After a mishap with a new spell, Twilight Sparkle finds herself in a new, unfamaliar place with no magic and no idea how to get home.
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Awesome story, but.....
WALL OF TEXT 
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Do you mean poor grammar, or what?
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No it's now a big wall of text.
You need more space between certain parts in the story.
he means that you need to pres enter twice and then indent befor you write the next paragraph so that you have more space between paragraphs
This story is good, I'll be watching this.
A tad fast, but I'll gladly watch it. Wonder how long until she sees the TV show XD
You'll need to fix the title love ^^ you have the N and M in development backwards. Also you don't need the E after P. If you'd like I'd gladly proofread for ya.
FIX THE TITLE OR I WILL GIVE YOU SUCH A PINCH
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Thanks for bringing that to my attention. Anyway, if you're willing to proofread and it wouldn't be any trouble, I would appreciate such kindness.
Is john's surename perhaps Green
?
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????
Uh, no. It's actually Rickard.
Just out of curiousity, who is John Green?
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Award winning novelist, he does a REALLY popular history series on youtube with alot of jokes, puns and references
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I will have to check that out. Thanks.
Saw grilled cheese sandwiches and tomato soup. Remembered it from a previous novel i read. Now my wall has a hole in it.
very good so far and i like it a lot so keep up the good work
Just humming nothing else matters - metallica over here don't mind me. Good shit. The story and the song.
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Couldn't be much more from the heart
Forever trusting who we are
And nothing else matters.
I could sing this five-ever but here's a youtube link.
okay what.
WAT.
D... Did i miss a chapter? Nope i didn't.
That escalated quickly...
well something is going to happen
This is kinda how I expect it to go down.
FYI quotes ALWAYS have the comma on the "inside," not the "outside",
this is so comfusing i didnt think that they were going to get married is so confusing
Darn Cliffhangers! I tood them to have thier bags close so nothing would fall out of them.
Yay.)
( And now a word from Fluttershy.
i really hope he becomes a unicorn, he teached twilight how to drive, i think she deserves to teach him magic^^
but anyways, keep it up, awesome story, and don't you dare Tag it complete...
mfg Nordic
Spike and Rarity?
Well it's your story, anyway.
I'm still eager for the next chapter, so soldier on!
John actually becomes a world renown scooter rider and tours equestria under the name of Scootaloo Pastrana.
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XD My story will actually go a way that is slightly different than that, but if you want to make a spin-off story with that, you have my full permission.
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When Equestria is in ruins, I have your permission to write a spin off series of Twilights Other Worldly Misadventure. Well now the titles just misleading since Twilights back in Equestria...
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Yes, I was unable to find a suitable place in the story to make it clear that it takes place several years after the current point in time (I'm hoping that I can do so in the coming chapter). Sparity has always had a special place in my heart. If you're interested, go read "The Dragon and the Pony" (my second story on this site) and you may get a feel and a better understanding of my personal feelings and theories surrounding the shipping.
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I was going to post this in Chapter 10, but that didn't really go over due to lack of tools to work with. Anyway, this is somewhat how I imagine John would look.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7lnm00zmel4l2rt/John%20OC.png
I'ts pretty good but I wonder... with Twi now back in human form.... what about the child... will it be a foal now?
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OF COURSE NOT! it will be human
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X-ray vision would be better
In my opinion this would be the perfect place to say this book is ended and continue with a whole series... although it might be fun to have it all in one book... please continue the good work sir.
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i think that this chapter was the best there was
I liked it. Though I think it's kinda short. Hope you write more stories in the future.
Finished... Now you just need Oprah's stamp of approval.
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Indeed, I hope he does.
I can see this becoming a large series... can't wait for the second installment, well, if there is one.
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Sorry, I'm afraid that's it. I am currently planning a relatable story, but the two will be completely unassociated with one another.
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one word to that: crummy. It was a nice story while it lasted, only wish you would continue it fully in a series. Well, see you around I guess...
Mercilessly rushing the plot at ludicrous speeds? Check.
nice story
Nice story. Only problem with it was the annoying way you start the majority of the sentences in the first part with. "He said/questioned/etc"\
Other than that the story is rather interesting.
Pretty sweet. A little rushed in the middle, but I suppose that's what happens when love intervenes
Great job~ 
I think this should be a audio drama series on YouTube!