next chapter.
Wow. Just wow.
So Pascal's got five hours to fuck around enough that the Normal can't get him and Trixie gets to be his assistant? This sounds like its going to be fucking amazing.
I freaking lost it right then and there.
It's odd to read a wish fulfilment fic with an actual legitimate reason to do the things he's doing. I also gotta say having Trixie show up and dump abit of knowledge on pascal was smart move because like Pascal said, she would have understanding of the feelings.
Great work on this chapter ( and all the other honestly) and building even more on the Normal.
Wonder if Pascal's going to realize this sort of thing is exactly why Celestia doesn't want humans around to begin with. Even the most saintly of us can become evil at times, so there's no saying how far he'd push this. Especially since he's putting his own needs before the peace of society. He's basically got to force his power on the entire nation before he's free. How many millions of lives will be changed? There's some heavy morality issues to think on here.
I love this. I have yet to see a mind control story with such a sense of urgency and a very real threat.
One of the best chapters which really shows why I love this story. Good plot presence and development here,you used good build up as well and in prev chapters, some lurid activity that ties into the events . A sense of urgency and oncoming threat. Limitations and bypassing of said limitations by the main char as per his power.
Great intro for trixie both to us, the story and Pascal. You held back on pascal just jumping her pants.
Really well done here.
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She comes off as a real person, or pony rather. Multi faceted with good and bad happening to her, done by her with reasons for pride and regret and her own motivations and hinted personal development and efforts
6567366 I wonder if Celestia's going to realise that the main reason Pascal's a threat is because Celestia has been treating him as an enemy?
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If you had millions of people depending on you to protect them, and your ancient allies betrayed you or an alien race invaded you, and they really fucked up all your people before you eventually won... and then later on another shows up, and you know each one has potential enough to destroy everything - what do you DO? Invite it in for tea and crumpets? Or try to run it out or flat-out kill it, weighing one life against the safety or lives of millions or more and choosing not to take the risk that it's either biding its time or will later become an insurmountable threat when you're not looking - after thinking it's safe? If the latter, you are decent leadership material! If the former, you might not want to go into politics.
Pascal is doing what's best for him. We all understand that, because we understand doing what we need to do for ourselves. Now flip the script - his opponent is doing what's best for a nation, if not an entire world. The nation and/or world Pascal has to indefinitely alter just to prevent becoming one of them. Hubris being what it is, if you don't think about that too hard, it sounds like a fair trade to you probably. Like most things of a nature requiring shallow thought to sound perfectly reasonable, this is actually not a good thing believe it or not!
Pascal, at the end of the day, is essentially a villain. A confused, desperate, mostly well-intentioned villain with power akin to a lesser god and only one person who's tried to prevent him using it. And in most cases, the actual protagonist of a story LOOKS like the villain from the actual antagonist's point of view. Pascal's a... relatively normal guy, but try not to mistake him for a hero. That's part of what makes this story so interesting, that he seems to be wandering to that very same epiphany, like it's a race to see if his conscience hits him fully first or the thirst for exercising his nigh-unlimited power grows until the line between 'using power' becomes 'abusing power'. Mind, the power is already naturally abusive to a degree...
This is a very human struggle, and like most human struggles it's not wholly good or evil, but enough of both it's hard to tell which side it lands on.
A brilliant move on Celestia's part. She's also not entirely wrong, but that's thanks to Discord. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6569957 I'm not saying that Celestia doesn't have reasons to be paranoid about humans, just that a shoot-first-ask-questions-later policy tends to generate more return fire.
However justified Celestia's actions were, they have helped create a serious existential threat where there was only a potential one before.
If Celestia had acted confidently, directly, and successfully to eliminate Pascal when he first arrived, maybe she would have been justified; maybe the political fallout would have been too much. As it was, she failed to eliminate him, and also failed to adapt to the situation and act to neutralise him as a threat the other way - by co-opting him.
Instead, she kept someone she thought was an enemy alive but at a distance and fostered the situation that led to the incident at the start of the fic.
"Diplomacy is the art of saying 'nice doggy' until you can find a rock." - Celestia forgot the first step.
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Exactly the problem. Twilight got involved and intervened on his behalf. Now the potential threat is become the threat realized. For all anyone knows he might have just naturally become a threat over time anyway. I suppose we'll find out during the meeting. Due to the intriguing setup of the story, we lack as much information as Pascal does, but we retain a greater ability of speculation than he seems capable of.
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"pascal can't seem to speculate celestia's motivations as well as we, who've had two days to discuss it calmly under no pressure"
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Yes, thus as I said, waiting to see if he realizes it before he goes down the slippery slope. It's quite interesting.
Good chapter, Trixie was a pleasant surprise and one I'm glad wasn't treated as a one-off encounter on the train. Any thoughts as to making her Pascal's dedicated partner in debauchery?
6572068 To be fair, Pascal wasn't initially a threat and he didn't have the capability to become a threat. It was Discord who pushed him into gaining his ability, and it was also Discord who instructed him on how to keep his identity. So it was Discord who's mostly to blame, considering how Pascal probably would've been lynched by the mob, sooner or later. I kinda can't blame Pascal for some of his actions, because he's literally a bull in an antique shop. If he so much as looks someone wrong he could fuck up. But Celestia probably doesnt know about what Discord did, so it's whatevs.
Well, after falling 5 or 6 chapters behind over the last few weeks, I caught up again in a single session of reading. Great work thus far, and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen with him and Celestia.
Nice balance of story and clop.
Did you base this Equestria on Marauder6272's work?
The Mane Six seem similar to image 863966 on Derpibooru.
Can't wait for the confrontation with Celestia.
6603273 Tried to find this Marauder6272 you mentioned, but couldn't find him.
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you fail at google
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yeah marauder is a big influence, not the only one, but a big one
can't really point to a single picture since it depends on the commissioner but that's the general idea
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I knew it! That Trixie you depicted was exactly the same as one of Marauder's commissions. Image 863909 on Derpibooru specifically :P
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It has been two weeks. Will it be any update this weekend?
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with family for a while. makes it hard to find the time and place for this
shooting for this weekend though
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Understandable.
Creating things of the erotic nature isn't something one would want to share with family members.
Especially, when it involves a franchise aimed towards a very young demographic.
That certainly can create all different kinds of levels of uncomfortableness.
This was awesome. it just real.
Okay, there's something I need to ask you. Didn't you feel uncomfortable while you were writing some homo scenes? Don't get me wrong, I'm just wondering if you didn't have trouble with that.
This is incredibly amusing. The whole 'I must have sex to survive' thing makes me laugh like a loon.
It's a life or death emergency... literally!
Fap like your life depends on it, Pascal, because it does!
Fap like you've never fapped before!!!
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The way I see it they are just a way to progress the story. To fill in the gaps and add to some world building like we find out about mac and cheerlee after the spa. Also I you can see it as mastrubation in a mental way. What would it be like to have a 30foot long schlong and how would you try to please ourself in that case.
But look at me normalising and racionalising a fic that has those two concepts inbeded it its core
The amount of character growth in this Trixie is well above "over 9000". It's amazing how well this character comes out - a mare that's been through hell and back mostly by her own goddamn wish - getting it truly and well, and working through it...
Well, I suppose, in a way - if she didn't walk away from it all with profound amounts of self-reflection, then she was just going to die a stupid death soon, I guess...
But still - she managed to cram a lot of personal growth into the time she's spent on her little tour... I know a few people who've done a lot worse and thought a lot less about it afterwards. I can really, really respect this Trixie. I suppose she's not only found a true inner strength, but also ways to express it to everyone's benefit.
Thank you, Author - you pulled Trixie off beautifully, in my mind. You wrote the character well. My heart just breaks in ten different ways for her, on that "Enjoy the excuse" line. She has a lot of her own shit to work through, and I don't think it'll ever truly go away for her. The way the scene plays out in my head... I just want to take her and shield her away from the world... to erase that profound sadness she carries inside. I'm sure I couldn't do that for her... but someone* should.
This Trixie is slowly earning the right to be truly happy, down the line.
Well, considering that - all jokes aside - this fic (and its sequel) is very heavily about personal growth... that shouldn't be all that suprising.
* actually... considering the latest (as of this writing) chapter of Acceptance... I think there's a particular mare that just might work! :D
warning: spoiler! Futa Twilight x Trixie... now that's an idea I'd like to see!
Indeed, one of the things I respect about Judaism is that they have an explicit rule that you can break virtually every other rule on the book if you're saving someone's life by doing so. (There are some additional nuances, but the existence of nuance is itself a good sign)
I have to say that (barring a few spelling/usage errors) this is a very well written story, especially for being a fetish grand tour. I actually find myself reading it intently even when I don't need to get one off. Well done!
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I would recommend you put that in a spoiler tag, Sir. While indirectly, it does point to an issue quite central to the plot.
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Yes his comment seems like a guess based on surrounding context, therefore not quite 'spoiler-y', but yours seems to come from someone who has read this to the end and is now confirming said guess, making it a spoiler.
Actually, your get clogged ears when descending because of the higher pressure.