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splitting this one more time so that the fashion chapters aren't lopsided
there'll be one more fashion chapter around this length
then one long-ish nobility chapter
then we finally reach celestia, i promise
also it's been over a year since i started???
Another great chapter. For a second there I was wondering if that spell was going to give Pascal a horsecock or something, but this is great too. Lol's at Hoity Toity's reaction. He's definitely the sort of campy stallion who'd be down for gender-swap shenanigans.
>inb4 he didn't use a potion/spell, he's actually just a Changeling.
BUG WAIFU WHEN?!
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HYPE! With the revelation at the end of this chapter I can't fucking WAIT to see what Celestia is gonna be like. I get the feeling that things are going to be pretty intense (as if they aren't already quite intense).
Okay Hoity, you win, you just... win.
Every time one problem is solved a new one arises. Pascal has been doing this for three days straight so that means Celestia has been resisting for three days straight. Moondancer was nearly turned into a bimbo in the span of a few hours since they met. Granted Celestia may have more mental fortitude but if the normal pushes harder the more the person resist. What if Celestia sending rook to block was her last line of defense? Are we gonna see Molestia here?
...
IT IS SO WEIRD WHEN PEOPLE WHO UNDERSTAND SCIENCE AND SOCIOLOGY WRITE PORN!
He raises an interesting, and terrifying, point about Celestia.
Also, Hoity should make for an interesting fuck.
Genderbent Hoity Toity..... I did not see that coming. Didn't assume it, didn't think about it.... nothing.
Now I wait for the next chapter.
This story is beginning to drag
7504715 Maybe we can get some spin off chapters where he has sex with males?
7505014 KABUKI MASK! KABUKI MASK!
7504983 I did not expect it at all either
So close with Moondancer, and Trixie at this rate is going to miss out as well with Pascal having to apply his efforts to everyone else. Given how much it hurt and the recovery, will Pascal be getting a second dose in time before Celestia or will it be accidental if it happens again?
When Hoity goes off to the Changing room, its a Changing room?
Next time, Trixie, Spitfire and Moony walk down the catwalk with gold lame breast hammocks and little else?
I confused diamter with girth at first and I was like.
''2.5 inches? wtf....''
Damn dude... when you throw a curve ball, it don't curve. It flat out corkscrews. I did notsee that coming. In hindsight I should have. I REALLY should have... but I didn't.
7505021 If I remember right... he already did that with Big Mac. I think. I could be remembering something from a different story.
7505274 He kinda did, kinda didn't, nothing really sexual happened I think.
7504715 Congrats on the awesome and over year long story! Keep it up, I'm really enjoying it, and want to see how this all plays out...
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uh if we're talking about 'customer service' there was a hj given and a bj received
I'm really adoring the plot and character development. The mystery of human-pony relations is fascinating and the moral and social ramifications are compelling. Moon Dancer especially brings these issues to the forefront, yet Pascal manages to stay relateable with his sense of ethics.
Gender bending, eh? Very nice.:D
My only complaint is him choosing to make it an expansion bit. They're already huge on normal mares. Thought the whole purpose was to get them to accept that instead of trying to reduce their overall sexualities and whatnot. It would still change things to have them do that, but going the opposite direction? Not so sure on that.
Aww, that's too bad.
Ooh, but this is nice too.
7504930 On the other hand, Moondancer had been blocked from rationalising away any conflicts by knowing too much about it. Celestia may be less affected in that way...
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Though it's awesome to know what to expect in later chapters, I did NOT expect Hoity Toity to change gender. Seriously, I think my jaw didn't just drop, it literally broke off its hinges. Now I need surgery, so I'm sending you my medical bill later.
Just kidding about the jaw part; my mouth is still functional. Still... shocker.
Nice development with Moondancer now not having to be subjected to the normal to accept Pascal. We hope that Derpy will also become 'immune' in the future.
The more you fight the normal, the more it fights back, with no discernible limits as to how strong it can fight back
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There was once, but... the author seemed skittish about it because a number of people following this story specifically want to see human male dominating pony female and nothing that isn't straight.
Personally I feel you aren't much of a dom unless you can drop men and women to their knees to worship your cock, whether you're straight or not. It's about the power, and showing them how to enjoy pleasuring you. So I definitely wouldn't have minded Pascal turning male Hoity into his bitch and violently throatfucking him.
7509452 Well, with what was done, magical gender bending is ironically one I can get behind. It's like a gray area to things.
7509474 At the end of it all, the only thing that matters is choice. Hoity Toity did that on his own with very little direct influence from Pascal. Considering the type of society Ponies in this story lived in, I can respect the courage that must have taken.
7509506 Too true.^^
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there was some initial backlash because it came outta nowhere in what's supposed to be the straight male wish fulfillment genre, yes
in the time since, though, i've gotten familiar with the gay and bi parts of fimfic and feel like i'll be supported no matter what i write, downvoters be damned
at the end of the day, it comes down to what i want to write, what i want to see, and being honest to my characters. apparently that includes the occasional encounter or comparison with a larger male
side note, i don't really see pascal as much of a bitch-maker, do you?
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He's not at heart, but that is his own wish-fulfillment and fantasy. And yes, consider that the vast majority of the fandom is very, VERY pro-LGBT, you are going to be supported regardless. Don't let them get to you, and stay true to what you want to do. If you want to branch out, experiment some, that's also for you to do. If you don't want to rock your own boat, no one can tell you different. Just enjoy your story and as long as you don't actively try to screw over your readerbase nothing negative anyone has to say actually matters.
Mind you, everyone who loves saying negative crap that doesn't help anyone will constantly say how important it is that you listen to them, but they just want to feel superior by putting people down. Separating the assholes from the people wanting to give you useful criticism is a bit tricky around here.
I'll be honest, as a clop, its not really doing it for me. As a story though, it's endlessly fascinating to me.
The erection I get is still a bit annoying though.
Honestly reading this has been quite the ride. I love how he himself has to both keep himself under control and yet he's compelled use his powers to stay alive. It's literally game over for him if he ever stops. It creates this kind of "Crank" feeling of urgency. The problem comes that he will eventually have to "die" cause you can only break the system so much before change itself becomes the norm. It's like balancing toxins, to much of either will kill you right away but the system will eventually fail... Or atleast if you look at this from a scientific way. Break the system enough then chaos becomes the norm.
As for my 2 cents on mass programming, just take a look at North American culture and happiness, we are starting to see some to the fall out from this desire to be happy and fear of other emotions. And we are in for a darker time because of that.
Pascal's desire to live versus the desire t not break people and the world has been very realistic. But he's is in a position where he won't be able to move forward with out reprogramming things. No body should have this power true, but with discord and celestia already setting the standards already, he has way more right then if this were to happen here.
I really hope though that even if he does get cause by the normal it becomes as epic battle, I don't want this story to go out with a wimped but a bang
I am just glad he's not chaotic evil... Or this would be a different story.
I can't wait to see where you take this next!
7505014 This pun... this is the best pun
AuNaturale, you have created a wonderful story here!
The character interactions, the observations of society, the psychological happenings, the philosophical debates, the personal issues that arise and are dealt with, it's all just fantastic to read!
The clop in between has slowly become bonus material that I sorta skim over if I'm not in the mood, or absolutely devour if I am.
This whole read has been a great trip so far, and I do like the way you explore the theory behind cutie marks and their limits using an extreme case, and the way you apply the 'no magic' rule to the non-magical creature.
All excellently written, and I await the next chapters eagerly
Rule 63 has been introduced.
The story has just gone up several notches for me.
Lovely descriptions as always!
7548600 I agree. I know the comment is a little old but it is so right. It isn't a generic clop story but something more. I'm glad Pascal is the way he is and not some powerhungry, self-absorbed asshole trying to brainwash all of equestria. He tries to protect these close to him as good as possible. I hope his personality won't get destroyed in the end. Hopefully there is an option where neither equestria or he has to pay the ultimate price.
That was awesome & epic and the end wow did not see a genderswap coming,I still hope Moondancer will join his herd soon.
Wow, so that means Pascal's power is starting to affect Celestia as well? That sound scary to be honest.
By the way, that final part.... WHAT?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!??!
I'll be honest, I'm not sure how to feel about Rule73 (or whatever rule it is)
... fuck.
He lowered his glasses again, and I noticed his eyes were still focused on my dick, like he'd been talking to it the whole time. "In fact, I wouldn't mind offering my own… services in that regard…"
"Uh…" My brain halted for a second as I looked him up and down. The stallion's crotch-pouch I'd been ignoring seemed more prominent than ever all of a sudden. "I'm… open-minded, but… No, I don't really… swing… that…"
Ik Pascal doesn't swing that way, but if the fanpics are anything to go by, I would swing for Hoity Toity stallion. Even if I'm only getting a bj or hotdogging his ass till I cum, I promise that he will be one of the first stallions I experiment with.
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Not sure how I missed your comment the first and second times...
No, it means that his power has been affecting Celestia - much like it did Moondancer - from the microsecond he got it. She was already aware of his presence, she was already actively opposing his very existence - long before he got this ability. It stands to reason that, considering her vast reserves of mental fortitude and magic, she's going to be the one to resist the most and for the longest time... meaning, the backlash she's going to experience will be of cosmic proportions when it finally hits.
And believe me, it is.
This made me smile, and chuckle a little. Not too much, though, since my mom is sitting five feet away.
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What a chad. Reading porn five feet away from your mom.