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Man, Pascal is going to have a wild night ahead of him.
Who all be first? I choose Rarity!
This is such an oddly engaging story and not just because of the sex. I guess putting a good amount of effort into exploring this "Normal" curse thing and its effects is what I'm liking the most.
6417346 naw mrs cake
so awe- HOT!!!!
Jesus Christ don't stop.
I really love this story! It keeps getting better and better by the second!!!
Yaay for Normal Big Mac and cheerilee. First quietly, but then as everyone accepts its normal public knowledge, in the marketplace? Will Pascal, from this party, infuse the population with the socially acceptable anti monogamy herd try outs, so next party, Big Mac shows Cheerilee what he can do with Fluttershy, while Pascal demonstrates and learns on AJ?
Maybe Derpy is going to let it slip that if Pascal is too occupied to help her, that someone or more could help her? After all, with all that milk she could do with some storage containers for milking. Isnt that right Mrs Cake. Hopefully Pinkie will have a whole collection of items around for milking and other emergancies.
Poor Spike, after all this, and we havent seen Twilights fristration next, he is going to need to swalow a hosepipe to deal with Twilights desperate attempts to work on him for her, research.
Isnt it true that AJ and Dash are ultra competative pansexuals that will use anyone and anything to hand to prove each can take more and last longer than the other, in the new and improved Iron Pony competition, that needs so much training?
Fluttershy and Iron Will, Mr and Mrs Cake, Cheerilee and Big Mac, AJ and Dash, Twilight and Spike, Octavia and Vinyl, Pinkie gets to take it to everyone for the party, and everyone heads to Rarity for the boudior and he extensive range of, stimulating, and assistive clothing and accesories?
So much fun, so little time to write it all down.
On men, on to the waiting game once more.
in a strange way i hope rarity doesnt take part, i guess i just have a thing for spike and rarity shipping.
This is going to get wild.:D
Another amazing chapter, and yet I'm somehow looking forward to the next one even more than the last! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next time!
honesty
Well, looks like I need to have stacks of boxers nearby. Just reading this makes me go over the edge without any hands-on stimulation.
Can't believe I just said that.
Yes, Pascal. Search your libido, you know you must pound that MILF.
Okay, when Pascal began with the whole "Rarity kiss" thing... that wasn't just "normalization", he literally made everyone but Derpy forget he even said that. If that isn't direct mind control, I honestly don't know what is...
(And before you begin about the "No comments on the blatant altering of her mind, then."-line practically stating direct mind control, that could easily be distributed gah, not sure if that's the right word to the roleplay Dash was forced upon, as well as the rationalization that Pascal's description of his dick and balls just made Rd incredibly horny, all the while following his orders.)
I was caught off guard by what came after it, to be honest. What wasn't direct control, in my opinion at least, was Twilight also giving him a kiss... I wonder if the suggestions Pascal makes are contangious if they relate to him, even if he just refers to one character.
I'm also wondering why Rarity and Aj didn't think Rd's punishment was cruel, while Twi, Pinkie and Shy all had some problem or another. (remember, Pascal did say that he himself thought it was a little cruel.)
Curious...
Please, do continue.
Alrighty so we've now crossed the line into full on direct mind control, I'm not sure if I'm okay with this predicament because while I like the direct mind control this has a different sort of appeal than the more indirect power Normalcy was displaying to begin with. I'm going to just assume that this direct mind control developed from his power becoming stronger as mentioned previously.
I'm impressed at Derpy's ability to absolutely destroy Pascal's morals, getting him to step out of his comfort zone so to speak, she's become nearly as big a pervert as him now too so she's definitely the best assistant Pascal could have asked for.
That talk he's gonna have with Twilight should prove fairly interesting, because Twi knows he has some sort of special ability as demonstrated in the first chapter but I assume it hasn't really crossed her mind that its the cause of all of this, so if he were to really explain the situation I wonder how she'd act? Maybe she'd end up the same way as Derpy? I'm unsure because Twilight can control ponies minds already (Want it Need It, that spell she used to give her friends their original personalities after being discorded, the reforming spell she mentioned to Discord) and obviously doesn't abuse that power, if she were to find out Pascal doing it is completely normal would that warp her own morality about doing it?
This direct mind control has opened up quite a few new options for Pascal and he's really going balls to the wall with it so far, the sexy stuff is all really nice too and I like how everypony got so horny from watching him mess around that they were the ones to eventually ask if it should be an orgy. The next chapter should be quite something now that Pascal and Derpy have fucked with what's normal so much, I highly recommend that Pascal put out some sort of command to everyone else that once the party is over anything sexual they did won't be mentioned or else everypony in Ponyville will be lining up to make-out with him.
Silly human. She's just the angel on his shoulder. Angels can be perverts, too.
This chapter was worth the wait!!!
And yet here we see the great irony about Pascal: all this time, he's been normalizing himself. He thinks that it's normal to be that obsessed with breasts, normal to have so little self-control. He considers it unfair that the people around him look the way they do without taking his feelings into account. The whole thing even kicks off when he stares at women on the street, masturbates in public, and then tries to pass himself off as the victim. He's so convinced that his worldview is the natural and superior one that he'd rather change the entire world to agree with him than maybe consider changing part of himself for the benefit of someone else.
The question, then, is this: At the end of the day, is this a pornographic satire about male sexual entitlement, or just some particularly well-written pornography with scatterings of self-awareness? (You can't accuse me of overthinking this; the whole story is about overthinking the premise.)
6419153 You say all this, but you forget: Before Discord played his hand(or claw) in this, he was entirely ready to take the risk of changing himself for others, yet Discord convinced him keeping his self-identity was an option, and things changed from there.
This is nice
I think Pascal should start with Pinkie, as a "reward" for the party and the game idea.
B-E-A-UTIFUL.
Pascal's power are getting kind of scary now. He could say 'the sky is red' and the others would have their perceptions altered to see it as such and believe it's always been that way. I wonder how long it'll be before he can say 'the sky is red' and it'll actually turn red for real. That'd basically make him omnipotent.
Interesting how ponies don't find these acts 'normal' if they don't know he's behind them. I'm just waiting for him to give some mare a command like 'suck every dick in Ponyville' , make them as obsessed about it as he made Rainbow, and make everyone forget he said it like he did with Rarity's kiss. Not being in the know the stallions and any witnesses would react naturally, which would be rather amusing.
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no it doesn't
6420043 Ah. Thought it did. Okay. My bad then. Went ahead and deleted that comment then.
Excellent chapter and to imagine its just the 1st half leading to the main event!
Welp, this renders my previous comment on mind control moot. ಠ_à²
Oh, and I notice that he never did undo Rainbow's addiction to his dick and balls. XD
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Well, he said it would last until the party ends. No need to undo it prematurely. She can stay there between his legs for the rest of the night while he has fun with the other girls' breasts.
6424001 True enough.^^
I just had to say, I am really enjoying this story.
It's got the right mix of story and story driven smut that I really enjoy.
I'm curious, you've dropped hints about how mares go through their post-cutie-mark growth and Pascal mentioned how the CMC haven't gotten their marks yet and so aren't super endowed like the other mares he's around. Might we see that come up later? As in, they get their cutie-marks and Pascal gets to see first hand what a mare's growth spurt is like?
Anyway, good job and keep up the good work. You inspire me to get back on my own writing.
6424684 I'd also love to see this. Especially if he used his MLP knowledge to purposefully get them to go through said growth spurt.^^ Possibly even getting to cop a feel as they grow right in front of him.
The one thing I want to happen right now is for Twilight to go a little... crazy and for pascal to try to get her off of his sperm, but end up having Twilight and Spike going at it. Maybe have her tell him that Pascal said it was ok when he refuses... Or better yet have it happen with Shining Armor so it can ease Cadence and the other Princesses into the plot!
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I know you are busy with the real world, but will you update this week?
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i'm trying to get this next one done faster than the last one
but
i've just realized, 3300 words in, that this is gonna be a long one
and a 'hard' one, goddamn
e: actually what i might do is split this next sequence into two chapters
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Agreed with the split option. Besides, it gives you more opportunities for late corrections.
Good luck!
6430142 Good luck with the split then.^^
Good chapter, and I enjoyed it, but I feel like the 'direct control' direction this chapter took might be hit or miss for some. I was more comfortable with Pascal making mental suggestions that were rationalized and accepted, with some room for disagreeing or expressing discomfort. His power is to dictate normality, after all, which is a more subtle way of getting the opinion of others to gravitate in the direction Pascal wants it to. In this chapter, however, he essentially brainwashes Rainbow Dash by giving her commands ("You want my dick now"), instantly snuffing out whatever free will she had around the subject. I know the story has been tagged with mind control, but if it's this direct, then it's actually a terrifying power to wield, and if Pascal hasn't already thrown his morals completely out the window, then he'd at least feel guilty about taking away their ability to choose.
6431677 With the no repercussions, this is inevitable. In the end, the main thing is how well he writes out the scenarios, and he so far does so very well.:D
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seeing an interesting consensus here
the original Universal Acceptance idea came pretty explicitly packaged with direct mind control, but it didn't have this particular origin story either
not gonna rewrite anything, but there's actually a little wiggle room in this chapter i can capitalize on if i need to
gonna keep this in mind
6431879 I personally liked the direct mind control, personally. Especially with how there was reason behind it.
Honestly, it's as he said: it's a hit and miss type deal, depending on the viewer.
And as you said: You forewarned about the mind control. If people don't like that after you WARNED THEM, then as some people would say: tough cookies. XD
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I think people prefered suggestion to direct mind control because it forces Pascal too use more clever wording, setup, and continuous lowering the standards of the "victim ", rather than a blunt "do what I say slut ".
6433088 Not saying that that's not what they're saying. I fully understand that that's what they mean. But, they're complaining about something that the author straight out forewarned about. If they didn't want to read something like that, then they shouldn't have started reading the fic.*shrug* Up to them what they read, after all.
Wow. This night is going to probably end with a bang. Anyway, I'm waiting for the Alicorn Sisters to show up.
6433738 I never intended my post to be taken as a complaint, nor did I ever say that it was something that would make me stop reading, or even that it was something that particularly bothered me. AuNaturale is perfectly free to write his story however he wants to, and I'm still interested to see what's going to happen. The chapter marks a change from one type of mind control to another, however, and while I did say I found one direction (where Pascal would have to be a bit more clever, with the possibility of unexpected willingness from his target) more to my liking , it doesn't mean that I want the author to avoid the other or change anything just to fit my personal preference. Sorry if there was a misunderstanding.
6436956 Understandable then.^^ Though, personally, I'm still hoping that he later learns that the power does more than just mind control.^_^ But, only time will tell.:D
This line just doesn't really fit right imo... I think that fucking doesn't need to be there. either that, or maybe swap it to She really didn't fucking care. But the way it's currently structured, it just doesn't work.
Other than that, great story, and I look forward to reading more.
How big are Fluttershy's breasts? She must have car sized boobs XD