• Member Since 5th May, 2012
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Fuliam


My name is Fuliam, I like ponies and writing fanfiction, so ya. That's about it.

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There isn't much love can't do, but it can't give you a right choice when you're torn between two loves.
A love of a young dragon, or a love of your friends and family, which will Rarity choose?

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Comments ( 30 )

That was great. I would have preferred if it was a multi-chapter, and wasn't told in past tense. Obviously that wasn't what you were going for though, so whatever :rainbowwild:
Either way, you pulled it off quite well and I liked it all the same.

I love it, instant like

thanks, i needed to cry a little:pinkiesad2:

This was truly great. Awesome job!

First of all, I love the Sparity aspect. Second of all, this was fantastic. Third of all, this had a very nice ending that I loved. Great job!

Beatiful, as simple as that.

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It was very well written and I found it easy to connect with Rarity's feelings so well done.

Aw. So sweet.

Thanks for all the wonderful compliments.

Im crying :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

Why not make a ending where everone is happy. Spike could take the old cave where the red dragon was.

Why just why did you make me cry. :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

Still awesome story.

Doble edge wepon indeed. Kinda rush but overall a very sweet and lovely story.
Nice job. :twilightsmile:

A beautiful story so well done:raritywink:

As a proud Sparity supporter, I thought this story was very very sweet. :twilightsmile:

Excellent job. :raritywink:

I really enjoyed it.

Short, but beautifully written.

When I finally got to opening this (been sitting in my Read It Later list for while, due to other things), had expected it to be something with Ponyville looking down on Rarity and Spike's relationship, namely cause of him being too young or the differences in their species, but wow, was I blown away! Such a short but sad story, but flowed so wonderfully and was well-written. :fluttershysad: And I kinda expected Rarity to go with Spike, even if it would be the end of her friendships with the other Elements of Harmony bearers. Anyway, nice job! Faved with extreme enjoyment! :heart:

About half way through I had to leave the room because my family was there too and I could feel the [sad] tag coming into play. That was a very good decision on my part, and a very good story on your part.
:heart::raritycry:

A brilliant story marred by one question...after Spike gets so big do they ever have sex and how?

1209502
Of course you would ask that... haven't you ever seen rule 34 of little fairies, if not look it up, same concept.

1209562 THANKS! THAT REALLY HELPED!

1209602
Very welcome!

- Simple and beautiful.

Lovely read. This has aged well.

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