Twilight is in a room. There is a golden hammer and a cup of water. She must choose between the two.
By the end of this test, an unlikely lesson will be learned.
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Jarvy Jared
A writer and musician trying to be decent at both things. Here, you'll find some of my attempts at storytelling!
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Do you even watch the show? Because I don't think you do
6229571 My mistake! Going to fix that...
Luna let out a relieved breath. “You disguised myself as my sister.”
should that really be like that? id say "yourself" fits a bit better.
6239986 Fixed!
Huh, I can't believe I never thought of that. I always over complicate and over think everything.
Wow, this was a deep slice of life story which doesn't need to be overly dramatic. Your writing skills are amazing
6244917 Thank you very much for your feedback!
6245514 I loved how you described each choice and the possible outcome of that choice. Your a great writer
Well, this actually teaches quite a deep lesson:
And you even managed to include a bit of comedy in it. All in all, that was a good short story.
I am legitimately questioning myself why this hasn't had any more heat than what it already has, this has been thoroughly enjoyable and completely believable, it should have more likes than that.
I decided to review it this here would be my first reveiw have so he link
You really have to share this story to a lot of people. It's a very well-thought out and original story, touching upon the character dynamic of the most powerful characters in Equestria!
That's something very difficult to do.
Eh, I thought the answer was literally going to be "one." After all, the instructions were "Choose one."
Good read for sure. I know I definitely overthink matters much like this.
Well written, with a nice lesson too. I much enjoyed reading. Please, continue to write stories as good as this one, it's very admirable. :)
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Wow, honestly did not expect someone to pick this story up this many years after its initial release - and to like it, to boot. But thank you! I hope you enjoy its sequel, and the other short stories I've published here. I've gotten a little better over time, I think.
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I will be sure to check out your other stories too, as well as read the sequel. :]
Nice story! I like smart Discord.