If Spike and Rarity ever got together, how would it work? Read to find out.
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no. come oooon. don't do it. I can make it. i can ma-
dammit....
BAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW
I'll admit it. I cried a bit. At least he can be with her, with all of them forever.
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No words from me, only tears.
It was... I have no words for it. Beautiful to the entire extent, from the beginning to the end beautiful a good reminder of what true love really means. Despite I am a little sad how it ended it was still something good to read. Good job.
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I don't care how many SpikexRarity stories there are. There is always room for another good one such as this one.
A thousand years without your one love! Think about it. Then, taking nothing away from this story, think of Celestia and Luna.
621063 You write trollfics and you troll people about their choice of writing. Makes sense.
621393 Original sure, wanted not so much but by a few sure. On the other hand telling people what they should write is equal to me telling you not to write troll fics cause theirs tons of um on the site already and their all waste of time and you should write something worth reading blah blah blah. Let people write what they want simple really, I honestly don't enjoy troll fics but I don't tell you to try writing a non troll-fic either cause theirs already 5000 of those.
621470 Simple it annoys me. Which probably falls in the win category for you notably. This fic has probably made my day as far as readings gonna go and if he had decided not to write because he was afraid he was being unoriginal that would of massively sucked. Criticism is what you think of the story's content, how its written, and what could make it better. It is not a complaint that the pairing is unoriginal and something else would have been better. I find the whole statement extremely rude.
Loved this fic, really love this pairing and you did it justice. Loved seeing the bits and pieces of their marriage, when Rarity became pregnant and her death. Really a beautiful ended and great story. At the end I was crying. Going in my favs and thumbs up.
Manly tears...have been shed on this day.
This was so sad
what a
good story
but im not going to shed a tear for this story
Awww poor Spike.
621668
Then don't reply.
This is a beutiful story 15/10. Im not going to lie i cried at the end.
I always wondered if they got married or not. Well now I know. Good story by the way. Keep up the good work.
Goddamn you! I KNEW I SHOULD HAVE BROUGHT TISSUES!
THAT WAS SO BUCKING BEAUTIFUL.
You sir! I have not cried this hard since my dog died. D'X
It was cool, until those crazy dragon-ponies started taking over the world.
MY HEADCANON IS VERIFIED!
You're missing the magic e's in "Spikey Wikey".
Are these slackens anywhere near immortal
>> this can bring a grown man to tears
But not this man
Get back in there tear.
...
Perfect
Funny that we will have to go through this at one point in our lives, I can already see it. Think of you a father on your deathbed and your children all grown up being there for you as your passing away but you can see your loved one who passed away reaching out for you so the both of you can start another life together in another world.
Call me crazy, but I always hear the voice of that old dragon from The Legend of Spyro games whenever Dying Spike speaks.
hmmm, down-votes? Seems some friends missed the like button.
Cool! It all makes sense now! THAT'S where the clan comes from! :D
WELL.
...
WAY TO ALMOST MAKE ME CRY.