Just some Touhou Brony who's become obsessed with Foxes and who wants to see you smile!
So, we've all heard of the displaced right? People who are usually cosplaying as characters while at a convention, who then are sent to Equstria by a creepy merchant who sells them something for free that matches with their cosplay? Turned into his/her cosplay powers and all? Yeah I'm one of them. This is my story. NOT THE STORY OF A HYDRA DANG IT!
Okami and MLP belongs to their respected owners.
A displaced story.
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This is VERY interesting I wanna see more soon
well....this is interesting...
Great chapter
...i thought this was solved way to fast
6350567 I kinda agree, it sort of just happened sorry.
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6351023 l also apolagise, but it's salvageable. she was cut off from any help alone with two darkness users. She could have just been playing along and setting a trap or maybe she is giving him a chance but something horrible will happen at the meeting.
more please!
Okay, I want this to be a good story, so I am going to give you the best advice I can at the moment. Please try and read your own story before posting it. There's a pure comedy Okami, and an actual Amaterasu no Ōkami, so I kind of want Orochi to play straight man to the comedians, and jokester to Ammy. Granted, differing plans and writing styles may clash, but that's the fun of the Displaced, truth be told.
Your title reads - Eight heads are better then one
It should be - Eight heads are better than one
6378532 Fixed. Thank you for pointing that out.
i like this
more plz
6434460 Have technical difficulties with the writing, hopefully It'll be fixed soon.
The thing I love most about multi headed characters is somtimes the different heads will do there own thing. Keep doing that, i find it very amusing!
more plz
More please
Aaaaaaaand hiatussed.
Damnit.
6726407 Sorry
thanks for the update!
yep thanks for the update.
It's alive
6727466 And it will stay that way, just with a few comas now and again. Sorry for the wait.
this isn't even my final form!
more please!
MOOAAAAAAAAAR PLEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ cuz you doing really well
HEY GET BACK TO WRITING CHARTERS FOR THIS STORY I'AM LOVING IT SO FAR!!! NOW NOW NOW MORE MORE MORE!!!
7214509 Whelp, something happened to m new editor. Don't worry, I a little less half way done. Had to rewrite because my sister thought it would be funny to delete the chapter I had on Google docs...........
Oh
7223195 X'D
Sorry when i really like a story i get impatient and keep checking everyday to see if its been up dated
7226553 We're all like that at that point.
7221968 wow that is a really dick move so glad i let no one touch my stuff
i have had trash stuffed every thing that is mine when i let other near anything i own
Yay very enjoyable. Loving it.
are you still working on this?
If so, you can take it off hiatus, but if you go on vacation, then it should become on hiatus again.
Great story I hope you will continue it
There is one huge problem with this chapter, you solved your conflict way too fast and you had another Displaced do it for you, this is disappointing as you had the opportunity to gain Celestia and Lunas trust through earning it and you could have advanced your character, but by getting another displaced to do it that oppertunity is lost with what could have been a really good build up to getting them to trust you by earning it.
Trust isn't simply given, Trust is earned and this action of your Orochi has gotten me to dislike him rather than like it, Trust is given to him on a silver platter and that doesn't bode well in a story.
Please Don't make any more mistakes like this in your story for future chapters.
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Same, it was solved way too fast and lost perfectly good opportunity's to earn trust and have a good character build up.
It was solved way too fast
So you turned into ponies, this is supposed to be an Orochi displaced not turning an awesome Okami displaced into ponies of all things ((thou Im super glad you didn't turn him human (yuck)))
Surely you could have had Orochi find a way to shrink somewhat or hell even turn into a species thats more relevent to Orochi, like a dragon rather than a pony.
PLEASE don't stay as a pony for the majority of the fanfiction only when he actually needs too.
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Perhaps this also needs a full rewrite. After I finish "Yep, Totally Normal", that is.
Anyway, thank you for the feedback I really appreciate it.
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Tell me when you do.
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is waiting 'im'patiently for said rewrite or an update
Wait wait wait.....HYDRA!? Lats time i heard that name its was an "Yamata no Orochi" from Okami 0o
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I miss this fic...