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Wow. Lots of emotionally heavy stuff.
...which is, oddly enough, what I come to this story for now, since the emphasis on 'hyper' is a bit off-putting for me.
finally.
I'm actually invested on how this is going to end, so invested that there's actually no arousal at this point.
Will the world end? Or will Pascal? Or maybe something in between?
Can't wait to find out.
Damn... This whole thing started off as a slightly morally questionable smut piece, and suddenly I'm hanging onto every freakin' word, even when there isn't any actual smut.
Not that you really go long without throwing something lewd in there, but I think my point stands.
I think.
Looking forward to the end!
I felt this theme was appropriate for Pascal normal speech. I kinda wish he was taking his squad with him. Maybe Derpy can spontaneously show up, hopefully. Again, could've done without the detailed gay bits but all-in-all this was a great and surprisingly emotional chapter. I cannot wait for this confrontation.
I hope that if things all work out for Pascal in the end, that he and Trixie and Derpy can be in a happy relationship together, help Spitfire and the Wonderbolts and make sure Moondancer gets to go out and have some fun with friends
Lydia could have been set up sooo oscenely if Pascal had been thinking even slightly differently.
After this party, everyones going to Joes for a donut serving? Will any of the ladies in question decide to do a comparison of other food suppliers, stallions in general, or anyone different at all?
Will any of them, maybe Fancy Pants, realise that th home help also are worthy of being treated to pleasure?
Pascal might have the meal, and the tux, and the escort, but is he going to face The Boss without freinds?
The greatest line used though Orange Is the New Black. Change is the New Normal. Because if you attempt to keep things Unchanging, they decay, so therefore Change, in teh way you dont want them to.
As The Red Queen said, you have to run as fast as you can, just to remain still. Of course she also said Off With His Head, and Pascal there is hoping she meant drop the pants first.
dis sheets gon b gud :D
While I'm looking forward to the way this ends, I really hope that - as clever as this story has been - it doesn't close it off with a "revelation" of the "hurrdurr hoomans evil" kind, without any sort of nuance or mitigating circumstance. I mean, hey, I'm fine with humans being the villains in a story in principle, but that would be rather disappointingly bog standard from a story that seems to go out of its way to circumvent tired tropes, of which "humans are evil" is a big one for horsefiction.
Is anyone else getting the sense that Celestia was raped by a human? It would certainly explain a lot.
20,000 WORDS
TWENTY FUCKING THOUSAND WORDS
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it's not even the first chapter that's this long
Yesssss! Sooo good to see a new chapter of this! I read it all the way though! Very nice! Sad that the three girls he gathered up didn't go with him BUT The next chapter! I can hardly wait, I want to know why this is happening, I need to know the history dang it!
Damn. Heavy tension, followed immediately by Pascal nearly giving in to gay stuff, only to shift into feels. The contrast was exquisite. And now the big reveal in neigh. Hopefully the story can go on to further explore some of these fetishes.
And so, it finally comes down to this.
You know something? I thought for a moment that this was going to be some kind of perverted parody of the Season 1 opener. But instead of Twilight Sparkle and the Elements of Harmony being the heroes, you have Pascal and the Normal Perversion Squad. I was thinking the Element counterparts in Pascal's harem would be like this:
Twilight Sparkle -> Trixie Lulamoon
Applejack -> Moondancer
Rainbow Dash -> Spitfire
Rarity -> Octavia
Pinkie Pie -> Lyra Heartstrings
Fluttershy -> Derpy Hooves
Spike -> Pascal
Or something like that.
I was even thinking that the reason Celestia tried to impose a restriction on sex the humans from the past oversexualized her and created
"Molestia." She somehow managed to suppress that side of herself by restricting sex, but now is afraid that Pascal's presence/changes is weakening the seal. Finally, during the meeting, the seal will break, releasing Molestia. So Pascal and the NPS would have to unite with the power of "Friendship with Benefits" to defeat Prncess Molestia.
I'm not sure how that would go, but a guy can dream, right?
Okay, two things stand out to me.
Pascal came face to face with several instances where he screwed up, like with Lyrica. Not fun, is it? But it's a learning experience. Learn from it.
Secondly, the papers have hated Blueblood the entire time ever since the Gala where he met Rarity? That was before Twilight's ascension. Just think about that, that one night ruined his reputation to the point where nopony ever says anything nice about him anymore and he regularly locks himself in, away from the crowd, to cry—even during his own parties.
Somepony should tell Celestia. Her nephew either needs a friend, or therapy, or both. That's not okay. Honestly, I think Rarity would be among the first to agree that somepony needs to do something to help him by now.
This is the first philosophical clop fic I have read, and made me oddly wanting more.
Another amazing chapter. Things are gonna get good soon, no doubt.:D
Pretty much what Tatsurou said. Hyper endowment of any kind is not my thing, and with the full knowledge it's not really meant to be, I can rarely take it seriously...
...and yet here we are, in one of those fetish-laden clopfics where that aspect reigns supreme, and I could not imagine it very differently. It's been incorporated into nearly every facet of the tale, especially since the improv fashion show, and you know what?
I'm taking it...well, as seriously as unrealistic fetishes can be taken. Perhaps it's because there's so much more going on than immense racks, but to my surprise, I'm even enjoying those for a change. In short, cannot wait for the next chapter!
7636314 hey, we all need a bit of variety. If you usually can't stand it, but are enjoying it here, then go for it! Be different than your normal!
7634954 And they aren't even all about fucking.
I kind of wonder... when you started this, did you plan on making it so long?
And did you expect how popular this would be?
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maybe and maybe
i knew the climax was going to be the confrontation with celestia and the revelations therein, because you need to know what you're building up to if you want your inciting incident to mean anything. since this was going to be a general harem clopfic, i knew i wanted to cover a lot of partners and a lot of sex acts. i also knew that i wanted the story to be a real-time experience from purely pascal's perspective, without too many time skips. when the first few chapters were done i got a sense of the whole story taking place across three distinct days. but i didn't know ahead of time how much detail would be in all those days. the rest i knew would come from letting the characters bounce off each other and seeing what twists and turns that generated
i knew i'd be at this for a little while, is what i'm saying. or i'd likely burn out before i got to the end. no one 'plans' to be writing a clopfic for over a year, though. the devil in the details ran away with it
as for popularity, at the start i guessed based off other anthro clopfics that this would get a decent turnout from the juvenile-at-heart hetero crowd but would basically be shunned as hyper bullshit by everyone else. and i was fine with that, that's what i was making after all. but now there are over 1000 total likes/dislikes, about 90% positive, and several clop artists and writers i admire tell me they like it. no one writes a clopfic and 'expects' that kind of response either
7634101 Same here, I was just curious about the "Normal" power.
I lol'd. I lol'd so hard
This chapter, wow. Singularly, it is amazing. As the end of this great journey and transition into the climax, it is an utterly exquisite emotional trip
I cannot believe just how deep this story has gone, and how bloody invested I am! Seriously, I've said it before, but I'll say it again and mean it every but as much: this stopped being just a smut story a long time ago.
I cannot wait to see how all this turns out! I eagerly await the likely feel-train to crash into my heart while I wax philosophical with Pascal
P.S. Still some eensy-teensy grammar/spelling goofs I saw, inconsequential really, but present
7670961 this is my poker face i.makeagif.com/media/6-04-2015/u9FiaB.gif
Love it
This chapter was so awesome &sweet it really touches your heart. I loved it.
Finally, the moment is getting starting!
Stop #1.) Correcting some "misinformed" beliefs.
Man, this guy should become a Green Lantern after today.
The Green Lantern of Pervertion.
Man, I can just imagine some heavy bass, almost ominous music building up around now, like dark clouds gathering, ready to release a storm.
Hear the heavy pounding of drums and the cumming of Angels above, lightning crackling against the barrier or Normality and Not as he fights with the green-will of a god.
Wow, talk about making sereping changes, he's going right for the throat here~
MOMENT OF TRUUUUUUTH!!!
And here we have it - the ultimate truth of sexuality. If you didn't know how these things go, you might be suprised to find such an insightful gem in a fanfiction*.
Well, now you know better. The truth of the world belongs to the homeless, the hungry, the tired, and the disenfranchised. In the words of a song I particularly enjoy:
This is the long and the short of it. All of the taboos, all of the weird fetishes and so on... Apart from things which are rightfully illegal, the only thing that remains at the end of the night is: does this arouse me?
* though is this fanfiction, still? I'd carefully say "no", at this point - the point of the story is different, the theme doesn't fit MLP, the characters behave differently... This is no longer MLP:FiM at its core, it's original fiction reusing some known characters. And I, for one, am perfectly okay with that.
By far one of my all time favorite chapters in ANY story.
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(always has been meme)
I mean, it's called "Universal Acceptance" for a reason.