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Now, on to the matter of the story itself.
Normality is an interesting nemesis, isn't it? Both for Discord and for Pascal. I would say Celestia too, but she won't be an enemy for much longer. I do like her implied threat of letting the magic take its course, though.
So now either Pascal must become normal, or he must reshape Equestria, and maybe even the lands beyond their borders.
very interesting! Tomorrow will be very intersting that is for sure... Some crazy and sexy things to going to be going on now; and Pascal will most likely be thinking of ways of pulling out all the stops without distorying the world!
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That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
I was wondering when the "Dark" tag would begin to apply.
Wow, excellent job giving Pascal a very good reason to go all out with his powers. He's already gone over the fact that he's too afraid to really make large changes but if his identity as Pascal the Human is at risk he'll definitely do it, but obviously only after talking with Derpy and maybe Twilight about the best choices to help himself be normal while not fucking things up too much.
So the things that make Pascal abnormal compared to the average pony stallion:
His physiology, telling everyone in Equestria that he looks normal might work or he might end up having to take more surgery or magic enhancements.
His lustful nature, so he'd probably need to encourage a more promiscuous Equestria or alternatively develop some way to turn his lust on and off at his command.
And maybe a lack of magic? Though I feel like the Normal is more or less his cutie mark and fills that gap.
I suppose Twilight's position has now fully entrenched as "friends with benefits" which is okay by me, after all being the Princess of Friendship it only makes sense .
Derpy is nearly official special somepony which I'm glad because she's been nothing but the sweetest pony to Pascal. I forget but do we know what her thoughts about him were before he got the Normal? Was she in the mob originally or did she mainly ignore him?
Finally the princesses arrive, or at least one princess for now. I liked the scene with him being confused about her actions until they both realized that he wasn't really lucid the last time, also I'm somewhat hoping that Luna's breasts aren't really as big as they appeared in the dream because at some point a pony shouldn't even be able to function normally with how massive they would be and It's hard to really take a character seriously when they're 70% breasts.
Looking forward to the meeting with Celestia and whatever Pascal ends up trying to change.
6515925 Dammit, wasn't fast enough.
Talk about a wham episode, sweet Narrator.
Evil, evil cliffhanger.
Things are going to be interesting at the meeting with Celestia...
As far as I'm concerned, as a major hyper enthusiast, I don't care how big their body parts get. In fact i hope they keep increasing in size till the end of this story! I actually like seeing characters with impossibly huge parts, and still dealing with normal life as much as the heavier erotica, so i at the very least hope that Real Luna is every bit as big as described here, and am very, very much hoping that Celestia dwarfs her little sister.
It's the first time I read Derpy carrying something without dropping it.
It scares me.
Id say the simplest Normal disruption Pascal can do, given the extremes in size have already been stated as being physically normal, is taking that stallion as it breaks in, and forcing it to mould with him, keeping all the useful parts, leaving the major bodily form intact, and then Normalising that any shape is enjoyable and desireable, not just equine perfection of male and female.
Break the Aryan demand, and unlock the hybridisation that elsewhere lead to the greatly restricted range of Griffons, Manticore, Chimera etc?
Twilight and Spike Id thought be greatest affected due to being nearest, but zecora have the greatest range of partners possible being in the forest? first privacy of roms, then houses, then distance in the park etc, then by stalls, just so that you dont get path obstruction of Big Mac turning Cheerilee into a balloon in the middle of the market?
Im sure there are a few persons who would enjoy going into a quiet cafe etc with a cute server, and getting a donut and hot coffee. And a drink.
So basically Pascal has to make the Normal see his kind of behavior and learn that it's how he is, right? Once it does, it will back off and let him live on as himself for the rest of his life, right?
It's strange how the universe works with mind control and stuff.
There you go again making this story engaging as all hell. It really is well thought out both in plot (yuk yuk) and with the simpler interactions. I'm actually ok with saying I'm eagerly awaiting for more of this.
Oh man, watching Luna struggle to resit Pascal's Normal, and talking about how Celestia and them struggled, was really sexy. I absolutely love that sort of thing, and I cannot wait to watch Pascal revenge-fuck Celestia and turn her fully over to his side. Preferably with a battle of wits and mental gymnastics as she tries to escape his new Normal.
That entire dream sequence, seriously holy fuck. So now Pascal needs to start twisting Equestria on a grand scale in order to survive as he is? I really like this method of justifying it and pushing him to do so. He should definitely enlist Twilight and Celestia's help in determining how best to do it. This is gonna be epic.
Since we know that 'permission' and general social change can be transmitted from pony to pony, I'm thinking Pascal should do some kind of speech and tell people to spread the message. Something like, "blah blah changes, you all have permission, and I encourage you, to tell others about these changes. Tell them that they have permission to spread the message as well, don't stop spreading until everyone you know has heard!" However it happens, I'm pretty excited to see what goes down.
Derpy continues to be top-tier horse waifu in this. I don't think it's possible to be cuter than she is!
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6519999 Oh, now I see what you meant >_<
After seeing the description of Luna and remembering that most people make Celestia the bustier of the two, I've started to suspect that Celestia has boobs literally too big to walk with. Considering the hints that humans are responsible for Equestria's hyper situation, that would make her dislike of humans a bit more understandable.
So Pascal has to become the Ubermensch?
I kinda hope when he meets her, he spits in Celestia's face and tells her to rationalize it. It's her fault this even happened to him. I like this story, it's great when a tale pulls emotion out of me, even if it is anger.
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Has anyone considered maybe Celestia knew what Pascal was about to do, the danger he represented? She had Dreams about Tirek's escape, after all, so maybe she had also an actual reason for wanting the human contained in an asylum .
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On the flip side of that argument, Pascal would have never undergone the normal spell if it weren't Celestia's unwillingness to help him. If your theory is right than Pascal is a sympathetic villain in my eyes, and it makes me feel that she deserves whatever outcome. Don't get me wrong I like Celestia, but this story makes her unlikable.
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How's your inspiration this weekend?
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made a big push last night, probably another one tonight
jesus christ. never thought Id say this, but tits this huge are fucking way too much. jars me out of the story when all you can see based on description is cartoonishly oversized everything. Write how you want, but I cant read this as is.
This is not only getting better and better but more serious and real in chapters like this.
You know, not only I enjoy this story because of the hot sex scenes, but also I enjoy how you're focusing the conflict and your character's inner thoughts. I wish I could find more of those around here, also to see how much he's lucky to have sex with other mares.
Oh Shit
Now we have some REAL stakes at hand!
Change the perceptions of Equestria...or lose himself to the Normal.
Change everybody else...or change himself.
What a tough, unfair choice.
Now that, is how you creep the shit out of a reader and make em' go "Oh shit," not to mention I was even listening to foreboding music during that.
Bravo.
... aaaaaand I promptly lost it again.
I think the neighbours might be tired of my unexpected bursts of laughter... they seem to be calling the cops...
That way lies madness.
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I wish I could let out my laughter the same way you do, but I have to keep it locked up so my family doesn't look at me weird for laughing out of nowhere