Page generated in 0.033 seconds
Total duration
1,040 users online
1,725,328 hits today, 2,818,023 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
insert the usual excuses for why this took two months again here
actually let's just say 'no paycheck' and 'no privacy' and leave it at that
And a new chapter for your followers, nonetheless. Consider me appreciative and impressed.
I like how this plays out. He has a 'sort-of' mind control power, but he doesn't want to just turn into a monster with it. So he has Trixie and Moondancer now to balance him, Trixie to push him and Moondancer to keep him levelheaded.
This just got really fun. So the fashion industry, that will be interesting. Having run way models like Fleur De Lis get involved this would definitely spread some influence. The Wonderbolts would be awesome. The team is mainly mares but their are stallions too. With the changes he's making Rainbow will probably still end up fitting in with them just fine. Then we have nobles, and getting them to break character and get raunchy will definitely help the 'normal'.
I can't wait for the next update.
7043717
it's fine if it take a while. I think some most people won't mind
Amazing chapter, once again.:D
Noooo I finished!
is fine your still awesome!
7043717 Dude, you can take as much time as you need.
One thing, though, and I am definitely agreeing with Trixie here: Can we have at least one chapter where Pascal shuts up about all his morals and we just get some straightforward perversion of society? I mean, all the moral dilemmas are awesome, and really serve to set this story apart from all the others, but the massive social changes he enacts with a wave of his hand are even more awesome.
Oooh, I see hypnosis in the near future!
Great chapter, as always. Moondancer is cute.
7044009
setting up some turn-brain-off time is basically the purpose this whole chapter serves
7044400 YAY!
Oh my God please
Nipple penetration is the fetish this story wants to deserve to need to have
The Nobles have a porn orgy party? After all, Up Pompei it was perfectly Normal for the Master and Mistress to enjoy each other in full view of the servant, ebcause they were below notice. Maybe Pascal instead would get the servants not only noticed but rewarded?
What better for one of the Apples or other Earth pony, expert at cow milking, to demostrate on Moondancer first, to be picked up for one of the Nobles Mistress requirements? After all, sleeping at night is a Looong time to go undisturbed.
At the Wonderbolts Stadium, Moondancer can finally, due to time restrictions, get all in one in front of the training crowd, and either get selected for the mascot, half time service or similar for the main multi thousands fully packed stadium, where young hopefuls get to try out for the team, and trained by more expierenced elders?
Fashion show would be Anne Summers, Victoria Principle or other succh mild erotic to start with, with others going on to Punk and fetish special lines? Would be intresting to see what Rarity could come up with, a range of provocative full covering clothing that does nothing to restrict immediate access and support etc, hidden hoops to hold milk pipes and such like.
I wonder how long before they find a college sports campus, Trixies dream of fully capable males sets them up, and they walk it off by using Moondancer as snack table relief?
Took me a bit to work through it, but I think I found a variation on this. One Wish Man. Using the rule, if you wish for something that already exists, the wish doesnt reigger and so is not wasted, I propose.
I wish that such has always been, that....
Now when the wish happens, the event has always been, therefore the wish doesnt trigger. This means you dont bring people to life, theyve always been alive through whatever means, people dont fall in love as theyve always been that way. The wish searches through alternates and switches you to that alternate, meaning nothing has altered?
Still waiting for sunset, where All those Fountain Guards finish off by ending in Moondancer, all at the same time.
It will be very interesting to see where things go from here.
As much as I'm enjoying all the well written sex, I am curious about how Pascal could use his ability in a non-sex way and what might come of it. I doubt it'll be explored overmuch, but it's interesting to think about.
7044467
This! So very much this! I was half expecting it to happen after it was mentioned here. AuNturale, please!
You can go two ways with this:
I don't know what she did, but whatever it was sent Moondancer over the edge.
or
I don't know what she did, but whatever it was, Moondancer went over the edge.
The only way I can think for this to be workable is that Trixie is leaning over Moondancer to get at her right tit.
7054687
that first one
it's always the post-sentence-restructure typos that destroy me
okay so
moondancer's on her back
trixie's leaning forward on the left side from pascal's perspective
she sucks on the nearest tit
that tit is on the left from pascal and trixie's perspective
but from the perspective of moondancer, that tit is on the right
it is her tit, her possessive pronoun
it is her right tit
7054843 ah, my side perspective was messed up. I guess that's what happens when you multitask (reading/college algebra/essay writing) at midnight.
7065517
author i like, check
high praise, check
this has been the kind of day where those things help a lot, thanks
7133323 I've just realised that she would've had to have eaten like 5 times her own body weight in food in order to grow boobs like that.
These horses are over fed. That's the real reason they've got proportions like an amateur sketch artist got massively drunk and decided to try to draw the female body.
OMGthat all I can say about this chapter it just keeps getting better and better I just can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
I'm really enjoying how this is going! And it was so hot the threesome scene!
Regardless of how goddamn arousing all of this is, I think I most enjoy the little moments. The sex is all good and well, but it's the little character moments that really define this story.
Captain Obvious, signing off. *flies away*
... and I can't help but read Moondancer in the voice of Charlyne Yi (the actress who played dr Chi Park on House M.D.). With the sort of accusatory tone... it fits.
... heh, actually the characters have a little bit more in common. They're both hidden badasses, they're both highly inquisitive, both have fairly rigid outside constraints - but at the same time both are quite open to experience and, when given the right framework, very eager to experiment. They also both go through this phase where they're extremely sceptical about the protagonist, but eventually not only warm up to him, but also start using his own tricks against him.
If I didn't know any better, I'd say the Author was taking at least some inspiration there... ;D
Well, here I am again. Again.
I can't get enough of this story. And to be honest, apart from a number of specific scenes, I mostly just skip the sex, because - as funny as that may sound - this story isn't about that.
I absolutely love how the story adds depth to these characters. And I may have mentioned this before, but I just adore Trixie here. She's sexy, she's driven, ever the performer... but in quiet moments like these, she's a wonderful person. She's willing to sacrifice herself in some ways from hour one - and yeah, I get that she's sort of been through this a few times, but... this time, it's by her choice. She doesn't have to be this, yet she chooses to.
And I absolutely love how she's getting a good deal out of it, for a change. I love how she's being treated well by this fate - is this what Trixie would've been in the show, had she been ready to receive? I'd like to think so. If I were Pascal, and it really came down to it, I'd sacrifice myself for her if nobody else. She's sexy, exciting!, powerful, mindful, considerate - all at once, in all the good ways.
Well look who's back re-reading this little gem...
Dear Author - thank you for this story. "Come for the sex, stay for the story and characters" in a nutshell - if I had to describe the sort of story I find this to be. It's really amazing how, each time I read it, I find a little detail - about the characters, or about myself - that I've seemingly missed before. And I think that's what good stories are, in a way, about.
Anyway, on to the meat of the comment, which is...
... and I just realised that I'm exactly the same way. I don't even recall an instance of "plain fucking" I ever took part in. I could propose that I never found a good opportunity for it, but to be honest - I feel I simply missed them, because even if they were made available, I wasn't really looking (or actively avoided looking, perhaps). It always means something to me, and - I suspect that it has to, because that's what I've been conditioned to think and expect... to the point where I entertain "plain fucking" as a concept in sexual fantasies, but most likely wouldn't in real life.
Also, low-key revelation: things that I can sometimes think "don't happen to me" - is it possible that they actually do, but because I don't anticipate them happening, I always find some other mundane explanation and move on? Worth considering...
So, people find revelations about themselves in works of great writers and philosophers, right? Shakespeare, Dumas, Dostojewski... I find mine in gems like this, in porn. Sick, right?
Except... does it really matter where you find your revelations? Does it diminish the weight of the revelation? Curious... And, if you think about it: where else would you find revelations about the way you think about sexuality, if not while reading smut? ;D
They do say that it's the dosage that separates the therapeutic from the toxic, right?
7291848
If I may -
Please, never hate yourself for how you are. These things are just how your brain is wired, for better or worse. You absolutely should explore the origins of your fetishes, but never feel wrong for having them. If nothing else, you can feel ill with yourself for your actions only - but never for your thoughts or desires.
If other people won't accept them when and if you feel confident or trusting enough to share them - that's their problem, and says something about them, not you. And, if you really feel that your kinks are something others really wouldn't understand or accept - you don't have to share them, but never, ever feel compelled to feel bad about them. Lying to others is a survival tool; lying to yourself is useless, and will only help build the spiral of self-hate.