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it's me aunaturale the guy who takes three weeks to write a single sex scene
6633040 It's okay- story's really good. I'd rather wait and have quality content
6633040 hi aunaturale
6633040 and I'm guessing three more for the next? I kid but I did enjoy this chapter and story so far. I seriously can't wait for him to get to Celestia.
This sentence does not make sense.
missing a 'to'
Next time, DONUT JOE'S PATENTED CREAMY FILLING!
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
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Another excellent chapter, as usual.:D
Is it bad I read this for comedy? Or that I read it?
Yaay, Proper Room Service at last. Send it up the chain of command so that each hotel gets to have its own variation, differeing times, differeing hoidays, festivals etc?
Lets see Donut Joes. Soda, Milkshake Jerk, extra heavy on the Jerk, milk, cream?
Any stallion giving cream milkkshakes gets a free ring donut, up to the total length of donut covered cream maker?
Kiddies get free milk on tit? After all, if theyre going to start on it in life, why stop?
Poor Trixie, ponies are supposed to be Dragon compatible, and she hasnt even been making a Minotaur dissapear yet. Maybe Pascal will have to come up with the reality celebrity proam tour show, Enter The Dragon? Host is Miss Harshwhinney, who shows the contestants just what they can win at the start of Every show? But, dragon eggs need lava, or magic to hatch, so she is safe with a clutch or twelve?
Take it slow, as a good foundations means you can build the largest and longest lasting erections on them.
6633573 No, to both
6633040 I'm not complaning... Not at all... But I was sitting in a dark room hugging my knees to my chest and rocking back and forth muttering. "next chapter, where, when is the next chapter." All last week...
Keep it up I love the story oh so very much!
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I'd say it was time well-spent. I really liked this chapter. It felt so very... balanced, I suppose.
There was time spent learning new things about Pascal and Trixie, with respect to background and character.
There was time spent building a genuine rapport between the two, enough that they seem to genuinely care for one another outside of mind-influence, as Pascal did with Derpy and the others.
There was sincere, serious acknowledgement of the morality of Pascal's ability and the enormity of the decision he must make.
And, of course, there was hawtness enough to uphold the standard set by the story so far.
All this considered, and it didn't feel as if these elements suffered any drop in quality since the beginning. I'm no expert, of course, but I found it a good read. Thanks for sharing your writing.
I am still dearly loving this story!!!
6633680 all of this sounds appealing
6653819 Yet
I was a bit unsure about the mind control premise at first, but I really like the feel of this fic. And while I don't really care for gay shenanigans, I can actually read your portions without discomfort. The warnings are greatly appreciated on that end.
Really interested to see what Pascal gets up to next.
6633040
Does that mean your rate of release will be that slow from now ?
update pls
6633040
Been a while since your last update. Have you given up this fic?
6710892 LOTR Dwarf
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a mix of burnout and legit going through some tough times, emotionally and financially
haven't given up though
there's a solid 3000 words sitting on my desktop. just 6000 or so more to go
6722319 I'm glad to hear you are, okay, I had feared you died... I would have very said... I love this story,
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I can hardly wait for Pascal to have his meeting with Celestia.
I've been dying to see the ruler of Equestria put in her place, and thanks to his powers Pascal can do literally whatever he wants to her.
6786414 I am not familiar with the french dwarves.
6787570 they are a very rare breed, only come out at night
Ihope things keep going whale and he doesn't have to go nuclear.
Am I the only one reading her "master" replies in HK-47's inflections? :D
Please tell me I'm not the only one! :D
... anyone up to drawing this specific scene? It's amazingly hot.
Although that moment right before, when she's just this mare that's being appreciated, and she's not entirely sure what to do with herself... is extremely endearing in its own way, and I wouldn't mind having it immortalised as well. It's a very different image, but no less powerful.
Ya know, I've gotta say, I am honestly intrigued by reading this story. Yeah, it has sex sex and even more sex, but the actual story element is honestly well done too. The very serious threat of your entire existence being overwritten, and you'd never know and be happy about it. Very interesting.
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That's the exact reason why I really like this fic, despite the sex and the fetishes, there's a lot of character development, especially the protagonist, that makes you feel like you're growing with him, about the main problem or enemy that in Any moment can strike and that you are certain that, even if the time of conflict arrives, the protagonist will still be there to still have adventures.