This is a Kingdoms Of Amalur crossover.
When the Fateless One is thrown into Equestria with nary a clue as to how he got there in the first place, he has to find what happened, and sets out to do so.
Equestria doesn't like dealing with things violently and murder is nonexistent, the Fateless One lives, thrives and requires violence to survive and earn his keep.
He needs to get back... or does he? will he want (or be convinced) to stay and learn the values of friendship and can he even make friends with these ponies? only time will tell... and the Fateless One has eternity to wait... do you?
(credit to NyxKnight for image & wIll contain romance between human and pony and possible clop in future chapters, they will be marked)
Chapters (10)
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ok...i like it but you may want to take out a few of the tags that way people get a better feel for the story and are turned off by a lot of tags...like keep the crossover, adventure, and maybe ether human or romance tags. it reads well so ill give you that. also if you want more people to see this put it in a lot of groups that go with the story...i took the liberty to put this in a few of them.
also take this out of the long description: Those who dislike: why? tell me how to improve! don't just go 'I don't like it' give me constructive criticism. and put in the anthers note of the first chapter
Also you may want to put in the long description that its a kingdoms of amalur crossover cause by what you have now no one will guess that it is one.
but otherwise i like it so keep it up
Noice like it
i love it can't wait for the next chapter
I see where this is going for the protagonist. I find the fact that the princesses not trying for romance A couple times to be unbelievable, but her for a partner longing is. Keep up the good work!
I like this story! The few stories I find that I like do not continue. So keep the good work up!
Wonderful work lad!
wow i stand in the authors note
haha
again a great chapter
this is great can't wait for the next chapter
keep up the good work
and a good one again
Well thanks to this story i relized i passed up a great game and now i dont have the money to get it
We all know that ponies are hypocrits i think in the next chapter somepony is going to do something stupid
Sorry about being on Hiatus for a while, but we will continue with this story soon!
Cool its back
you know you and this story are the only reason i bought kingdom of armulur so thanks for making me buy it ive loved it lol didnt even start the 2nd main mission until i was already lvl 35
still getting better
hmm, I do like the game, but the direction this story goes in is unclear, grammar and spelling are good enough that I do not notice anything out of place. Characters seem very flat and two dimensional and have no sense of self-preservation why would Celestia and luna give up their magic just like that it was very foolish, I can not tell if they are anthro or not but how they interact with each other suggests it as so but at other times suggests that they are not, they also seem to be very accepting of 'the fateless one'
but as this is the only K.O.A story I can find thus far, I give it my personal rating of a 6/10, I like the idea and the main character himself but the driving factor for the story is all over the place, events are not defined out enough to make sense of what is going on.
anything?
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I'm... Not in a good place right now. I don't know if I'll be writing here at all for a while.
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thats too bad you are the ones who got me to like this game i hope you get better and if you want to talk about it the fandom or just me could try to help